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FF- Strangers (updt) Ch1 "Re-Union" on pg3 (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Baby its a thriller story.. Sumthng related to Island.. Think na if u can..

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:21am | IP Logged
comfortability on the island
 
strangers on the island
 
island without remarks
 
 uncontrollable situation
 
Getting together all alone
 
please dont laugh at me ,dont know


Edited by rubal223 - 20 May 2011 at 7:37am
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by yoga23priya

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hey cherry

will come soon with bang like toofan after replying pmLOL

your's toofan


Aww, take ur tym darling.. Lubb U toofan.
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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rubal223

comfortability on the island
strangers on the island
island without remarks
uncontrollable situation
Getting together all alone
please dont laugh at me ,dont know
baby.. Why would I laugh?? Now see what Pappa does with all this..

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Ramona, I'm excited for your short story of ppl lost on an island. I've read many novels about stories of this such and I have enjoyed them. Have you ever watched the American show Lost, it had a plane crash and many ppl lost on it. The ppl tried to escape it but some got kidnapped or killed.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
woohooo Ramona...

It seems maha interesting Sweetheart...

Plzzz update it soonnnCool

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
WOW Romana, I've just read it now, it seems really exciting...Do plzzz carry on with it!! Wink Star
Keep up with the rocking work!! Clap
Btw I also thought of a title, don't know whether u will like it or not!! Big smile
Adventurous Island
Enchanted Island



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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 8:38am | IP Logged
this is dedicated to My Jaanu & my baby...

Chapter 1

Re-union

It was half past 11 & Arpita was busy stuffing her things in her black suitcase.

"Gosh... How am I to reach on time? Shikha is surely gonna kill me. Somebody help me."

Just then her mom entered with a glass of her favourite Choco Milkshake.

Arpita- "Mummy.. Help Me Pls"

Mummy- "OMG.. Arpita you're a grown up girl & you still havent learnt to pack ur things? Shame on You"

Arpita- "Why do I need to worry when I have my mommy with me?"

She hugged her Mom tight.

Mummy - "Ya Ya.. I know.. Anyway, Take Care & enjoy urself."

Arpita- "Ok Mamma.. Love You lots. Bye"

Arpita hurried downstairs only to find Shikha ready to pounce on her.

Shikha- "What took you so long? Do U have any idea how late we are?" She was mad at her.

Arpita- "Okay Okay Im sorry.. Just chill."

Shikha frowned- "Come out & I'll show you how to Chill".

Arpita loved irritating Shikha. Afterall, they were best friends. They jumped into Shikha's car & drove away. They were to meet Tanmay, Jagat- Simple & RV. It was a reunion camp for them. All six of them were on their way to what they called the- DESERTED ISLAND.

Arpita- " Are you going to drive all the way? "

Shikha- "Nope.. I dont need to especially when He is around''

Arpita- "That reminds me.. whr are the others? I mean what abt Jagat & Manjari?"

Arpita- " They're out of town."

Just then Shikha recieved a call from Tanmay. But before she could get her cell, Arpita snatched it from her hand.
Shikha- "Give me my phone."

Arpita- "Sorry Babes.."

Shikha rolled her eyes- "Geez.. You're the limit".

Tanmay- "Where are You?"

Arpita- "Dude, we're on our way. We'll be there in an hour."

Tammy- "An hour?! "

Arpi- "Oh Come on Tammy. We're trying our best. Besides, its raining & we are not taking any chance."

Tanmay- "Okay, See Ya.."

The wet & slippery roads made it slightly difficult for them to drive. But still, it didnt dampen their spirit. After an hour and a half, they were greeted by the rest of them. They soon took their seats & resumed their journey.

Simple"I missed all of you."

Shikha- "Me too.."

RV- "It feels great to be back after 3 yrs."



Tanmay- "Btw, Why is this place called DESERTED? "

Jagat- "Ermm.. Its just a resort."

Arpi- " I must say its gonna be fun. I mean, just imagine, a huge cottage only for us & that too on an Island. Wowieee.."

Arpi was very excited unaware of what was in store for her.

Shikha- "You guys are really gonna love that place."

RV- "And why not, after all its been created by Avdhesh Singh Thakur."

The name wiped off Arpita's smile. She went pale with fear. Unpleasant memories flooded her mind. How much she hated that name.. She hated his existence. She thought that her worst nightmares came to an end. But now, it was just the beginning.



pls hit like

&

dnt forget to comment





Edited by KriYa_life - 07 June 2011 at 9:01am

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