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Rudranethra (ss) maaneet part 6 pg 40 updated (Page 9)

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Nice concept... Good going..plzz continue soon... 

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Hi...Jwalamukhi...so this is also ur SS...how many FFs ,SS,OS u have written any link of ur work...actually I become ur fan...sooo different ur concept are from other FFs. Please pm me.

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pls update soon... I m waiting for d next part... n pls maintain an index at starting... its very difficult to find d exact page... n keep all d links of ur ss n os in one place pls... thank u in advanceSmile

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Part 3

geet eyes widened in shock when she heard her name from a stranger...An unknown fear started to fill her heart when she looked into his eyes..She quickly came back to her senses and got out of maan's embrace...but maan was reluctant to leave her. He pulled her towards him saying..."aaqir kabtak mujhse dhur bhaagthe rahoge geet?".

geet couldnot take anymore after hearing those words from him...She angrily turned towards him and said"kaun hey aap...aur meri naam aapko kaise patha?"trying to free her hands from maan's...

maan smiled mad looked into her eyes seductively saying..."tumhe patha nahi mein kaun hu?"...geet lost herself looking into his eyes...maan this time totally pulled her into his embrace and asked more seductively removing the hair starnd faaling on her face..."bolo geet..tumhe nahi patha mein kaun hu?"..geet swallowed hard not knowing what to do and how to react...As the whole scene took place on the main road some people gathered around them...seeing this maan forcibly made geet to sit in his car...though geet protested her efforts were invain...maan sat  in the driver seat and started driving the car...

In the car geet tried hard to stop maan.But all her attempts were futile before maan..."aaqir kaun hey aap ..kaha le jaa rahe hey mujhe"...said geet in anger with tears in her eyes...maan looked at her..her tears made his heart weak...he immediately stopped the car...he tried to wipe her tears..but geet moved away from him...maan forcibly brought her close to him...wiped her tears...saying.."aasu nahi geet..mein tuhare aankhon mein aasu nahi dekh saktha"...geet got shocked with the concern he was showing on her...

"plz..mujhe chod dijiye...mujhe sach much patha nhai aap kaun hey...mein aapko pehle baar dekh rahi hu..."said geet in tears looking at maan helplessly...maan closed his eyes in pain...and said "tek hey geet...agar tum mujhe chod ke jaana chahthi ho..ttho teek hey...chale jao..lekin ek baath geet...jithna jaldhi tum mujhe chod ke jaoge...uthna hi jaldhi mere paas ..mere baahon mein aaoge..."

geet looked at him in surprise...maan turned his head aside and started driving the car again...geet couldnot understand what was maan's motive...suddenly the car stopped..geet looked at maan...

"tumhara ghar aagaya geet" said maan looking away from geet...geet got shocked and sat speechless..."jao geet...andher jao...tumhare dad tumhare bare mein sochke pareshan ho raha hey...aur haan yeh lo umbrella lelo..."

said these words maan gave umbrella to geet...geet looked at the umbrella and maan in surprise...she asked "yeh kisliye" looking at umbrella...maan smiled...and said..."tumhe khudh patha chalega"...

geet got down from the car...the moment she got down the car..it started raining heavily...then she understood why maan gave her umbrella...she looked at maan in wonder.. who was smiling and leaving the place...while leaving maan again turned his car ..came near geet...saying "geet aaj raath 10 baje hum milne wale hey...issi ghar mein..."...without waiting for geet's response maan started his car and left the place...leaving geet in a mixed state of wonder,confusion and fear...

when maan left geet...and her residence surprisingly he totally forgot what happened to him in the past 1 hour..while driving all the memories of that one hour faded completely...the only thing he could remember was the name "geet"...at one moment he wondered why he was driving the car in that route which he had never been before...he stopped the car in frustration...he rubbed his template...thinking..."kya hua mujhe...mujhe office jaana tha..per mein iss raasthe pe kya kar raha hu...aur yeh geet kaun hey...kyu yeh naam mujhe baar baar yaad araha hey? kya natha hey mujhse...:..

he snapped out of his thoughts when his mobile rang...it was from his mother ganga...he tried to calm himself and answered the call..."beta mujhe patha hey ki iss bath sun kar tum bahuth naraaz hojaoge..lekin mujhe koi aur raastha nahi mila..." said ganga in a shaking voice...

man got confused and was about to ask his mother...but ganga without giving him any chance to talk said " beta aaj mein ek baba se mila...unhone kaha ki agar hum ujjain mein shan thi homa kiya tho tumhare saare taqleef dhoor hojayegs...isliye mein jaa rahi hu..."

maan became furious..." maa aap kahi nahi ja rahe hey...that's final..." said maan angrily...

"nahi beta...mujhe jaana hi hoga...bas do din mein wapas aaongi" said these words ganga cut the call leaving maan in anger and confusion and without giving him any chance to stop her...maan tried to her mobile several times..but ganga switched off her phone...he threw the phone on car seat in anger and drove towards his home...when  he reached home ..he found that his mother already left for ujjain...


                                                                                              to be continued...



Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 June 2011 at 7:01am

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