''Like phoning a guy until his mother tells you to leave him alone?'' Rhea grinned. ''That's Armaan's mother. He never said it.'' Really cute😆
I thought I could name a guy I liked and that would be enough. Not a chance. Swetha told him I liked him. I was horrified. Well, there was a part of me that hoped he'd go like, ''Cool. I like Pia, too.'' Not a chance. We used to talk in the class sometimes. Now, he sat two rows away. I loved this paragraph, NOT only because of its subtle humour and excellent portrayal of teenage girl's predicaments BUT for your style of narration. Each line is followed by a negation of the sentiment of the previous. That is just very stylish. So we go from a rational reasoning, to its flaw, then mouth open being floored from its consequence, then that glimmer of a sliver lining, to hoping the floor would open up and swallow you. 👏 Akanksha, you not only tell a tale, BUT you tell it supremely well and with panache. ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Again without reiterating my last statements, that conversation with Karan whilst moving the story on, adds more on both their characters and layered with humour. Just excellently done. ⭐️
I loved this explanation of her phobia people who lurked in dark places and scared
me. A common trait differentiated by your detailing of this wonderful line. 👏
Although I was expecting that scary end, it still managed to give me the heebeegeebees. Excellent update. I read it twice. 😃 Love Sabah
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