FF: O re piya... - Page 11

Originally posted by: pri01

Nice updt Sanju (hope i can call u Sanju) thx u

Am still laughing about billo n kukkan - bechara kukkan

Sad for MD n just hate Jabbu

Looking forward for Gunjhun romance in delhi

Updt soon

Originally posted by: rshree1182

Nice FF dear...pls continue writing..

Originally posted by: sur001

🤣Haste haste pet me dard ho gaya...Ram aur Lakshman magar Meghnad (kukkan) Kaise Ramsena me ghus gaya...Sanju...I became fan of your comic timing...please update soon...🤣

CHAPTER #16

[In the bus]

Kukkan had already occupied a seat...

Guddu looks at Runjhun... 😳

Runjhun: i wanna sit alone.. 😉

Guddu: bus tumhare baap ka nahi hai.. 😡

A man in pink shirt: can i sit, ma'am..?? 😳😳

Runjhun: yeah sure..!! 😃😃

Guddu frowns...about to leave... 😡😡

Runjhun coughs... 😉

Guddu: (worried) want water..?? 😲

Runjhun: spill it on yourself, my cough will go... 😆

Guddu: huh?? 😕

Runjhun: aap jal rahe hai na..?? 😉😉

Guddu: (shouts) hum kannauj ke raja harshwardhan part 2 hain... ⭐️⭐️

Runjhun: terms and conditions apply... 😆😆

Guddu: mazak uda rahi ho?? 😡

Runjhun: wo bhi batana padega..?? 😳

Guddu: get lost... 😡

Guddu leaves...

The man in pink shirt: aapko get lost bolke, khud hi chala gaya..!! 😆😆

Guddu: o gulabbo😆, tujhe bola...chal phut... 😡

He kicks the man off...n sits...

The bus leaves...

Runjhun angry with Guddu...simply, bcoz she likes to get angry...so, even Guddu starts showing off...avoids RJ...

Runjhun feels sleepy...starts to doze...and keeps her head on Guddu's shoulder... 😍

Guddu stirs... 😳

[BG: jashne bahaara..of Jodhaa Akbar...❤️ ]

Kukkan loves them together...so, he is also happy... 😃

Suddenly kukkan's mobile rings...

Billo: aapki yaad aa rahi thi..toh humne Jhabbuwa ke cell phone se aapka number chura liya...

Kukkan: (out of his lovely Gunjhun scene) koun?? 😲

Billo: hum Billo hain... 😳

Kukkan feels helpless.. 🤢

Billo: waise hum abhi mobile centre ke saamne khade khade, family planning kar rahe the..."hum do, humare do"...hum apne bachcho ka naam kya rakhenge... 😳😳😳

Kukkan: (irritated) Bukkan aur Killo..!!😍 Khush..??(puzzled)...by the way, wat r u doin outside the shop?? 😡

Billo: i have stolen all my jewelleries n money...we'll elope today itself...

Kukkan: (giggles) tau, ive already eloped.. 😆😆

Billo: without me???...akele akele kaise elope, kukkan ji..?? 😭😭

Kukkan stops giggling...(thinks hard n says): do one thing...u stay at pandey niwas, for the time being...i m outa station for an urgent work...alr8?? 😕😕

Keeps the phone...

Kukkan: what do i do now..?? (tensed) yeh toh peechhe hi padh gayi...!! i will have to exchange this simcard... 😭😭

[Next morning]

Buntu & Vishnu's professions running into great loss... They search for Gunjhun but in vain...Jhabbu more angry at this... Mahadevi gets a discharge...but surprisingly to all, Rajju did not lose anything... M & Ms confused at this... 🤢🤢

[In MD's room]

Jhabbu shouting at mahadevi for spoiling his plans..

Jhabbu: bcoz of you i lost another chance of ruining runjhun's life...

Maha: she is my sis, remember that...u can be ungrateful to her but i love my sis n bro-in-law...so shut up..!! 😡

Jhabbu: she had slapped me...i can never forget that...she will have to pay for it... 😡

Maha gives a tight slap on his face...

Maha: now take a revenge on me too...what will u do..??..kill me??...i dont mind...bcoz i have been living like a dead ever since i met you...you have spoilt my life...i know you dont love me...nor will you ever do...but I lost my child bcoz of you...realise that, Jhabbu... 😭😭😭

Jhabbu stands quite..

Maha: you said you love your guddu bhaiya...isnt it?? This is how u love him...u wanna destroy his life, his wife..?? Girte girte itne gir gaye aap..??? 😡😡

This line goes round Jhabbu's head n he gets flashbacks of Guddu pampering him, hugging him...Runjhun bringing food for him...smiling with him...worried for him when she hears that he was sick... 😒😒

Jhabbu: today, i realise why bhaiya preferred Kukkan over me...bcoz i m not worthy of it...kukkan deserved it...i never understood bhaiya-bhabhi...i m sorry...(weeps)...this time it was real...he had actually realised his mistakes... 😭😭

Jhabbu: i will never be able to get bhaiya's love back...but would keep his dignity alive...by running his mobile centre successfully... 😳

On the other hand, Rajju Pandey calls Gunjhun...they reached delhi...rajju gave them the address...

They reach the house...Guddu rings the bell, an old lady comes n hits him hard with her walking stick, right over his shoulder,

[PRECAP: house on rent...owners of the house complete namunas...😆]

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

sanju yaaar

awwwesum prt yaar ...

amazing ...

hilarious...

gunjun fight was just tooo cute ...

precap looks gr888

updt sooon plezzz