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Analysis on Rain Sequence (Plus My POV)

Rehana86 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
Ok, so I decided to include the "unedited" part of the sequence into my analysis...read the entire analysis to find out what I mean here...Wink...By the way, It's completely based on what I feel about the entire sequence...therefore, you will find some changes from the actual scene Smile...that's it!! and feel free to kill me!!Tongue...I'm all yours !!Day Dreaming
 
A fraction of fear came across her heart when she did not find him there...it can not be just a dream!...and she took a sigh of relief when her eyes caught him...a smile of joy appeared on her face, giving it a fresh glow...she admired him when he was busy enjoying the first touch of the rainy season...
 
The cool breeze & the droplets of the passionate bliss had blended together to bless him... it was the heaven on earth!... when all of a sudden everything ceased to exist for him as soon as his intense gaze caught the ravishing sight of her...he was fortunate to own this elegent piece of art created by God, just for him ... scanning her delicate structure wrapped by his gift, he stopped at those innocent honey brown eyes and watched her walking up to him ... not for a single moment they looked away from each other...
 
With a gesture he invited her to join him in the pleasant aura of Love, when she gently refused with a smile... then walking upto her, he splashed a few gems towards her when she turned her face away as she felt the cool droplets against her skin... like a gentleman, he then offered his right hand with a smile and this time she could not refuse him but extended her left hand, letting him escort her to his love-land...
 
The moment, those sensuous breeze & fresh drops of rain embraced her figure, she opened her arms, letting them accept her with a warm welcome... entering his paradise of love was indeed a blissful moment for her... she could feel every single piece of his divine love around her...she spun around to enjoy every bit of the heaven when he gently pulled her into his arms as she bumped into him...and eyes refused to let go off each other...
 
The poor heart reacted abruptly to her proximity... 'Dear God! She is Beautiful'...his fingers had the urge to feel her soft skin as they removed those drenched hair away from her face... when his eyes caught the sight of her lower lip and an instant desire took place in his heart...he wanted to taste those lucious parted lips and feel them against his... but before he could fulfill his desire, she just ran away from him, leaving his heart yearn for her...
 
His proximity was not doing any good to her heart as it started to beat faster than ever... God! She Loved Him... Turning back, with a smile she watched him coming towards her, then standing a few feet away, he decided to admire her beauty when her eyes asked for his wish & he honestly answered her to come into his arms, where she genuinely belonged ...
 
Even God had decided to send his will power to fulfill the man's wish, when she just ran into his arms, thanks to the lightening...and he tightend his hold around her...he wanted to hide her in his heart forever...away from this cruel world...she was destined to be in his heart, the true heaven...
 
He sighed to witness her again going away from him...gradually walking upto her, he removed those long wet hair from her back to leave a gentle kiss on her lower shoulder, causing her to react instantly to his heated passion against her skin & she turned around to face him when their gaze met... then very carefully his left hand slipped into the right curve of her neck while thumb was caressing her soft jawline, he moved forward to taste those wet lips only to miss her yet again... But this time he caught her on time, not ready to let go of her again...
 
He was aware of her state of heart, which had an equilibrium reaction with his passion... it seemed to be increasing exponentially when he placed a soft peck on her left hand followed by a series of intense kisses tracing up to her arm all the way to her shoulder ... it was a journey to heaven... the exotic aroma of her soft soothing skin was driving him crazy to let her go...she was the cure to his passionate desire...
 
She again moved away from him when he attempted to feel those lips against his... and he smiled to himself...he loved her for her sweet & pure innocence...
 
Right on time, he got to collect her from falling... Like hell, he would let any harm come towards her...she deserved love & only love from him... she was born to be loved by him... she was destined to be loved by him... he could never think of hurting her... she was a priceless gift from God & he would treasure her for the rest of his life... with this thought, he held her face only to let go of her ... he did not want to nervous her away again when he decided to walk away but to his surprise, he felt her hand, stopping him from leaving her all alone in the paradise of love ...
 
She needed him for support & company... if she was a priceless gift for him, then he was her 'silent prayer', a symbol of every beautiful part of her life... in fact, he would turn all the hardships of life into wonderful moments for her to cherish... he deserved to be appreciated ... but she had got nothing to give him except her unconditional pure love, when she touched his finger with her lips... it was just a small coin of love dedicated to him for showering his love on her... but he deserved more than that for his constant sincerity, honesty, support & love... collecting all her courage she moved forward to express her gratitude through a simple & gentle kiss on his cheek... another coin from her, but this time, it contained her true feelings for him...She had her eyes closed...tried to embrace all the overpowering emotions that were developing inside her...
 
He felt blessed... he was indeed truly blessed when he cupped her face into his hands and decided to reciprocate her divine love as he moved closer to leave a kiss on her forehead...then tracing down her face, he dedicated two kisses to her diamond-like eyes... finally, it was time to go through the emotions together when he finally closed the distance between them... the first touch of her parted pink lips was sweet... she tasted like silent heaven as he intensely explored her...
 
She grabbed onto his shirt for support as she felt her knees going weak before his strong passion of love...she could hear her heart pounding... it was a blend of love, passion, commitment, sincerity, honesty, support, trust & faith... she felt each and every emotion in his successful single attempt of touch... before he could lose his sense completely & end up hurting her, he came back to the world & picked her up... She perfectly fitted into his protective arms... and both headed for a trip to heaven, when he took over her heart and soul ... they belonged to each other in a true meaning...
 
luv
rehana


Edited by Rehana86 - 18 May 2011 at 6:47pm

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
ahahah if you change anything that is factual it becomes a ... FFic ? so thank you for the disclaimer as it is your take and view on it, your perception rather than a depiction of what was shown...and i have no intention on killing you girl ;-)

will edit later...


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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
HOT HOT HOT...SIZZLING ANALYSIS FOR A SIZZLING SCENE!

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Posted: 18 May 2011 at 8:06pm | IP Logged

thank you both Melli & Jay didz LOL...n NOPE! it's not a FF Tongue

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged
awesome and SIZZLING!!LOLLOL
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 2:14am | IP Logged
hot and sizzling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 8:12am | IP Logged
Need I comment on yr work... As usual, mindblowing...Hug

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wow wow wow...awesome awesome awesome...

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