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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 5:16pm | IP Logged
oh god shilpi what can i say, i'm speechless. that was such a beautiful love story, their love for eachother the intensity, was just superbly written. loved it loved it loved it!!! thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 6:47pm | IP Logged

" Ev'ry time I tried to tell you ,The words just came out wrong ,So I'll have to say I love you in a song

Oh I have to say I love you In a song"

and what a song and what a story ,,awesome writeup ,,enjoyed reading it ,,could imagine handsome Dutta in his uniform  and
Nakku assertive , persistent , confident of Her Eternal love and His .
Thanks
Raj
 
 

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:26pm | IP Logged
Just WOW is the word, ShilpitaSmile. Dutta will continue to live in our heart forever.


Life had a different meaning until you came along
Dutta, my love for you will remain lifelong
Can't wait until the next time we meet
Because only together are we complete

Guys please don't laugh at my creative attemptEmbarrassed
Because I amLOL

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  superbbb  tasha  story  yaar...
really  touchy...i  loved  it...

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 4:38am | IP Logged
Hey Shilpitha,

Really Fantastic story of tasha .  Naku was superb . Intensity of her love and her innocence and confidence is really heart touching .

Dutta is as usual , same old Dutta , feeling depressed when he did n't get any job , losing confidence on himself and as usual our naku guidng him .

Her waiting is awesome . Sea really not that good all times , SOme times it takes away the lives won''t return but here in this case it was good returning naku['s dutta to her by realising dutta only belongs to naku .

Fantastic story .

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
Wonderful Sunday treat.
Will come back later with comments.Smile

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:11am | IP Logged
very well written ..loved it ..
and song is great ..reminds me of good old LS days ..mishal singing with a guitar ..wow ..amazing work

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged

Yet again a nice story from u dear,ClapClap

 me love the way how u put ur thoughts in to writing,Embarrassed
 and this time with a song, wow !!! superb !!!Clap

Loved it enjoyed it !!Embarrassed

Thanks shilpi for the wonderful SS

Looking forward to read more from uWinkBig smile

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