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Baby Hua Thab Bhi Pyar Waisa! - part 37 updated (Page 31)

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nikita99

That was just tooo romantic. Love the ring exchange idea. Day Dreaming



Thanks dear the idea just popped up and I liked it too

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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by daffodils06

that was so good..read ur scenes just nw...enjoyed it very much dear..keep writing...was very busy..missed reading ur scenes...thank u for writing..


Yeh dear kept waiting for ur ff
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Posted: 02 June 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged

wow yaar all the scenes r sooo romantic...i am speechless

thanks for giving such an awesome ff dear Smile
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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sandy_nivren

wow yaar all the scenes r sooo romantic...i am speechless

thanks for giving such an awesome ff dear Smile


Thanks dear
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
Hey Guys! Sorry to have kept you all waiting for so long but I'm back and that too with a big action scene...Enjoy!!!


Part 22:

Nivi and Viren had returned home and taken blessings from everyone. Now Viren was heading towards his room with sid saying that he needed to talk with him and it is important. Nivi was playing with the children and distributing things to the family. She had purchased a small crystal which said sister's forever for divya. A nice necklace set for chanchal and vandana. A saree for YS and book for DS. She had purchased a small chain for Dwita. A small but nice mirror for nandu to check his hairstyle and she had bought things for dadi too that she would give when she visited them in the evening.
 
Viren had told Sid about all the incidents that happened to them on the way to the hotel. Also Sid told him about the unusual behaviour of some men outside the office.  Viren then was telling about the day that the babies were born and how they were almost squashed by the car. Then they decided to be extra careful the coming days. Viren saw Nivi at the doorway with Sid's shirt in her hand. She slowly gave it to him and Sid excused himself and left. Nivi looked at Viren with pain struck eyes. Why hadn't he told her this? She thought that they had only faced some days ago but no Bhaiji had been following them from long before. Viren assured her that as long as he was alive he would protect her and the children even if that means costing his...Nivi closed his mouth with her palm before he could continue. "Nahi Viren mein tumhare bina jhi nahi sakthi" she exclaimed before hugging him and having tears rolling down her cheeks. Viren promised that they would get to the end of this. 

Two days  had passed and Viren was on the way to work when he saw a car following him for quite a long distance. He had a plan and so he led him to a mall parking lot before climbing out of the car and going to the nearby bathrooms. He waited for a while inside until he saw the man enter. Viren punched him in the stomach and pulled him to the wall and pinned him. Who are you and why are you following me? Asked viren but the man was not ready to give an answer. Viren slapped him and kicked him and finally he opened his mouth and gave him an answer. He slowly summarised how he was supposed to keep an eye on him until Bhaiji's men killed Nivi. The word "killed" had sent shocks of pain through Viren as him forced him to continue. The man said that they had kidnapped the driver and replaced him with a man from their own gang. Why? questioned Viren and he replied that today was the day Nivi goes to the temple and Viren thought about the point and yes it was true and the man dragged on saying that the driver would drive off to the cliff and jump out letting the car to drop off the edge... Viren was now in a mode of panic. He looked at his watch and noticed it ticking to 9.00 the time that Nivi usually left to the mandir. He locked the man in the bathroom and stole his phone so he wouldn't contact anyone. He called Sid and quickly updated him before calling Nivi again and again but she was not picking up.

Nivi was in the car with the children sitting on her lap. She noticed the phone blinking on her side with Viren's call but her hands were too full to pick it up. Divya was coming too with her today and she was happy to have some company. Divya smiled at her and climbed in the car with Dwita. She said I'll answer the phone and picked it up. "Hello. Devarjhi bholiye" Viren was happy that finally there was some response. "Hello. bhabhi Niveditha kaha hain" Divya answered that they were both going to the madir when suddenly the signal started weakening. Viren screamed Hello Hello but it was no use he couldn't hear Divya at all. Divya tried to hear too but after a try she cut the phone telling Nivi that she should talk to him when they reach there. She nodded and asked the driver to go and he nodded smiling under his hat. As he kept his foot on the gas pedal and hurried on. The security man had been informed by Sid but he tried to chase the car but it was too late they were off.

Viren and Sid were driving to the cliff in tension. panic and outrage as they thought about their family being ruined to shreds. Viren had informed him on how unusually Divya was going today. They both concentrated as they turned their cars round every corner in a hurry to get there before its too late. 
Nivi and Divya were playing with the kids when they saw the car pass by the mandir. "Hey app kaha jaa rahi hain, mandir toh waha hain" said Divya pointing after the fast disappearing temple through the window. The man let out a huge laugh and Nivi and Divya gripped onto each other. He slowly explained his plan to kill them all. They panicked and shrieked and swayed at the movement of the car. They tried to call but their phones had slid and fallen under their legs and it was very difficult to reach. The doors were locked too.  The children began to cry and Nivi and Divya hugged each other for what could be their last time together. The car sped on in the direction of the cliff. 

suddenly before the car came two cars one from either side and the driver without any choice pressed the brakes as the car came to a screeching halt. Nivi and Divya had closed their eyes waiting for death to approach them when they heard the large creek as they came to a stop. They slowly opened their eyes to see the driver opening the door and running away. They were delighted to see the two cars opening and out came Sid and Viren. They were happy for the job well done. They had turned round each corner and parked both their car in front of the cliff forcing the man to a halt as according to the guy Viren had inquired he would jump out and then the car would fall off the cliff. Meaning that the driver wanted to live and they knew if that was the case then he would definitely press the brakes to save himself. Nivi and Divya opened the door and ran to their embraces which was now open as the driver clicked the lock as he ran out. It was so good to be safe or so they thought. Viren hugged Nivi he held her and the children preciously. His life was with him and that was what mattered. 

They all turned to the sound of clapping hands to see Bhaiji standing their in his jeep. They were shocked to see him there. He smiled and laughed before saying that he was planning to kill one but now killing all the younger generation seemed a great idea. Nivi and Divya ran and got in their husband's car before locking the door and windows. Viren and sid were fighting now along the edges far away from the side where they had parked the cars and the men were hitting them. Some men were distubing Nivi and Divya as they hit and broke the windows. They were each protecting their own children as they were putting their hands through the doors. Bhai ji was sitting in his car and commanding his men. Viren and Sid had finished off some men and so he commanded the other men to leave Nivi and Divya and go get them. They were fighting now more fiercely. When Bhai ji sensed his men were losing he decided to take it in his own shoulders. 

He put the car in to gear and went straight towards the edge where Viren and Sid were fighting the men. Viren noticed him coming and he stopped fighting and jumped to the side pushing sid as well as they rolled down. Viren barely lifted his head to see the jeep run over the men they were fighting before it lost control and slipped off the edge. That was one end to their enemy that they would never forget. 

How did you like it guys? Do comment...
Next up - babies at the office - are yeh kya hogaya?



Edited by chandmeinchupi - 04 June 2011 at 1:23am

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
hey fathima...superb update...
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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
LOL it was way too action packed loved it yeah little bit dissappointed that little romance just jking !!
LOl love how both the heroes fight bhaiji's goons literally culd imagine the scene n culd sense Viren's pain in his eyes finding abt Nivi n his children hope all ends well in Mahaepisode!!
Nivren remain safe n together foerver!!!

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Posted: 04 June 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
Hey Fathima...nice one yaar..so bhaiji is killed finally... Dancing

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