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The girl next door - Ch 103 - pg 108; note pg 109 (Page 96)

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Posted: 18 September 2011 at 11:56am | IP Logged
update plz...!

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Please update soon ;) I know I know I am being inpatient but I can't help it :p its all ur fault too! :P ;)
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dol i must say u r just too good...even in such a mess u thought of updating...

i just cant explain...u r amazing...HugHug
never say never...and fight till forever to make it right...Big smile


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OMG!  its such a heartwarming  update...
 family of kitz is so adorable and understanding...i alwz fall short of words to describe d characters of ur story...
DAD khanna convinced adi's parents...Star and mom khanna put on d necklace ..finally SIMS witnessed d happiest moment of her life wid most adorable people around her...

such a kodak moment..Tongue


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dol i must say u r just too good...even in such a mess u thought of updating...

i just cant explain...u r amazing...HugHug
never say never...and fight till forever to make it right...Big smile


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Thanks a ton darling...hugs hugs. I have to admit...you got lucky because most of it was already written. I can't promise the same frequency of updates from now on :(



its totally fine dear...infact its ok even if u dont update at all...Smile
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God i am just in love with every single character of this ff...

be back soon! 


Okay Chapter 97

love the different perspectives of different characters that went through the part! We went from R to K to S... 
How do you do it so smoothly? no hiccups? no confusions as to who is the speaker? Its absolutely perfect! 

lol - completely laughed at the father-daughter duo i am just dying to know who will give in first and TALK! Poor R in the middle of it all... can't be saved from either side. 

I actually completely didn't see you getting A and S married... at all and now that I read it its fits so freaken perfectly! 


Edited by bushrayou - 19 September 2011 at 6:52pm
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Dol!!!!

You outdid yourself with this particular chapter!!
Every chapter has been awesome, but this one stands out completely!!
Its my favorite of this story so far!!

THANK YOU SO MUCH, for bringing alive my thoughts on the A-S wedding!! You have portrayed everything that I had been hoping for, for the A-S wedding... the same mandap, Keerti's parents giving her away, her mom putting the set on her, doing her kanyadaan, Adi's parents being present for the wedding, just about everything seemed to have been covered here..
Its like you got into my mind and put it all in words, but much more beautifully!!
The scene between Keerti's dad and Simran, was very very beautifully described!!!!
It was a heart-touching portrayal of Simran's feelings, her emotions about everything that she felt about this overwhelming surprise!
Absolutely BRILLIANT chapter!!!


And I still have to add that -- the last statement of the chapter had an Ominous ring to it!!! While I am hoping she will never have to take anyone's life to repay what the Khanna's have done for her, why do I get the feeling, that its something that will come true!!
And we all know what that would mean!! Ouch


Edited by armaania13 - 19 September 2011 at 11:38am

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