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Posted: 12 years ago

There's too dark to see forward without you,

only me alone in the corner without any hue

don't know how  it happens to me and why,

but it shows mirror to me that continuously cry,

i want you to stay but let go so far,

believe me my last smile was fake,its just a shooting star.

it's impossible to accept anything except you

b'cuz then death is only left as a clue,

So,please don't awake me when you are leaving

just give a shake that  ends me with your touching...😊❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!! This sounds as though Arjun was saying this to Arohi.
 
I do not want this type of ending.
 
 
Terrible to watch them suffering.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice poem. Hope this will not be the story of Arjuhi. I don't want to see such a tragic ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome...very touching..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: lara3110

Wow!! This sounds as though Arjun was saying this to Arohi.

 
I do not want this type of ending.
 
 
Terrible to watch them suffering.

 
dnt worry dis would nt b der endind but  am sure each one of us feels the same when v even think of departing 4m our beloved...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: chathu_88

Nice poem. Hope this will not be the story of Arjuhi. I don't want to see such a tragic ending.

thanx dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
  please don't go KMH!