Maan & Geet - Midnight Sun - Page 53

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ixray


thx for the update .

i don't know if i should say this or not , but i felt it was not as brilliant as your other updates. this one was way too lax ... no tension or chemistry .

i know it take a lot of personal time and effort to write but i am trying to be honest here.

looking forward to a brilliant air cracking and (hopefully brij's headcracking update next ) 


I'm glad you said that, that's what I think as well, not my best update but it is late into the night here... still I suppose that's no excuse, I appreciate the honesty 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG I LOVE IT>>.
uhh maan told her that he cant see her with anyone else 😍 & then i took her towel 😳
this is just getting better n better...
i really cant wait for more


Posted: 12 years ago
Grt update! So Maan really likes Geet? I feel it is a little early for him to make tat move on Geet. But then I am on the fence lol I want them to be together hehehe Grt update!
Posted: 12 years ago
god I am loving this crazy obsessive intense Maan!! absolutely loving him! super update.. thanks for the pm, do post the next part soon.
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...towel in exchange of hanky...thank god they left
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update! I'm glad noone saw Maan and Geet, that would've been bad! Waiting to see what happens next...
Posted: 12 years ago
I'm falling more in love with this story with each update
 
Thank you so much :-)
Posted: 12 years ago
oohh kitna sweet sweet hain na sab kuch (i knw i knw avv jallad brij aur dirji ki jalladgiri baki hain)...plz update soon...

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