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Love Exists? (AR FF) Part 5 (Pg 25) - 9/7 - Page 12

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Posted: 12 years ago

beautiful concept..

loved it..

continue soon...

n dont foget to pm me as well...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Well, Well, Well ...
Abb I'm on track!
cz i finished reading all your updates
and also commented on all your work!

and may i say it again
as ashi commented earlier
Rhee, youre gttn better n better with each update!
i am srsly loving it😃

keep writing
and UPDATE SOON
i know skool is killin but do make tym babe!

i love that annie n ridz are so close!
i mean we've all seen ammy n padma being so close
but this is different! and ads i said
i am liking it...

and she wants to be an SINGER!
wow, specks of you are clearly seen rhee...
well ! romance brewing and
needless to say its amazing!

hope this is lamba enuf for yu :P

love
-KIN😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Guys!
I'm sooo sorry!
I'm really sorry to make you'll wait so much but the thing is that my school just started and its 10th std. ICSE, so i've been a little too busy these days...with you know projects, tutions...etc.,
And yeah! I haven't written the next part yet!
It will take me sometime to update!
Sorry!
Love
Rhea
Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

                                                                Part 3

There were a lot of people coming in and going out of Riddhima's house! You ask why? Well, shaadi ka ghar hai bhai...Ghar ki badi beti ki shaadi hai...Rush toh hona hi hai na? Aur abb mere paas time nahi hai...Anjali ghar aati hi hogi!

Just then Armaan's car halted in front of the Gupta mansion!

Padma: Arre-arre Armaan aa gaya...Matlab meri Anjali aa gayi! Muskan beta pooja ki thali lao jaldi... Anjali aa gayi hai!

Muskan: Ji aunty! Abhi layi!

Padma: Arre bhaiya yeh gende ke phool theek se lagaiye na...Shaadi ka ghar hai...Mehmaan aana shuru ho gaye hai... Aur abb toh dulhan bhi aa gayi hai... Yeh Shashank bhi na pata nahi kahan rehte hai...Jab bhi unki zaroorat hoti hai ghar mein, woh hospital mein hi hote hai!

Riddhima: Ma yeh dekho kaun aaya hai...

Anjali walks into the house followed by Armaan and of course her to be husband - Atul Joshi! Anjali and Atul bend down and touch Padma's feet and Padma gives them her blessings and welcomes them home!

Anjali: Badi ma, bade papa nazar nahi aa rahe... Kahan hai woh?

Padma: Kahan honge woh?

Anjali: Of course! Sanjeevani mein!

Padma: Yes!

Atul: Badi ma woh mere mummy-papa ek-do din mein yahan aa jayenge!  Unhe thoda urgent kaam tha and so they had to go to Bangalore...

Riddhima: Of course "JIJU"! Not a problem!

Riddhima emphasized on the word JIJU coz she knew Atul hated it when she called him that! According to him, it made him feel old!

Atul: Riddhima ki bachi!! Tu kabhi nahi sudhregi na?

Riddhima: Nope! Never!

Armaan: Atul don't say anything to this one! Yeh nahi sudharne wali!

Muskan: Woh toh hai! Lekin JIJU? Woh main soch rahi thi...

Anjali bursted out laughing at poor Atul!

Anjali: Arre kya hai tum dono ko? Kyun bechare ki taang kheechne mein lage ho?

Armaan, Riddhima & Muskan: Oooh...

Anjali turned into a deep shade of red!

Padma: Kya bachon? Tum logon ne aate hi inka mazak udana shuru kar diya? Just wait till you'll get married!

Anjali: Thank you Badi ma for supporting me!

Padma: Anytime beta! So Atul tum batao... Kaam kaisa chal raha hai?

Atul: Bas Badi ma...Busy rehta hoon...Hospital mein itna kaam jo rehta hai...Bade papa bhi aaj-kal bohot busy ho gaye hai...Unki bohot surgeries pending hai iss hafte!

Padma: Tumhare Bade papa ko sirf kaam se pyaar hai...apni family se nahi!

Atul: Arre aisa nahi hai badi ma...woh you know na we are doctors first!

Riddhima: Bas kar Atul! Hum jaante hai ki tum bhi doctor ho aur tum papa ke chamche ho! Its ok!

Armaan: Hahahaha! Good one Basket! Company ka kuch toh asar ho raha hai tum par!

Riddhima: WHAT? Oh you are so dead Mallik!

Padma: Bas-bas ladna band karo...Riddhima go and get them something to eat... Muskan zara dekhna ki Anjali ka kamra saaf hai ya nahi...

Muskan: Ji aunty abhi dekh kar aati hoon!

Padma: Tab tak Anjali tum Riddhima ke kamre mein aaram karo aur Atul tum mere!

Anjali & Atul: Sure!

Armaan: Aur main kya karoon Padma aunty?

Padma: Tum? Tum toh mere saath chalo... Tumhe kuch acha khane ko deti hoon!

Padma said with a wink! Armaan grinned at her and they both made their way into the kitchen!

                                                 ~O~O~O~O~O~O~O~

Riddhima: Kya ma! Aap apni beti se zyaada iss Armaan ko pyaar karti ho...Bhook toh mujhe bhi lagi hai... Lekin aapko toh sirf Armaan hi pyaara hai...Koi baat nahi...Annie aunty hai na mere liye!

Armaan: Kuch jalne ki smell aa rahi hai...

Riddhima: Armaan main jal nahi rahi...

Armaan: Arre when did I say that you were jealous? Woh shayad khana jal raha hai Padma aunty!

Riddhima & Padma: Shut up Armaan!

Armaan: Aap dono ne tape recorder lagaya hua hai kya? Jab dekho SHUT UP ARMAAN... SHUT UP ARMAAN... Kuch aur bhi toh bola karo...You should be original...LIKE ME!

Armaan winked at the two of them! Padma giggled whereas Riddhima glared at him!

Armaan: Padma aunty? Ek baat poochoon?

Padma: Pooch!

Armaan: Aap itni sundar aur samajhdar ho! Lekin aapki yeh beti, Riddhima, nahi hai... Kyun?

Riddhima was already pissed off with him and this comment of his hit the nail and finally Riddhima bursted out!

Riddhima: ARMAAN! Main sundar nahi hoon? Samajhdar nahi hoon? Acha? Toh class mein first kaun aati hai? Last year college ki beauty contest kisne jeeti thi? Haan? Bolo... Mooh kyun band hai abb? BOLO!

Armaan: Sweetheart, tum mujhe bolne ka mauka do gi tabhi toh main kuch kahoonga!

Riddhima: Armaan tum zyaada smart banne ki koshish mat karo haan?

Armaan: Correction Basket! Main smart banne ki koshish nahi kar raha! Main smart hoon!

Armaan said and grinned at her awaiting her reply!

Riddhima: Armaan! Ughh...

Padma: Bas-bas...main kuch bol nahi rahi iska matlab yeh nahi ki tum dono ladte rahoge! Riddhima main abhi aayi...

Riddhima: Hmm...

Just as Padma went out of the kitchen, Riddhima heard Anjali call her!

Anjali: Ridzy??? Ridzy??? Come to my room... Jaldi!

Riddhima: Aayi di! Armaan coming?

Armaan was busy munching on a carrot!

Armaan: Nope! Tum jao!

Riddhima nodded!

Just as Riddhima turned around to go, she felt someone pull her dupatta! She turned around to see that her dupatta got stuck with the nail on the table... She tried to pull it but then her dupatta fell down on the ground and Riddhima gasped!

Armaan: I'll help you!

Armaan got up and came closer to where Riddhima was standing! He carefully removed the dupatta so that the dupatta didn't tear!

After removing the dupatta, he went closer to Riddhima and slowly placed the dupatta around her neck and Riddhima kept staring at Armaan! She was in her own world and didn't realize that Armaan had already removed the dupatta and also placed it on her neck!

Armaan finally snapped her out of her world!

Armaan: Kahan kho gayi thi?

Riddhima: Haan? Woh...Who kuch nahi...vDi bula rahi hai... I'll be back!

Armaan: Sure!

Riddhima walked out of the kitchen or rather RAN out!

Riddhima (thinking): Yeh kya ho gaya tha mujhe? Uski aankhon mein kho gayi? Seriously? I'm going mad! I was actually gawking at him! Oh god! Main pagal ho gayi hoon! Riddhima tu pagal hai! You've really lost it!

                                                 ~O~O~O~O~O~O~O~

Hey guys!

I'm FINALLY back with an update!

Reason for the delay?

Look at Pg 16! :)

Hehe!

Well hope you'll like it!

Do COMMENT and LIKE!

And i would really like it if my SILENT READERS commented too! =)

Thnx! :)

Love

Rhea

 

Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear
awesome part👏👏⭐️
loved it so so much
Armaan n ridz nok-jhok kabhi nhi khatm ho sakti, but loved their cute nok-jhok
padma,ridz n armaan so superb
thanks for pm
plzzz continue soon


⭐️Edited by shilpI007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rheaaa!!!!!!!!! OMG the part was freakin adorable!!! I loveeed AR :D Oooh Riddhima's falling for him? YAY :D

Oh and all the teasing, the masti, and the talks with Padma aunty were super cute too :D

Continue asap :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part ...continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey nice part plz continue soon love ria
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm part.
Update nxt part soon.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.