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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #22

 
 
 
next day..

[at breakfast table]

Karan, Inder n Guddu sitting...cookie n goldy rush in...on Guddu...

Guddu: arrreyyy...aankhen di hai, nai di bhagwan ne... 😑😑😑

Karan: aur kya..?? teen raaton se pareshan kar rakkha hai mujhe, in naalayakon ne... 😑😑😑

Cookie: aj chouthi raat hogi, daddy... 😈

Karan: arey nai nai beta..😭😭..main toh yun hi gappe kar raha tha...arey, Guddu...mere bachhe toh itne laayak hain..baaki bachhe dusron ki gadi ke tyres puncture karte hain...mere bachhe toh meri hi gadi ke tyre puncture karte hain...

Goldy: wo apni english ki nakchadi teacher bolti hai- "charity begins at home"...toh aap mechanic ko bulate ho...hui na, charity at home..!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Guddu: par karan bhaiya, ek baat toh hai...bohot bright future hai in dono ka... πŸ˜†

Runjhun comes with plates...

Payal buttering the slices...

Guddu: by the way, aj khaane mein kya bana hai??

Cookie: jootey.. 😑

Guddu: kya??

Cookie: paav...bread, in english... ...humein bhagwan ne aakhen di hai...😑😑

Payal comes n slaps her... with her buttery palm...

Payal: yeh tareeka hota hai baat karne ka..?? 😑😑

Cookie takes a piece of bread...wipes her cheek... 🀒

Cookie: yeh tareeka hota hai maarne ka..?? 😑😑

...n starts eating it... 🀒🀒

Every1 makes a yuckie🀒 face at her...she leaves...Goldy also takes a slice n leaves...

Payal: badtameez kahin ke...!! 😑

Guddu: jaane do, na...bhabhi...bachhe hain...

All of them start eating...

[Afternoon]

Guddu pareshan...Runjhun not speaking to him...

Guddu: hey bhagwan, koi toh aisa ho jo meri madad kare...m getting so damn pissed..!!

Guddu thinks n thinks...n gets an idea...

Next scene...on terace...Guddu, Goldy n Cookie...

Goldy: jaldi bolo...time nai hai...

Guddu: mujhe madad chahiye...

Goldy: guddu chachu, hum koi gair-kanooni kaam nai karenge...pehle hi bol rahe hain... πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Guddu: mujhe Runjhun ko manaana hai...

Cookie: poori baat batao...tab sochenge... 😎

Guddu tells them...

Cookie: bus itni si baat??...chill...main plan batati hun...

She tells a plan...

Guddu: itna risk?? Ek kaam karunga...pehle kood jaunga, phir zinda bacha, toh bol dunga..!! 😳😳😳

Cookie: aur nai bacha toh, bhoot banke idhar ghar mein ghoomega..!! Nahi baba nahi...pehle bolne ka, phir koodne ka... 😲😲😲

Guddu: it will work, na?? 😲😲

Cookie: (in munnabhai type tone) are-e...mamu...tension nai lene ka!! 😎

Guddu: mamu..?? Par abhi abhi toh chachu bulaye the, na mujhe..?? πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Cookie: yeh kitna pakata hai...bhagwaan... Runjhun chachi ka toh patience ka board exam liya rahega..!! 😑😑😑

Guddu: okay fine...ab aur nai pakaaunga... Tum log jaake sab arrangements karo... I would reherse my scenes..!! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #23

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[evening]

every1 out for the ancestral temple...except Guddu n Runjhun..(cookie, goldy n bebey also)

Runjhun reading a novel...suddenly hears a music playing upstairs...

[BG:

Ruth naa jana, tumse kahun to..

Main in aankhon mein jo rahun to..] 😳😳

A happy Runjhun climbs up stairs...to the terace...rose petals on floor...she looks up...Guddu standing on railing... 😲

The song is still goin on... ❀️

Guddu: I Love You Runjhun... ❀️

Runjhun (to herself) i waited for this moment for ages together... 😍

(to Guddu) thank u... 😳

N suddenly Guddu falls back...down the building...

Runjhun screams: GUDDUJI... 😲😲😲

Runjhun frightened runs towards the edge...looks down...shocked...then frowns like anything... 😑😑😑😑

Guddu lay on a bungee kinda thing...winking at her... πŸ˜‰

πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
Runjhun (smiles): i hate you..!! 😳😳

Then turns back n laughs...Guddu comes up...both stand close to each other...

Suddenly, it thunders...

Runjhun scared...hugs Guddu (1st time in my FF)... ❀️

Guddu: hmm...toh, do u love me?? 😳

Runjhun steps back : ek ladki apna poora family chhod ke aapke saath yahan bhaag ke aa gayi, aap neeche koode toh she got worried, a girl hugged u when heard thunder...abhi bhi batana padega??...u dont understand?? 😑😑😑

Guddu: i understood something but not sure whether its true... 😳

Runjhun (blushes): its true..!! ☺️

Guddu: so, u admit, that u are "darrpok" ...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Runjhun: darrpok??? 😑

Guddu: yeah...the three cases u mentioned...in the 1st one, u were scared of M & Ms...2nd one, u were scared of my separation...3rd one, u were scared of thunder...so, u are a darrpok...isn't it?? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Runjhun turns other side...Guddu goes near her n kisses (1st time in my FF) her on cheek... 😍

Runjhun looks at him...n kisses him on his cheek... ☺️

Bebey, goldy n cookie clap... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

 
 
 
 
 
...to be continued
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Posted: 12 years ago

Sanju...it was fab...Guddu ki to hawa hi nikal gayi...ye sherni kam thi jo ab plannners bhi ghus gayi hain...it was hilarious but where is kukkan ji...yaar uske liye bhi koi lao na...update soon😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum prts yaar
amazing ...
RJ ne toh guddu ki hawa nikaldi ...πŸ‘.
kids r hilarous yaar ...
updt sooon yaar ...
 
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sanjuu jaaan ...amazing prt ...πŸ‘
sooo cute yaar
faaab ...awwwesum ...simply luvd it ...
updt sooon plezzz
Edited by tehzeeb25 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesum prts yaar

amazing ...
RJ ne toh guddu ki hawa nikaldi ...πŸ‘.
kids r hilarous yaar ...
updt sooon yaar ...

 
hey, dont think i dont have any other work, okay...??? i mean, fine...lemme admit...i really dont have ne other work as of now...😳...hope u guys like this FF...
thnx...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sur001

Sanju...it was fab...Guddu ki to hawa hi nikal gayi...ye sherni kam thi jo ab plannners bhi ghus gayi hain...it was hilarious but where is kukkan ji...yaar uske liye bhi koi lao na...update soon😊

 
utna time nahi hai...i will be focussing on Gunjhun only...sorry...
but in case i happen to return...(m not dying..."return as active")...would go for a sequel...😳
thnx for liking...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
luved all the parts. the kids are so funny. so happy that Guddu confessed his love. update as soon as you can. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #24

 
 
 
Days pass by...Guddu starts studying...Runjhun & Inder help him up with his notes...Kukkan joins Mr. Raheja's business... It earns profit gradually...once in between (after 4-5months), Runjhun goes unwell...taken to doctor...who says she was pregnant...this time it was true...😳

Everyone was so happy...excited...wow...amma, rajju, MD, jhabbu bless n congratulate them (three of them...) ...😳😳

One day

Guddu stares at Runjhun's tummy...

Guddu: Runjhun, for how long are we gonna tell everyone that u are expecting...???😲

Runjhun: what do u mean, how long..?? So, what do we do...give it on newspapers or announce it on radio??

Guddu: look at your tummy...doesnt even look like having any liver etc...how can anyone believe that it has a baby inside..?? C'mon, its already passed two weeks...n your tummy hasn't started growing... πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

Runjhun bursts out laughing...🀣

Runjhun: two weeks...in two weeks u expect my tummy to become of my size...hahaha...arey, it takes at least 4-5 months (according to google...)..to get a belly...understood..!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Guddu gives a silly smile... πŸ€ͺ

He gives the crash course exam...very good result...n gets permanently appointed as exports manager... πŸ‘πŸ‘

9 months over... Runjhun full time on bed...Guddu serving her... 😳

Guddu: ab aur kitna time lagega???😲

Runjhun: some more days...πŸ˜†

Guddu: hey bhagwan...(stares at the tummy..😲)

Runjhun: dont stare at it like that...u are staring as if it will burst any moment n the kid would come out...

Guddu: m not a fool...i know, kids dont come out bursting their mom's tummies... My colleague was saying that in normal delivery, it pains a lot... 😭

Runjhun: yeah, thats alright...i wont go for surgery...m scared... 😭😭

Guddu: no u have to go for surgery...i cant bear u screaming...please...it would pain for me more than you... 😭😭

Runjhun: then what about the pains after surgery...i wont even be able to walk..!! 😭😭

Guddu: u dont have to walk...i'll do all your work, like i do now...main hoon na...i wont let u undergo even a li'l bit of pain...i promise... 😳😳

They hug each other... ❀️

😍
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #25

(the concluding chapter...)
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Runjhun taken to hospital...gets a baby girl...a sweet little angel...❀️(name...??..u guys suggest some name...with your love for Gunjhun's li'l princess)..😍
πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³πŸ₯³

normal delivery...πŸ˜‰

All the Rahejas assemble there to bless them... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Bebey: (to Runjhun) puttar, u know what..??..outside it looked as if your husband was delivering the baby...making "crying faces"..as many times you screamed... πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Guddu blushes... 😳

The nurse goes away...taking the baby to the maternity ward...

Guddu: bohut jiddi ho...u said u would go for a normal delivery..n you did it..!!

Runjhun smiles... πŸ˜ƒ

After distributing sweets to the whole hospital...Kukkan comes dancing...inside...

Kukkan: bhabhi, ive got some things for you... 🀑

Guddu: dimaag bech ke aya hai?? U'll give her sweets now..NO!! 😑😑

Kukkan: arey bhaiya sweet nahi...

he opens the door...

Guddu's mom, dad...Runjhun's amma, rajju mama, mahadevi & jhabbu reach there... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Everyone blesses them... πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Guddu: mom-dad, i have made up all my mistakes...m sorry...now i have become a good person...a responsible Guddu... 😭😭😭

Guddu's dad:...Shukla...mind it!! You are my son...so, mind it..!!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

They hug each other... πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
...and everyone lives happily, ever after!!😊
 
 
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thanx to everyone who read my updates...i sincerely apologise, if i have ever disappointed u guys through any of my updates...
 
thank you so much to everyone...😳😳
love you all...❀️
muah...πŸ€—
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice ending. awww Gunjhun had a baby.  will miss ur ff. thanks for sharing. πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘