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The Cradle (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
Sanam  HugHug

Omg! Long timeee.. hows u ya.. ? hw have u been? I didnt even know u changed ur user name.. Ouch I missed u yaa.. i thought u were busy n all..  and no wonder when i tried finding you i cudnt (thanks 2 ur new usernameAngry)

Anyways, i loved the poem. If it was ur first try, it was amazing yaar.. While reading i realized this can have many dimensions ... but in the end the feel is the same .. it was touching!

Do write more.

Love
Vini
P.S: I realized, u didnt miss me at all... *sobs*

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Very Nice Poem
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
lovely poem
awesum
u shud write more

tczz
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
awesome one
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Umm...hiii...

Dear, I don't know you much...so I can't comment on the fact that you think that your writing phase is over...but if you ever used to write, trust me, writing is inside you. You would always be able to write, no matter how many days or months have passed. And this is coming from personal experience :)

And true, poems do not have to rhyme. They just are written to depict the emotions which sentences can never do. Thanks for sending me the PM for your poem, because I am a complete fan of poems. I just love to read and write poems. So, thank you :)

And I really salute you for having the courage for publishing your poem. I write poems too, but they always remain hidden in my diaries, and not here. I could only persuade myself to publish three poems here, which are not that close to my heart. It takes a LOT of courage to share a poem. I feel intimidated because by sharing a poem, I feel like I am sharing a part of myself.

When I read the topic, 'The Cradle', I got a preconceived idea that either the person is remembering his/her childhood or the mother is looking at her child in the cradle. I mean, anything, related to childhood.

And I can seriously tell you that this poem was truly amazing. It's really touching. I am in love with it. It's very important for the poem to convey the message, without the complexity. It's so beautifully written that I could feel how she felt.

She wanted kids because she never had any. But she had hope, that she would have them some day. It was truly beautiful captured. This poem was not only enchanting, but spectacular and real. It depicted all those emotions which were real.

Trust me, it's the truth because I never flatter anyone when it comes to poems.

Thanks again, for the PM. It's a wonderful poem.

Keep writing always, because, you can.

- Mahi

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:07am | IP Logged
It's a cute one. Thanks for sharing. 
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
You know Sanam, I miss your writing. You gave the true essence of a writer. You put your heart into your writing. You touch the readers' hearts. Can't explain it to you more than that. To put it in simple words, you are a true writer.

With these phrases, you altered my way of thoughts for the moments while reading the poem and giving you feedback.

for the cradle that rocked them, never held her
 
for the smiles that adorned their face, never wore on hers
 
hope was always there but the light never shone on her

I am a little unsure whether or not you've noticed this, but I have changed, greatly. But seeing you write this poem reminds me one of the main reasons my immaturity and stupidity is still seen within the teenager I am.

With love,
Nikki Hug

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:10am | IP Logged
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