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Love Exists? (AR FF) Part 5 (Pg 25) - 9/7 (Page 11)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 6:56am | IP Logged
hey Rhea
awesome partClapClapStar
loved it so much
loved AR nok-jhok
thanks for pm
plz continue soon

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:54pm | IP Logged
awesome part..
do continue soon
 

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
awesome part!!!! just love it...great concept, beautifully written! AR n the gang ,all there- amazing!!!!
RM already in love n surely Anjali's marrying Atul ...great yar!!!!
cont soon n thanks 4 the pm 
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
oh my my...what shall i say now..ur getting better n better Peekaboo

that yes..no..yes...no..is always d best thing bw d leads...and aloo ke parathe..story badle..ff badle..armaan ke character badle..but but but..aloo ke parathe badal jayye?????
Naaa

and the fyt over shopping ws even better...no ifs..no but..sirf jatt...rofl..i louvee talking nonsense :P

loved d part..keep it up

tc..lovee u
Ashi

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Awesome part plz write more soon :)

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
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Awesome Update
Just Loved it

Thanks For The PM...!!
Do Continue soon

                   

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged

Good start ...continue soon...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:04am | IP Logged

Hey guys!

Sorry for the delay!

Hope you'll like this!

I know its small... sorry! Cry

Love

Rhea

                               Part 2

 

Muskan: Yeh wali achi hai na Ridzy?

Riddhima: Nahi-nahi... The one in that corner is good haina Niki?

Nikita: Haan yaar...I like both! Dono hi le lete hai na!

Riddhima: Haan I like those bangles too! But...fine lets buy them!

Muskan: Good!

Nikita: Earrings?

Armaan: Oh god yaar! Enough na! Kitna shopping karoge tum log?

Riddhima: Haven't you heard ki we girls "Shop till we drop?"

Armaan: Oh yeah I forgot! You girls are surely crazy!

Rahul: I agree man!

Nikita: Oh god yaar! Shut up na! Let us concentrate na!

Abhi: Wah! Shopping ke liye concentrate karna hai...lekin lectures attend karte waqt doosre ladkon ko dekhte raho! Kya baat hai!

Niki: Excuse me? If you remember, I am one of the toppers in class! Toh kya hua ki main lectures mein dhyaan nahi deti? I can prepare at home and still come first!

Abhi: Blah! Blah! Blah!

Niki: Ughh...

Muskan: Abb tum dono mat shuru ho jao...at least not here guys!

Niki: Muski iss Abhi ko samjhao na! Mujhe kya bol rahi ho?

Muskan: Haan I'll tell him also but first tu chal yahan se...jaa shopping khatam karle!

Niki: Arre haan yaar! Hum toh shopping kar rahe the! Main bhool hi gayi!

Muskan: Haan! Chal jaa!

 

                                                 ~O~O~O~O~O~O~O~

 

Riddhima: Acha hua hum wahan se aa gaye Armaan...Its so embarrassing to see them fight and saare customers unhe dekh rahe the!

Armaan: Yes! A least hum dono embarrassment se bach gaye! Phew! 

Riddhima: Haha! Yeah! Acha now help me out na...kaunsi earring loon? 

Armaan: Tum mujhse pooch rahi ho?

Riddhima: Tumhe yahan koi aur nazar aa raha hai? Of course I'm asking you na idiot! Kabhi toh serious hua karo Armaan!

Armaan: Ok fine! Main sach boloon?

Riddhima: Bolo...

Armaan: Tumhe har cheez suit karti hai...koi bhi le lo...jitna bhi lena hai, le lo...I'll pay!

Riddhima: Awww... Thank you so much Armaan! I love you!

Armaan: I love you too! Lekin yeh yahan par mat kaho...humare gang ko lagega ki we are REALLY in LOVE!

Riddhima: Haha! Fine! Yahan toh nahi boloongi!

Armaan: Hehe!

 

                                                ~O~O~O~O~O~O~O~

 

Abhi: Uff! Tum ladkiyan kitni shopping karti ho! I'm tired yaar!

Muskan: Hum ladkiyan hai...what do you expect Abhi?

Rahul: Muskan I know ki tum thak gayi ho...give me your shopping bag! I'll hold them!

Niki: Awww... Rahul you are such a sweetheart yaar!

Riddhima: I agree Niki! I wish ki mera bag bhi koi pakad le...I'm also tired you know!

Armaan: Lao Riddhima...I'll put it in the car...and lets go yaar...I'm tired and hungry also!

Niki: Armaan mera bag bhi le jao!

Armaan: Sure! Chalo lets go yaar...

Rahul: Yeah guys! Let's go please...

Riddhima: I think we should go now! And guys I'm taking leave from college for 2 weeks cause of Anji di's marriage...you guys know na after chacha and chachi's death, unka iss duniya mein aur koi nahi hai...right now she's in Delhi...she'll be back tomorrow morning na...phir shaadi ki tayyari and all...so...

Muskan: Awww... yeah Ridzy...hum bhi toh tum logon ki help karenge na! Tu chinta kyun karti hai?  Just that we'll miss you in college yaar...

Riddhima: Awww...will miss you too Muski!

Niki: Aur mujhe miss nahi karogi kya Riddhima?
Riddhima: Of course karoongi but guys, it's not like I'm going forever na! Hum ek hi sheher mein hai...we'll be meeting almost everyday! Right guys?

Abhi: Yeah! Tum log bohot senti types ho yaar!

Armaan: Acha let's go home! Mum said that she's making lunch for all of us!

Muskan: Oh that's great! Chalo jaldi...I'm hungry!

Rahul: Yes guys! Lets go na!

Armaan: Please!

Rahul: Huh?

Armaan: Rahul bolo PLEASE can we go?

Abhi: Haha! Good one bro!

Armaan: Thank you! Thank you! Haan toh Rahul, I'm waiting!

Rahul: FINE! Armaan "PLEASE" can we leave?

Armaan: Of course! Main kabse toh yeh hi keh raha tha na!

 

They all get into the car and drive down to Armaan's house!

 

ARMAAN'S HOUSE

 

Ananya: Finally tum log ghar aa gaye!

Armaan: Yes mum! Abb hume bohot bhook lagi hai...Khana laga do please...

Ananya: Sure beta! Arre bachon? Tum sab aise khade kyun ho? Aa jao...baith jao na! You actually want me to say all this to you haan?

Abhi: Arre nahi-nahi aunty...hum toh bas...

Ananya: Hum toh bas kya? Chalo rehne do... Tum log baitho... Main khana lagati hoon!

Rahul: Yes ma'am!

Riddhima: Aunty bohot bhook lagi hai... Jaldi se khana lagao...I'll help you!

Ananya: Sure! Come!

Niki: Uff...I'm tired guys!

Muskan: Main bhi! Armaan yaar ek glass pani pila de na!

Armaan: Main kya tera naukar laga hoon jo aise order de rahi hai Muskan? Jaa...jaa kar Ramu kaka ko keh...mujhe nahi!

Muskan: Whatever! I'll take it myself!

Armaan: Good!

Abhi: Annie aunty?? Khana ready hai? I have to go home actually...mum is waiting...

Ananya: Yeah! Just 2 minutes beta! Ruko!

 

5 minutes later

Riddhima: Hmm...aunty it smells really good na?

Ananya: Of course! Tune jo banaya hai!

Riddhima: Arre aunty...inn sabko please mat batana ki maine khana banaya hai...

Ananya: Hmm...

 

Armaan: Yummy! Mom its delicious! Yeh paneer ki sabzi aapne banayi hai na? It's yummy! Mujhe aur chahiye!

Ananya: Sure...yeh lo...and for your information Armaan, aaj khana maine nahi Riddhima ne banaya hai!

 

They all were shocked and kept staring at Riddhima for a while!

 

Riddhima: Kya hai guys? Stop staring! PLEASE...

Muskan: Riddhima? Khana tune banaya hai?

Riddhima: Yeah...kyun? Acha nahi hai kya?

Niki: Acha? God...Riddhima its delicious! Tujhe toh cook hona chahiye!

Riddhima: Na...cooking and me? No way! I'm meant for one thing and you'll know what that is right?

 

All of them say together

 

"Of course we do! SINGER!!!"

 

                                                ~O~O~O~O~O~O~O~

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Love

Rhea



Edited by RheaKSG4eva - 27 May 2011 at 11:20am

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