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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:39pm | IP Logged
Waiting...please update!!!!

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
ya .please update soon  Waiting. for next part plz

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:54pm | IP Logged
Part-9

Jigar was waiting for rashi and he is very angry,,, here rashi comes and see all modis are waiting for her, she talks to herself

" Stern Smileo h my god whole devil modis are waiting for me to kill me, gopi's lord krishna please save me from these devils"

Rashi comes here. jigar looks at rashi.. rashi sees at him...

Jigar: where were you rashi?
rashi:Wacko Wackojigar ji i was with my friend, her name is pooja. she was shifting to delhi with family so she called me there and i went there.
Jigar: you are so irresponsible, look at time?
rashi: i am so sorry jigar ji ErmmErmmErmm

jigar found something suspicious. so he just nodes his head and rashi goes to her room looking at kokila...rashi comes in her room and calls urmilla, she picks up the call.. {her BG music starts}

Urmilla: kaisi hai dikra? {how are youSmile}
rashi: mummi mey theek hu acha mujhe kuch batana hai aapko batana. { i wanna tell you something}
Urmilla: toh jaldi bata na {tell me fast}
rashi: mummi gopi ka pata chal gaya hai... {urmilla mouth opensShockedShockedShocked}
urmilla: kya woh gawar mil gayi tujhe par kaisey... {how you find that gawarEvil SmileEvil Smile}
rashi: mummi woh ahem ki premika hai na anita uska phone aaya tha, mey usey milney gayi thi usney mujhe bataya ki woh kai dino sey kagadi par nazar rak rahi thi aur tabhi usey pata chala ki gopi ahem ke sath nahi aur woh kisi gangadham apartment mey rehti hai... {mummi do you know anita who loves ahem, i went there to meet her. she kept eye on kagadi and found that gopi and ahem are not together, and she found that she is living in some gangadham apartment}
urmilla: hmm yeh chatur kagadi aur gawar bahut chalak hai zara bach ke rehna... {be careful from that kagadi and that gawar}
rashi: mummi do something...
urmilla: i have some kalakari in my mind { look i will send some goon to that apartment or when that gawar is alone, they will make her so scared that he will going to sacred seeing her face in mirror, just try to get her no and we will trace the number.}
rashi: but mummi dont take risk i will send you money from anita...
urmilla: leave on me you just take care of kagadi..
rashi: yes sure mummi...

In the night:
everyone is taking dinner rashi {green saree }makes a excuses having some work in room. everyone is not bothered about what work is she is doing... she goes to kokila room and check her room.. but her phone has security lock with the name of someone...rashi talking to herself 

rashi: rashi tu toh gayi agar kagadi {checking the cell phone} ne dekh liya..
toh tu kahi ki nhi rehagi...hey bhagwan yeh lock kyu nhi khul raha... {rashi u will die if kokila will see you like this, oh god why the lock i s not opening}
{kokila coming to her room}
rashi: what can be a password...{she tried ahem...no.. gopi...}
{kokila is near to her room}
rashi: think ya kanhaji.. she tried and it works {she smiles}...
{she looks at the home and she found a number saved from unknown, she write down and she locked the phone and she moves,,,she comes out from room and kokila comes..rashi closes her eyes}

Scene shift:
ahem is lying on his bed and thinking about the gopi... suddenly phone beeps... its a message and ahem checks it... {ahem is in pure black sherwani and gopi is in white night suit {" frnds i am sending you the exact pic of gown weared by some model}



{guys dont mind because gopi is not gawar now she is modern and civillized}

do you love me? {ahem smiles, its gopi}
yes sweetheart {ahem sends, gopi recieves}
promise me that you will come in my dreams today {gopi smiles & send message to him}
close your eyes will come {ahem send this message}

gopi closes his eyes so as ahem also...

"a song from movie salami "tumhey chedey hawa chanchal"

{a mountain area ahem is wearing brown suit ang gopi is in yellow saree like rashi weras, hairs open}

tumhey chhedey hawa chanchal {ahem comes to gopi holds her arm, sings}
sharaat tumsey sikhi hai {gopi sings kisses on ahem hand }
woh beitha phool pe bhawara {ahem shows gopi butterfly on rose}
muhabbat tumsey sikhi hai {gopi kisses on ahem forehead}
kiya hai faisala mainey tumarey bina na rehna hai

{ahem is in black suit and gopi is black saree wow looking so dam dashing and beauitful, ahem runs with gopi holding her hand on ground cover with trees and flowers far}

karey deewangi ka mausam sanam 'tumari in adaao sey
{ahem hugs gopi and he caress her cheecks and sings}
gazab lagti ho tum rab ki kasam
{ahem puts his head on gopi laps}
bharosa ho na jo na jo mera toh pucho in fizaao sey
{gopi plays with her ahem hairsings}

tumhey chedey hawa chanchal... 
{ahem stand up with gopi and rolls his finger on her face}
sharat tumsey sikhi hai {gopi kisses on ahem eyes}
woh beitha phool pe bhawara {ahem kisses on gopi hands like a gentleman}
mohabat tumsey sikhi hai {gopi hugs ahem}

{ahem write "I love you" on sand and gopi smile and sings}
banaaya aashiyaan maine sanam tumhaari hi nigaahon mein   
na jaaoon door main tumase kabhi  {gopi and ahem is lying downon grass and puts her face on ahem chest}bita doon umr main saari sanam teri hi baahon mein 
{she start crying ahem wipes her tears}

{ahem have couple dance, the place is covered with rose and candles}
tumhey chedey hawa chanchal 
{ahem sings bends gopi}
sharat tumsey sikhi hai
{gopi bends and sings}
woh beitha phool pe bhawra
{ahem sings kisses on neck}
mohabbat tumsey sikhi hai..
{gopi moves up  sings and sees ahem}
merey gulfam sun lo tum deewane dil ka kehna hai
{gopi walks around in a circle and sing this line}
kiya hai faisla mainey tumare bin na rehna hai
{ahem holds her hand and gopi takes few steps back holding
ahem hand and come to ahem...}

dream end:

Scene shift:
Gopi wakes up and get ready for the office.. she is very happy here, she reaches  office. she goes directly to ahem cabin. She is shocked to see ahemwith anita there.. here ahem sees gopi. gopi  turns back and wipes in tears.
ahem: gopi you come in... {gopi turns and sees ahem}
gopi: i am sorry sir i didnt talk...
ahem: {can see pain in here eyes} no its not like that, 
gopi smiles: hello anita anita {attitude}: hi {he looks at ahem who is looking at gopi} ahem lets go to mall for shopping...
ahem: no anita i have a meeting i can't go you carry on...
gopi looks at ahem: shall i leave sir...
ahem was about to say but anita interrupt...
anita: can't you see we are busy, go now...
gopi leaves from their crying and ahem sees this...

flashback
anita called ahem and tell him to meet in resturant, they both meet.she apologize ahem leaving him like this. she told ahem that she knewthat he is not happy with gopi and she wants to come back on his life..
anita: ahem ahem {ahem comes back to his senses}
ahem: anita you go i will meet you in the evening. okay...
anita: okay we wil have dinner together...

anita left and ahem sits on his chair he closes his eyes thinking what to donow...here i end the part...hope you will like this














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Thanks for the Update realy loved it!

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bloem123

Thanks for the Update realy loved it!

thanks dear for ur comment...thnk u so much

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really loved part it nice

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Oh gosh, this was absolutely fantastic!  Eagerly awaiting the next update.

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nice update :)
waiting for it !! continue soon !

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