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Posted: 12 years ago

😊FanFiction: O RE PIYA.. index😊

 
 
Chapter 2, 3 and 4 on pg 2

Chapter 5, 6 and 7 on pg 4

Chapter 8 on pg 5

Chapter 9 and 10 on pg 7

Chapter 11 on pg 9

Chapter 12 and 13 on pg 10

Chapter 14 on pg 11

Chapter 15 on pg 12

Chapter 16 on pg 14

Chapter 17 on pg 15

Chapter 18 on pg 16

Chapter 19 on pg 17

Chapter 20, 21, 22 and 23 on pg 18

Chapter 24 and 25 on pg 19

 
 
 
hope you enjoy them...😊
 
 
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[PREFACE: 20th may episode..😊]
 
R goes out with G..
the whole time, R wil b thinkin of wat might hav been troubling Mahadevi, so badly...πŸ˜• (she hasnt overheard the conversation..)
G stops the bike at the market...jewellery market...and asks R to go and select sum 4 herslf...
R confused..!!!πŸ˜•
 
G: what happened..?? any probs..??
R: no...ermm...its just dat...
G: shut up...didnt u hear what ur beloved "amma" said, hum dono ko saath mein time spend karna chahiye...ghoomna phirna chahiye...!!!!
R: (completely jumbled up...raises her eyebrows) huh..???😲
G: umm...i...i...dont lik d earings u wear...dey dont luk gud...so, i was thinking dat u might be thinking of changing dem...😳
R: par mobile...
G: arrey, mobile gaya bhaad mein, tum jaldi se...
R: (pretends 2 be serious) bhaad mein...???...dont tel me u really meant it...
G: (tactfully) umm...no...not at all...i just wanted u 2 shop 4 urself... n den we'll go ,na...(angrily) to get mobile...
Guddu gives a BIIIG smile...πŸ˜ƒ
n 2wards the shop...
Runjhun smiles slightly...😳
 
[ (BG: piya, na rahe mann...from tanu weds manu)
 
 
1st stanza (antara)...G keeps staring at R, while she selects some earings n shows dem to G, one by one...😍
2nd stanza...(1st mukhra){asuwann sang mora beh gaya kajra..😭}: MD weeping in her room...after jhabbu refuses 2 accept her...😭]
song ends with R leaving on the bike with G..
 
now R forces G 2 stop at a mobile shop...for getting some idea about the customer's current taste...
R watches everything very keenly...G reluctantly stands n stares at the shopkeepers while they xplain things 2 R...πŸ˜‰
 
(evening..)
they cum out of the shop...R luks at G...G pretends 2 avoid her...
R: mujhe pyaas lagi hai...(m thirsty..)...😳
G: (angrily) so..???...u cud hav asked 4 a glas of water from dat "sasura" dukaandaar(shopkeeper)
R: ice cream chahiye thi...mobile wale dukaandaar ke paas nai thi...😳
G: toh hum tumhare baap ke naukar hain, kya...???😡
R: pata nahi...
G: what did u say...???..."pata" nahi...
R: i said only "nahi"...
G: do u think i m a fool or sumthing...Do i seem like a dumb from any angle...??
R keenly observes his face...(moves left)
R: yahan se toh thik hi hai, par...
(moves 2 his right n luks at his face..)
R: yahan se...thode thode pagal...(looks into his eyes inquisitely)πŸ˜‰
πŸ˜†
G:(in his grave tone..) which flavour..???
R: mango...
(BG: the tere mast mast wala cute Gunjhun tune...)
 
G gets 2 cups of mango ice cream (plastic cups)
both of dem start having it...
suddenly, guddu seems 2 remember sumthing...
G: (giving the cup 2 runjhun) hold...!!! (rides the bike) come, i'll show u a place...not many people know of dis place...i usualy go there alone...wenever m depressed or very happy...
aur haan mera ice cream sirf pakadne ke liye diya hai...understood...???
 
R: (annoyed) how m i suppose 2 eat it on bike...???
G: haan...haan...thik hai...!!!!
R notices that G's ice cream cup has a crack on the top...(may be while opening, it got cracked...)
they cum to the place...a beautiful heavenly place...calm, cool...dim light...lakeside...musical fountain at the centre of the lake...(remember, d place where G went after d fight at the inauguration ceremony..ive just added sum more details...πŸ˜‰)
😊😊😊
 
G: the place is so beautiful...
R: (as if in her dreamland...) truely...😊
 
...to be continued
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful, do update soon plzzz
(if only we could see that on monday)
 
 
 
cheers Priya
 
 
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice starting yaar...
Keep it upπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...
Update soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really nice. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sanju...it was fab
          maza aa gaya yaar...keep it up...Gunjhun's dialouges were just superb
and the song was also nice...Do update soon
               Jaldi update karna ...haan
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superbbb πŸ‘ πŸ‘ i loved it  !!! 
do update soon !! 
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey sanju ...
amazing ff yaar ...
gunjun were tooo cute ...
updt sooon yaar plezzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice story. update as soon as you can 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanx a lot, guys...πŸ˜ƒ
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CHAPTER #2
 
R closes her eyes n feels the musical air...G stares at R, steps one by one towards R...
comes closer n closer...
suddenly, R opens her eyes...😲
G: wo...ice cream...pighal jayegi (will melt)...
R looks at both d ice creams n gives one of it 2 G...they start eating...
G: this place has some magic in itself...it looks beautiful in day light...but at night, it turns heavenly...
R: hmm...(smiles😊)
suddenly realises dat sumthing was wrong...the cup from which she was eating, had a crack at the top...it was actually guddu's...
at the same moment, even guddu notices a lipstick mark in a corner of the spoon...he realises dat it was R's...
the cups had interchanged...
R and G: (together..) yeh toh...😲...
 
G: wat...?? any probs..??
R: (thinks sumthing n then speaks..) no...nothing...u wanted 2 say sumthing...???
G: nothing...(slightly smiles..)
😍
(BG: runjhun's happy tune..)
they continue eating from their cups...the changed ones...
(ewww...🀒 // awww...😍 )
both seem smiling...πŸ˜›πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
 
[at pandey niwas~~]
 
mamas n mamis as usual at their round table conspiracy on how 2 separate GuNjhun...
 
mahadevi, stil weeping at her fate n regretting 4 not heeding 2 runjhun...
 
amma praying 2 d ram-sita statue..: hey bhagwan, keep my runjhun n guddu this way...happy n loving...4ever...!!!!😊
 
R & G enter the house... runjhun straight away heads 2 amma's room...tells her about the earing n the place where G took her...amma very happy...blesses her...!!
G: (shouting) arrey...kisi ka daily diary report khatam ho gaya ho toh khana dene ka kasht bhi kar de...!!!! (lol..πŸ˜†)
R: cant u speak a li'l politely...lovingly (pyaar se...) to anyone..???
G: pyaar..???
R:☺️
lolzz..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
[after dinner, in bedroom...]
G: kukkan said there were many customers at d shop 2day...6 mobiles wer sold...cool na..??
R: hmmm...
G tired...sleeps on bed itself...fast asleep...
R looks at him...and (dilemma)...thinks: i dint really understand u yet...i nevr get 2 know wat u really are...sumtimes, ur so nice, loving, caring...n d next moment u change into an arrogant n sadist guddu shukla...!!!!
R sits beside him n puts her hand on his head...: kitne pyaare lagte hain...sote huye...😳
G, in his sleep, holds her hand...puts it under his head n sleeps...
R stirs...then thinks dat he was tired n lets him sleep...n she leans against the side wall...
 
(PRECAP:G sleeping on R's laps...and R's head on G's shoulder...😍)
Edited by mikanS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was really lovely continue soon.