Bhagonwali - Baante Apni Taqdeer

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju...you rock yaar...
kya superfast update...
loved your Gunjhun...so sweet...
Update soon yaar...muah... really cute update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great job! ⭐️ Really sweet story, hope you continue soon!
I can actually see Ch. 3 with Mahadevi's pregnancy being confused as Runjhun's pregnancy, and Guddu not demanding a medical test unlike Abhigyan, happening in the show in some version.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story. good that Guddu didn't misunderstand Runjhun. update as soon as you can. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thnx guys...muah...😃

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CHAPTER #5
 
G: now why did u start crying...???
R: just got reminded of sumthing...
G: n will u tell me anything about this lie...???
R: (in mind...) should i tell him about MD...??? no, no, what if he punishes jhabbu badly n d ppl get 2 knw about this...oh mahadevi...what have u done...(goes upset...)
(to guddu) umm... it was just a misunderstanding... ill tell everything 2 amma 2moro...its quite late now..!!!
G: hmmm...do that...!
 
[morning]
amma speaking on phone: haan...i m really pleasd 2 hear that...yeah...that will b a real pleasant surprize 4 them...bye bye...😛
R: who was it amma...???
Amma: umm...a friend of mine, bitiya...(smiles)
R: (in mind) m sure she's concealing something from me...!!!🤔
Amma: achha bitiya, maine mannat mangi thi..(her favr8 hobby, u know..😉)...when, evreything goes well...u n guddu would seek blessings from Ramji at the temple...😊
R: okay amma...
G: what "okay.."..??
R: oh sorry amma... he doesnt like visiting such places...he wont come...i would go alone...😉
Amma: no issues...go alone...thats fine...😉😉
G: arrey...when did i say, i wont come..???😕
R: so, when did u even say that u would come..??
G: (😲) amma see...how she speaks 2 me...thats not fair at all...pati ko toh parameshwar maana jata hai...n look at her...??
R: achha, toh patni ko bhi ardhangini maana jata hai...do u ever consult me before drinking...??
G: (boldly) usme kya hai...dharmaraj yudhishtir also used 2 drink n play gamble...😎
R: (even more boldly) toh draupadi also had 5 husbands...😎😎
G: (😲😲😲) what..??? what do u mean...??
R: () ummm...
Amma: (pissed) guddu beta, mandir jaaoge..???😭😭
G: exactly, ppl should ask this way...now if u insist AMMA... i wont say no...!!!😃
 
[at vishnu pandeys room..]
mittho: aye haaye, only 2 days 2 go...4 the challenge 2 get over...we hav 2 do something quick...!!
Vishnu: i have an idea...n a trump card...
Kalsanwali: abe-e...what wil u do wid a card...???.. gudduwa ki draupadi kaunsi daaon pe lagi hai, jo yudhishtir ko gambling me hara doge...???
Vishnu: gudduwa yudhistir nahi ram hai, ram...so, he can send sita, vanwas 4 betraying him...(evil smile..😈)
 
(at the temple...)
 
G standing n staring at the idol...R praying 2 god 4 showing her direction on what she should do...2 days...everything will be over...will her marriage stay or break..???...😭😭
 
BG: ram ram jai raja ram...i just saw this in my aunt's cellphone..😊
 
(PRECAP: riot all around the temple...a bandit attacks R wid a sword...😲)
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awwwesume prt yaar sanju
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ammma nrj n guddu were gr8888
updt sooon plezzz eagerlyyy waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great post Sanju...
Really loved it...Your Gunjhun are just superb
looking forward for the next part ...
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...LOL..😆 m back 2 bombay...dad got sum urgent wrk...so we came back 2day only...😃
guys, i knw i had been pakaufying in d last chapter...u knw y...i was so upset coz of d show ending news...but now m kinda relieved...as we r putting up wonderful efforts wich wud definitely force d channel walas to heed to us..!!! all d best BBAT..👍🏼
 
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CHAPTER #6
 
 
[at the temple]
R praying 2 god for showing her a direction on wat she should do...whether her marriage wud stay or break wid d challenge...😭😭
 
suddenly...firing sounds...screams...chaos in the temple...some dacoits had attacked d temple...riots all around...😲😲
 
Gunjhun try to run but...they get separated...Runjhun alone...looking 4 guddu...helpless...😲...
suddenly a bandit holds R's hand...R screams...the bandit about to hit R wid a sword...😲😲
A hand stops the sword...n starts to bleed...Guddu's hand...his blood dripping on R's forehead...
[d same bhajan as BG...d faster tempo...]
 
R understands the indication of god...
G fights wid d dacoits...saves many lives...n manage 2 save themselves 2...(Mr. harshwardhan PART II...afteral...😉)
meanwhile, Kalsanwali goes 2 GR's room n keeps something under the pillow...(vishnu's trump card...remember...???)
 
now, Gunjhun retun home...day ends...
 
[next day]
R gets up n finds herself in a mess...G nowhere in d vicinity...R horrified...thinks G has taken advantage on her...(how foolish...😡)
G comes in...finds R crying...
G: (😕) what happened...???
R staring at him wid hatred...
G (holds R): tell na...wats wrong..???
R while shooing his hand off, slaps G...unintendedly...G frowns...
R: how dare u touch me..???? u knw wat...i want to make 1 thing very clear...i hate even d very sense of your existence around me...understood...??? den how could u do this to me...
(weeps n runs away...)
 
G: (frowns..) wat did i do...??...i hate you 2, runjhun mishra...n u deserve it...you deserve hatred..!!
sits on the bed... pillow on his laps...finds something under d pillow...abhigyan's photo n his letter, he had given before leaving the town...
G: toh yeh baat hai...dis is why she hates me to such an extent...!!!🥺
G leaves for somewhere...
 
[at afternoon]
R: (sad; comes outa house wid lunch) kukkan bhaiya...
Kukkan: bhabhi...thank you so much...u r so sweet, bhabhi...n u knw wat bhabhi, bhaiya was so helpful yestrday...jhabbu ran a gr8 temparature...bhaiya took us to the hospital...
R shocked...
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thx u Sanjana for this great updt.
Hope Gunjhun will soon clear their misunderstding
Do continue soon
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Sanju...loved it...
bechara Guddu...kitni jor se maara hoga...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER #7

 
R (puzzled): when did he go wid u guys..???
K: yesterday night...i heard bhaiya's bike coming n rushed soon 2wrds pandey niwas...bhaiya said u had just slept...n accompanied us 2 the hospital...
R: u mean, he was with u guys the whole night...???
K: yeah...he didnt even sleep yestrday...n now, he went somewhere...said that he would return by evening...!!😊
R feels guilty...
 
R absent minded...works in the kitchen...hurts her finger...Guddu comes n puts ointment...R stares at G...keeps staring...mesmerised... suddenly, R smells something odd...
R: kuchh jal raha hai...
G indicates towards d frying pan...
R: (turns; shocked😲) MERI SABZI...!!!!!!!! oh no...gudduji...couldnt u tell this to me a few minutes ago..??...(turns) Gudduji...
No gudduji around...she feels her finger hurting...No ointment either...LOL...😆
 
[BG: tauba tumhare yeh ishare...from Chalte Chalte...😳]
 
 
{during the song..she keeps seeing G around her...everywhere...in amma's room...on terace...in hall, G showering rose petals on R...Kalsanwali shouting at R...n G imitating Kalsanwali...R starts giggling...n then realises dat she was daydreaming n starts laughing...Kalsanwali clueless...😕...}
 
[night]
R: its so late...Gudduji hasnt returned yet...i knw i offended him 2day...but i was very scared dat time...now i know...i like his presence...i need his presence...😍...but i hope he doesnt come drunk again...i wonder where has he been to..??
 
just then G comes in...she looks back...G comes closer...R thinks its again one of her daydreams...
 
G: (arrogant) AAKHRI DIN...24 hours...badal sakti ho toh badal do humein...
R: (realises dat she wasnt dreaming anymore..) what r u saying...??
G: tomorrow...the 30th day...our challenge wil be over...followed by our marriage strands...
R: (🥺; in her mind) how could u say this...
G: (in his mind..) i will return all ur joys back 2 u...tomorrow wil be d last day of ur sorrows...
G: (to R) i hav a gift 4 u...
R: gift...??
 
G takes out a file... divorce pprs...
💔💔💔
G: ive alrdy signd dem...u 2 do it soon...some1 has said, kal kare so aaj kar...
R stares @ him... a tiny drop rolls down hr cheek...
G: ye toh pakka khushi k hi aansun hain, na...??? (wants hr 2 say no... 1nc, jst once, say "no"...😭😭)
R doesnt say a wrd...about 2 leav...
G: arre, apna waada to pura karo...
R: (sheddng hr tears..💔) kaisa waada..???
G: tumne kaha tha, agar mai intrview achhe se dun toh tum mujhe tie bandhana sikhaogi... ab nahi sikhaya toh humein milne ka 1 mauka mil jayega...n i dont want dat 2 happen...ye lo tie...
R sits down on d bed...keeps d tie around G's collar... both concealng dere tears frm each odr,stil weeping...R puts d tie...
 
[BG: Layi vi naa gayi...from Chalte Chalte...]
 
 
the 3 M & Ms see this whole thing...happy...😡
 
Billo: tau, bohot udh rahe the na, lovebirds banke...huh...getting divorced...poor bhagonwali...!!!
Mittho: arrey, its not dat easy...they r not goin to leave each other so easily...
Vishnu: but if one of the lovebirds die...the other dies by itself...😈
Rajju: u are right vishnu...now, this is the ultimate way to close this love story...
 
(PRECAP: mahadevi decides to burn her preg. reports before any1 gets to knw dat its hers...steals...n burns them...
MD: everything is over...our love...my faith n the kid also...)
 
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M & Ms dunno dat dere r 2 more surprizes waiting 4 dem...which will make all dere plans go flop...LOL..😆
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago