ArSh ff "My Life My Wife" # 1 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part..
Loved the way u described Shilpa's emotional side..
Thanx 4 d PM..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the part
and u r right abt ending the ff
coz if u seriously take it further it'll ruin the story
but if u wanna continue
then u can right about how all of them started living together
the bond increasing with every part
some celebrations
some trip alone
pregnancy
then growing up of their kids
ill health of nani
or padma aunty wich brings shilpa closer to her
fights 
love
etc
u can still write more than 10 parts
if u wish to
anyway continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part, very emotional...
poor shilpa suffering from fever, her luv is not with her when she need him the most...
i don't think Armaan should force shilpa for accepting her family...
Armaan shouldn't take advantage of the situation, at this time she needs him...
better Armaan support her now he can talk about other thinks later, after she get well...
waiting for the next update...
do update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg i love the story... though feeling bad for shilpa, i hope she'll accept the change and new relations soon...hope armaan and she will start their life happily again 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
luved armaan's plan...
shilpa is being so stubborn...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update..Shilpa is really being stubborn..but she has reasons.. Do continue soon.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
great update! the emotions came across so true! the frustration the helplessness. plus i agree with ending the FF no use dragging it. update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mere hisaab se.. its a little confusing till we will get to read the next part... kyunki you always leave on cliff hanger... and onething sorry lekin meine next part parh liya hai..😆 Ab jab poora likh he liya hai to apne uss makhsoos post se jahan tum saare updates likhti ho wahan se next part yahan shift kardo...

Aur uss part k hisaab se everything is great! the love, effection and the lecture!! agay ki comment karne ka dil chah raha hai lekin phir ghalat ho jaye gaa kyunki abhi abhi to wo update yahan hai nahi//😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
oyyeee...update sooonnn...

hamain tou writers change hne ka pata b nahi chala...

all thanks to u...

emotional part tha par even armaan needs to understand her na... uss k saath zabardasti b nahi karni chahye na...

everything takes time...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank You so Much Guys for all your comments... I am glad You Guys are so much getting involved in this ff..😊