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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: fortuneprincess

nice update👍🏼



thnks dear hope u liked it...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Really liked this  update  plz update next part soon
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sorry for late comment  Edited by vaishali667 - 12 years ago
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thnks vaishali...but why u send me blank comments...
dont worry i will update soon dear
till then enjy have fun...



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PART-15

Jigar and gopi are laughing, ahem comes to munna'munna {bg music is popat popat with jeerey guj music} sees ahem. Ahem hugs munna'

Munna: kaisey ho mere sher{ how re you my lion}

Ahem: good munna bhai {Munna bhai music starts in BG, munna shy}

Gopi: munnabhai, what a funny name'

Munna: and yours gopi ji dam dam gopi khopadi'.

Gopi: aey np one becomes munna bhai ok if your name munna'.munna chunna..

Munna:{his mouth agin open} what you said me munna chunna'

Rashi: stop it gopi, don't behave like this'.

Kokila:stop  it munna she is your sister-in law'she is not well..

Munna: then get well soon gopi bhabi ji'come kakizzz.

Gopi: {makes faces} rashiben see the way he talked to me'

Rashi: gopi what I told you that now you re married, so behave'

Gopi:but rashiben'

Ahem looks at gopi then munna.

Ahem: god will save our home'pray to god now'

Gopi listen this'. Gopi comes to ahem..

Gopi:why you are saying this?

Ahem: because soon there will be an earthquake in this house'

Gop: earthquake? {gopi thinks,ahem goes}'.

 

All of them goes for breakfast' ahem and jigar leaves for office.. kokila and hetal goes to temple' gopi is still eating..munna sees this'

Munna: ha ha ha ha you are so slow gopi khopdi'kids can also eat fast then you..

Gopi: aey motu {munna bhai style  you fatty} have you seen ever your stomach size..

Munna looks at his stomach'

Gopi: no na your stomach is bigger than  a room'.

Munna: you said me fatty and you illiterate person'

Gopi listen illiterate word'she sees some flashback'but its not cleared'

Flashback

" a man in a suit  is angry and saying you are illiterate and slaps her'{faces are not cleared} gopi closes her eyes and put her hand on her forehead 'rashi comes and see gopi'rashi comes to gopi'"

Rashi: gopi are you okay

Gopi: no I am not well rashiben'

Munna: see her new play I am not well {munna makes faces}

Rashi: please gopi come with me to room and you will take rest.. I will call doctor'

Gopi: {grabs her hand} no rashiben don't call doctor' I am fine' {she drinks water}

Rashi takes gopi to room and make her sleep and she calls to jigar'jigar picks up the call'

Jigar: hello.

Rashi: jigar ji this is rashi'

Jigar: {rude} say fast I don't have enough time to waste on you..

Rashi: {in tears} gopi is not well,

Jigar: {shocked} what happened to gopi bhabi'

Rashi: no she is okay now, I just called to tell you that please come early today.

Jigar: okay.

Rashi: bye

Jigar hangs up the phone. Hetal and kokila also return from temple. Rashi recite what happened to gopi today and now she is fine. Kokila gets worried about gopi. Munna sees kokila.

Munna: kaki don't get worried sometime it happens'lets go out for picnic'

Rashi: that a good idea. We all go and have fun'

Hetal: yes, nice idea munna, I will talk to jigar'why kokila, I am saying right?

Kokil: lets see mota bhabi what ahem says'.

ahem comes home and sits on dining table for dinner...kokila sees ahem mood...ahem is siting silently, gopi is looking at ahem then  munna... 

kokila: ahem dikra

ahem: yes mom.

kokila: as you know that munna came here after long time, he want to see rajkot so we all have decided to go on picnic...

ahem: but mom you know about gopi she is not well. i can't take risk...

munna makes faces and plays with plate...gopi shows tought to munna..munna stares her...

kokila: see ahem i know that you are worried bout gopi but i think if she will we go out with us she will feel better and you both will get time to spend with each other...

ahem: oky mom as u say...

kokila smiles and rashi serves food to everyone...

In the morning:

Everyone one gets ready for the picnic and go out, rashi and

 jigar sits with hetal and parag and kokila sits with ahem, gopi

 including chirag and munna...gopi was about to sit with rashi

when rashi stops her...


gopi: what happened rashi ben?

rashi: nothing u go snd sit with ahem ji...

gopi: but rashiben...

rashi:but vat nothing go and sit...

kokila calls gopi and gopi sees rashi and goes to her...ahem sees 

kokila and wears his gogles, sits in the car...

kokila: gopi you sit in front seat with ahem.

gopi: no i am okay...

kokila: go and sit with him...

gopi sits there and sees ahem...ahem also sees gopi... ahem 

his car and they all go fpr picinic...


hey friends here i end this part...

hope you all will like it...








 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by pihu_rocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey.pihu u just rocks...good going...update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is Gopi flirting with Munna? Hmm... Can't wait for the next chapter