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@ ivy ..thanks so much for reading n enjoying this story hope u like the next part as well
 
@ priyanka ..wow such a wonderful way to give feedback ..will reply to ur comment later ..but thanks so much
 
@ spandy ..glad u liked the updt dear ..now if tasha go off for a honey moon then bachcha to hoga na dear ..lol..but i guess dr. was a bit scared afterall how could he prescribe tasha to go for honeymoon ..lol..now i wish u like the next part as well ..though chances are remote but still keeping my fingers crossed.

rrs ..thanks so much for ur appreciation ..will updt soon

@ azymishi ..wow u like the updt so much esply nakku sleeping on his lap and MS scene ..thank a lot dear ...i know dutta is adorable and we all want him ..lol..
@ krishaa ..i know dutta is rt he cannot do such a thing with nakku at the moment ..glad u liked the updt ..thanks for ur comments
@ ranjana ..thanks for appreciating the updt and understanding duttas feelings ..agree with u both AS and dutta r rt in their own ways so lets see what dutta decided ..
 
@ sinak ..yahh poor dutta ..dont worry things will chng soon
 
@ pooja ..oh ur science student ..then sorry but dear what can i do the way nakku got insane just by running after that black van i couldnt come up with a better idea ...but glad u liked duttas descion and dutta - AS convo ...now waiting to know ur reaction for the next part ...hope u like it  and thanks once again for ur sweet comments
 
 @ bluepal ..agree with u dear dutta is a wonderful husban n he cant think of taking advantage of nakku ..thanks for ur lovely comments ..hope u like the next part as well
 
@ mnx ..agree with u another filmy updt ..lol.but when the whole situation is so filmy i dont have any other option ..lol..
 
@ ramya ..thanks so much
 
@ mlshe ..glad u liked the updt so much ..yup dutta is rt but he cannot ignore nakkus condition as well ..lets see what he decides ..actually dear dutta didnot exactly get into the details while conversing with AS ..lol.. they both talked in a mature manner ..LOL
 
@ yuvika ...lol..dear i didnt copy it from that serial ..actually there was an old show called choodiyaan ..but glad u liked the updt ..ur rt dutta needs to rethink about his decision ..hope he does ..thanks for ur comments
 
@ suhana ..i m so happy to know that u enjoyed it so much ...lol..u want tasha to visit a hill station ..but lets see what dutta has in mind and thanks for respecting duttas feelings ..wish u like the next part as well
 
@ geeta ..oye hoye thank u ji for liking the updt ..no wonder ur excited about the next part ..lol..


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previous parts - pg-1

                                                   Ninth step

Dutta was having breakfast at the dining table when AS cleared her throat to get his attention " humne nakku ki patri purohit ji ko dikhayi thi , unhone aaj ek puja rakhi hai uske liye kul devi ke mandir mein , tum usey le kar chale jaana." He raised his head from the plate and rolled his eyes " AS apko lagta hai in sab puja vuja se koi farak padega?" she was already upset because of his past behavior so replied irritatingly " jo doctor ne kaha tumhein woh bhi manzoor nahin , ab agar hum puja paath se nakku ko theekh karna chahte hain tumhein usmein bhi pareshani hai." He closed his eyes for a minute and then took a deep breath " lekin puja itni door rakhwane ki kya zaroorat thi , yahin karwa lete." She stood up to leave and glared at him " theekh hai tumhein nahin jaana tum mat jao , hum chale jayenge nakku ko leke." He realized that his refusing her constantly for everything was bothering her too much so decided to take nakku himself even though he believed all this wouldnt improve her condition " aap rehene deejiye main chal jaunga usko lekar"

Soon tasha left for the temple,the puja lasted for a couple of hours. after completing the puja, tasha were coming down the stairs when nakku twisted her ankle, she was about to fall down but he held her. Her foot pained a lot and with his support she managed to walk back to the jeep. While returning the jeep broke down. It was getting late and the sky was covered with dark clouds. Dutta got out of the jeep and found that the tyre had punctured. He looked for a spare one but it wasn't there. He kicked the tyre in frustration then remembered that he had seen a garage while returning from the temple, he thought to go back and get a mechanic or spare tyre from there " nakku , main thodi door par jaa raha hoon , abhi 10 minute mein tyre lekar aata hoon , tu yahan se hilna mat aur gaadi se bilkul nahin utarna." She nodded her head in negation " nahin main saath mein jayegi." He didn't want to lose his temper so replied patiently " tu kaise chalegi? Tere pair mein kitna dard hai , main keh raha hoon na ki main aa jaunga jaldi, tu yahin baith aaram se." she crossed her hands across her chest and turned her head to the other side without replying. It had only been a few minutes when dutta left and it began to rain heavily. Rain droplets fell on her face bringing a smile on it. She out stretched her arms to feel the rain drops. A biker passing by saw her enjoying herself in the rain. Soon he started circling her and whistled at her thereby making her feel uncomfortable. He stopped his bike to look at her carefully, the wet saree was sticking to her body and she wrapped her arms around to cover herself properly. He slowly started walking towards her, she gazed around in search of dutta but he wasn't there. He stood in front of her  and said something indecent, she raised her hand to slap him but he caught her hand and pulled her out of the jeep. he held her face tightly but she too kicked him between his legs, he left her face and cried in pain. Her foot was hurting badly but still she tried to walk into the forest as fast as possible, soon the biker caught hold of her, she tried to free herself and screamed "SAAHAAB" which infuriated him further and he slapped her hard she lost her balance and fell down. He pounced on her and ripped her blouse from the shoulder, she yelled out loud in help and he lowered himself on her but the next moment he was kicked off her. Nakku stood up and hugged dutta, he was blazing in anger. He took off his coat and wrapped it around her then started hitting that biker black and blue. He pulled him up by his collar and thrashed his head against a tree, the hands which dared to touch his nakku were crushed under his feet. He looked at nakku who was crying and shivering in fear, he clenched his jaws hard and picked up a heavy stone to smash that persons face who was now asking for forgiveness which didn't affect dutta one bit. He raised the stone high in the air and was about to drop it on him when he saw nakku fainting and collapsing on the ground. He threw the stone the other side and kicked the face of the man lying on the ground with all his mite. He rushed to her side and picked her up in his arms, the bleeding biker had already gone unconscious. He took her back to the jeep and called baaji to come quickly in another car.

Nakkus whole body was burning in fever, the doctor after examining her said that she had fainted out of shock and would gain consciousness soon so there was no need to worry. Dutta sat next to her and saw that the corner of her mouth had a deep cut, her arms had scratch marks ,his blood bolied in anger, he regretted not killing that man but more than that he regretted taking her for that puja and then leaving her alone in the jeep. His one careless act had ruined everything. Nakku in her sleep started rubbing her arms vigorously, to get rid off that bikers touch. His touch made her skin crawl, dutta observed her restlessness and called her out. She opened her eyes with a jerk and sat up immediately. She removed the blanket covering her and stood up. She took a step ahead but felt weak, dutta rushed to her in a flash and she leaned on him to walk towards the washroom. After a minute he heard the shower and wondered why she was taking a bath at this hour and that too when she had high fever. She stepped under the shower and began rubbing herself harshly till her skin turned red. She felt disgusted and impure after that man had touched her, wanted to remove every possible trace of him on her body. After she was tired of standing under the shower she walked out of the washroom slowly. Dutta held her carefully and brought her back to bed " tujhe itna tez bhukhar hai toh is waqt nahanne ki kya zaroorat thi." She didn't reply and laid down under the blanket with eyes closed, he didn't pester her thought may be she was exhausted and needed rest. He too quietly laid on the bed, normally she would automatically cuddle upto him but tonight she laid far away from him, close to the end of the bed, she wanted to distance herself from him.

Which soon became evident from her behavior, she stopped talking and interacting with everybody around. Happenings and people around her ceased to affect her, she was lost in her own pain. Would spend long hours sitting alone near the window gazing out. He and the family tried to cheer her up but all went vain. She simply stopped reacting, the whole incident left a deep impact on her. She felt scarred. He missed her smile, her non stop blabbering, her childish demands, everything. Her silence was killing her with every passing moment, he kneeled in front of her and held her face gently making her look into his eyes " nakku teri yeh chuppi (silence) mujhse bardasht nahin hoti, tujhe gussa karna hai to kar , agar rona hai toh ro magar aise khamosh mat reh, dekh main hoon nah tere saath , bata mujhe kya chal raha hai tere dil mein , kuch toh bol" she had a blank look on her face, her once lively eyes which would convey her feelings now appeared dead, his words had no impact on her, as if she didn't listen to him at all, no pain no emotion was visible on her face, she looked like a lifeless soul.She looked down and saw those marks on her arms once again though they had become light on her skin but were still fresh in her mind, she began rubbing them with disgust, he saw her doing that. He had never felt so helpless and defeated probably because she was always there to support him. He shook her by her shoulders and raised his voice " tujhe kuch nahin hua hai , us kami** ne tera saath kuch nahin kiya , tu sun rahi hai main kya keh raha hoon,dekh meri taraf." She ignored him completely and gazed out of the window, tears of frustration welled up in his eyes. He grabbed her face and buried it in his chest, wrapped his arms around her securely and a tear rolled down his eye even that went unnoticed by her.

Lots of love

ROSE
I know this was totally unexpected but trust me i have reason behind writing all this which u will come to know in the next part , till then plzzz keep the faith and dont hate me.


Edited by stranger2rose - 21 June 2011 at 12:37am

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Good update,Clap no complains, as this is inspired from films, waiting for the next  partSmile

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Originally posted by mnx12

Good update,Clap no complains, as this is inspired from films, waiting for the next  partSmile
no no minaxi its not inspired from any film ..atleast i cannot recall ...this time its 100% original Cry

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Rose Hug yesterday you said you are scared to update but as usual your update is awesome dearWink, oh this is unexpected but liked the twist you brought may be next part will answer what is going in nakku mind and Tasha momentsWink, oh AS kept puja as usual and too far AS will never changeD'ohoh car broke down Confused dutta left nakuu and went ohOuch this man is calling his death on his own how dare to lay hands on nakuu got right treatment from duta ,on nakuu totally disturbed,shocked with this incident ,not responding to any oneCryCry she stoped smiling and talking even to duttaCryCry poor TashaCryCry she is not able to come out of that shockOuch, last scene was very emotional dutta trying to make nakuu speak and react oh nakuu talk to dutta naCryCry poor Tasha hope things get better in next update,Smile jaldi next part update karo na and thanks for this awesome partHug ,ya and rose oh hating you it never happens dearHug and we have faith in youEmbarrassed

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yaar good update no complaint

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Originally posted by mnx12

Good update,Clap no complains, as this is inspired from films, waiting for the next  partSmile
no no minaxi its not inspired from any film ..atleast i cannot recall ...this time its 100% original Cry
Good, it's an original idea, some creative brain might flick this idea, be carefulSmile

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