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-Ehtesaab- SSmaaneet EPILOGUE NOTE PG145 (Page 107)

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by imaastha

Beautiful endin...
TWINS...aawww... ^_^
Dis is da best written ss i have read on if...
Dough it was a painful story bt was really heart touching...
Standing ovation frm my side. ..
Bt i guess dats nt enough...
Luvd dis ss to da core...<3 <3
thanks a lot!!!
it means a lot to me

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ninand

omg lovely lovely lovely! loved the part... simply beautiful... felt so happy and contented . heartrending story, heart tugging end.Hug
yes..
 
u r comment too made me.. feel close.. thanks
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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
What a beautiful ending to a beautiful ff baji Hug

Awww Maan truly is everything Geet could have ever wanted, he was going to cancel the deal so she wins it..
Loved it how she stopped Maan from siging so that she can show Dev in his face that she has moved on And the kiss was the confession of those unsaid words Embarrassed

Loved the change you showed in Geet, the happy bubly Geet, mischevious... All because of Maan's love

Aww sooo sweet of Geet to make a celebration at home of their wedding... And loved her suprise for Maan, she dressed up for him againEmbarrassed Their SR again, but this time their "actual" one...
And she finally said "I love you" to him..

Loved the epilogue also, it was emotional but happy and sad tears

Sad tears because of their baby's death anniversary Cry and happy tears beause Geet is pregnant again and that too with twins!! Double the happiness  DancingBig smile

Loved these lines at the end as well:
she kissed his eyes.. ur she chuckled like endless sunshine
he laughed
she kissed his nose.. ur my unbelievable treasure
only mine
she said it possessively.. he agreed humbly
she kissed his cheeks ur my shining unhidden star in the middle of a joyless night
joyless night..
he questioned.. she blushed.. knowing wat he meant
she kissed his lips ur the one that gives happiness to my life..I love u ..love u a lot!!


It was an awesome ending, it summed her emotions for him up, I also loved the part where Maan said her ehtesaab has ended :D .. Will miss the ss but have love being part of this emotional rollercoaster ride, thanks to you baji Hug

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:33pm | IP Logged
Awesome ending !!!
Yaya twins :D

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
awesome update and great ending!!

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
SUPERV ENDINGClapClapClapClapClapClap. I LIKE THIS ENDING AND MAANEET BABY AND THEIR LOVE FOR EACH OTHER.

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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
beautiful SS

nice ending...


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Posted: 05 June 2011 at 4:55pm | IP Logged
Such a lovely and ever happy ending :)

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