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MNff...ARDHANGINI..TH#2..last part...18/6.PG 33 (Page 39)

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 11:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by komal991

hey fizza!

what to say yaar?? i quite upset yaar itna zaberdast ff itni jalde end hogaya ek do saal tu drag kerte na serials ki terhaan kher 
every good thing comes to end so its ok but its realyyy  nice n cool story by u ! after BECAUSE U LOVED ME its totally different story u write in which u shows emotion, unconditional love , frdship , pain, betrating everything beautifully.
  i love the masti bharay dialogues b/w mayur , sayank n sanu n the very very special bond between nupur's dad n mayank its realy rare to find a relationship like that n thank god u not make her dad mogembo in the ff!!
              but one thing i expected in ur epilogue was guilty samraat and  he was forgiven by mayank n nupur but i red u not even mentioned his name not in a last part nor in epilogue thats not fair honey ... anyway thats the only thing i thought to tell u  as a true reader !!! ager bura lagay tu sorry yaaar i duno want to hurt u!!!

love
komal Heart




 
bulkil mjhy tum sab ekta kappoor ban ker nhi choro ga...itni capacity nhi meri ek kahni ko likh ny ki...
i know samrat for all of u just went away like this...samrt for me as writer here was for purpose as his purpose filled i didnt went to exgerte his charcter n potry it like hindi film villan...he was punished if u gonne throught th first lines of previuos chpt...n i dont want him to cum back say sorry n evrythng fine
it doent happen..
n y shud i mind yaar...its ur storyy uall belon to it...u can say anything u want
thnks for satying it n finding time readin n comenting it ..
thnks lov ya
 

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Posted: 21 June 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Fiza,(My Cascade ur sadu+ khadoos+ aur bhi hai nehi bataungi...Big smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.)  and Vally(My shahsi kala)--- baas baas mujhe aur jaida e motional maat karo... baccho ki jaan le logi kya???
aisa acche acche bat karoge tou mera pao zameen pe nehi asmano pe uregi...


Thank u fiza- thank u so much for givng us such a nce FF and thank u so much for giving me frnds like u(monkey), Valley(my poor shashi kala- jo mera har pagal pan pyar se accept kar leta hainLOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Big smile ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.),,, the extra emotional frnd maha ...(lol maine ekbar comment karna bhol gayi tou wo ro pari...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.)---- i luv u all guys
u all have a very crucial part in my LIFE.
MAY ALLAH blerss u all- humari dosti humesha aisa accha + age ja kar aur bhi mazboot ho- ye dua karti hu..

nd FIza ji waiitng for ur net FF- taki main valley ki tang kuch sakti hu...LOL ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page.Wink ... Shift+R improves the quality of this image. Shift+A improves the quality of all images on this page... i really miss it...

Love ya all
yaar kasm se valiyah ny mjhy itna emotional kerdiya hai k 5 times us k coment parhny k bad bhi i cant just rply here..im still spechlees..
 
aur tu...man*****/...*****./***** aur kitni suno tujhy bata mjhy bata ...shram nhi ati kholam kholam meri izaat horahi hai ...
 
but the bst was maha 's definition ...i was lughing like anythng at office n i ask her to cum n see...n she was laughing to...n hay mien asi hoon kiya...lol...
ayy meir shila ko tu ny shikria ban diya hitler
 
ameen Allah keray humari dosti aur bahray..i cant afford to loos u ..u knw tht wht u mean to me...u valiyah maha...suja..jiya ...u all r too close to me ..han bus thori teri taraf mein shayad zayada biass hoon
 
likh tu rahin hoon ab bachy gi ja lay gi kya ...
 
lov ay
aur yea h lay
ek saaza

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Faria-

Fiza,(My Cascade ur sadu+ khadoos+ aur bhi hai nehi bataungi...Big smileLOL)  and Vally(My shahsi kala)--- baas baas mujhe aur jaida e motional maat karo... baccho ki jaan le logi kya???
aisa acche acche bat karoge tou mera pao zameen pe nehi asmano pe uregi...


Thank u fiza- thank u so much for givng us such a nce FF and thank u so much for giving me frnds like u(monkey), Valley(my poor shashi kala- jo mera har pagal pan pyar se accept kar leta hainLOLBig smile),,, the extra emotional frnd maha ...(lol maine ekbar comment karna bhol gayi tou wo ro pari...LOLLOL)---- i luv u all guys
u all have a very crucial part in my LIFE.
MAY ALLAH blerss u all- humari dosti humesha aisa accha + age ja kar aur bhi mazboot ho- ye dua karti hu..

nd FIza ji waiitng for ur net FF- taki main valley ki tang kuch sakti hu...LOLWink.. i really miss it...

Love ya all
yaar kasm se valiyah ny mjhy itna emotional kerdiya hai k 5 times us k coment parhny k bad bhi i cant just rply here..im still spechlees..
 
aur tu...man*****/...*****./***** aur kitni suno tujhy bata mjhy bata ...shram nhi ati kholam kholam meri izaat horahi hai ...
 
but the bst was maha 's definition ...i was lughing like anythng at office n i ask her to cum n see...n she was laughing to...n hay mien asi hoon kiya...lol...
ayy meir shila ko tu ny shikria ban diya hitler
 
ameen Allah keray humari dosti aur bahray..i cant afford to loos u ..u knw tht wht u mean to me...u valiyah maha...suja..jiya ...u all r too close to me ..han bus thori teri taraf mein shayad zayada biass hoon
 
likh tu rahin hoon ab bachy gi ja lay gi kya ...
 
lov ay
aur yea h lay
ek saaza


@BOLD-Yah Fizu- me too cant afford tit re... i really loved u al. i knw suja and jiya through thier awesome FF and within small period of time they became my est frnds... ajkal in dono se baat nehi hoti.. but i really miss them lots...


Btw me , Vally, Maha.. and all r waiting for ur new FF... do start sonn
take care

aur ha mujhe saza nehi chaiye - yaar chaiye...lol llol lol

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -moona-

ist of all thnx to u for providing us such a Brilliant Story, one of the best FF here and Loved the Last part too, i thoroughly enjoyed the journey, i am in love with these Nupur and Mayank, Specially with Nupur she was True ardhangini, who always stands for Mayank, and i cant choose 1 thing about the FF which i loved the Most, i simply Loved the FF..and a Big Thnx to u Fiza ji..Hug
helloo mona darling
though with time ur coments had shrinked...but sumhow ur few lines said it alll...n it always left me soo so soso happy n blessd to have u as a reader...
so gald n thnkufull to u for styin here throughout the journey...
thnks for feeling the soul of the story
 
lov ya fiza
 
Really my comments are shrinked..??ShockedEmbarrassed
and Thnx for giving us such a WonderFul Story which is very close to my Heart..

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 2:43am | IP Logged
lol...thanks manytimes it's like i can't decide what to say about the update like how i liked it...but i liked my nameLOL. that's really sweet

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

*Sighs*...with heavy heart...!!!

Its the first time i was not eager enough to comment...SORRY...as i didn't want this journey to end sooner...im still not over it nor will be in future too...but had to comment for this mindblowing work of urs... sorry kept u waited...but sacchi i still don't believe this beautiful journey came to the end...!!!

Okk coming to the update...!!!
True time may change but what is unchanged is Love...n if it happens to change than only for the better...as its increases with every passing day...!!!
Ahha...Mr. Sharma is at Mrs. Preggy Sharma's service  so sweet...bechara biwi ko khush karne ke chakker mein kitchen ka kabaar khana bana diyaLOL...ahem ahem defo a better way to taste...sour yet sweet...Mr. Intelligent Romantic SharmaWink...!!!

Oh...becharey ko delivery room mein bhi nahi chora Nupur ne...seedha maarne ki dhamkiROFL...super duper hilarious...the whole time she was cursing him n bechara being the sweet sharma he is sirf han mein han  milata rahaROFL...the amount of  pain he went through out the delivery process shows the intensity of his love n concern for her...he least bothered abt his pain she caused piercing her nails...what mattered for him was only HER..." Itna pain to share kar sakta hoon hain na"...proves what marriage vows means to him...excellent Fiza Thumbs Up...!!!

Awww Raj is just the cutest n adorable too...bilkul parents ka photocopyTongue...loved honest words of Mayank " Usko dekh kar waisey hi kuch yaad nahi rehta"... simple yet romantic...soo innocently he confessed agn...it only proves his immense love which increased with every passing moment...these simple yet touchy things is what i like the most in ur FFs...!!!

Haha..2 mins silenceLOL...they can really be funny whatever situation may be...not to forget this is what  The Sharmas r excel at...!!!

"Its okk..u always make feel special everyday"..."Kya kero sweet heart ap her roz mujhe itne saarey gifts deti hai ki wajah janna mein jaroori nahi samajhta...simply proves no particular day n reason is needed to shower love...what is needed is just LOVE which they truly deeply madly does...!!!
Little teasing n blushing during Mayank's special gift session is too adorable Embarrassed...!!!

WOW Master Sharma is pretty much smart...kyun na ho Mr & Mrs Sharma ka asar hai...soo sweet of him to save for six long months to present them the gift of their choice...its actually the Feelings which matters the most...the way u wrote simply shows the love n concern this family is knitted with... feet touching part reflects the respect they hold for each other which is agn very imp for a family to blossom...Amazingly written Clap...!!!

The BEST of this update...."Thanks for being in my life...thats words can't...!!!

Ardhangini was mere a word SHE gave it a meaning...she proved to be his Ardhangini in truest sense...!!!

Be what a religion is the meaning of Ardhangini is alike...life is incomplete without ur better half...n its not easy to be one...being selfless n to love unconditionally expecting nothing in return is really tough but if u love truly nothing is impossible...This is what we got to know from this outstanding work of URS...U truly did justice to this word...U brought out the true meaning of it in the most simplest way...Thanks for providing us with this lovely piece...U actually showed the true meaning of LOVE...it was an AMAZING journey...hope u got ur first answer what ARDHANGINI has been for me...!!!

Coming to the next...U actually did justice to every particular part...no loopholes...u connected every little things n tied them very smoothly...be it ND...SA...MD...Rooftop...or...Mukti...with no rush...no mess...JUST PERFECT...every update has its BEST in it...no part is less than the ohter...U gave in perfectly what required...so for me har part khud mein best hai...!!!

But the best of the story so far is YOU.....yes u read it correct...its U...!!!
ARDHANGINI is ARDHANGINI bcoz of U...its U who made this happened...U gave meaning to every emotion in it ...Its U who hooked us from the very first till last update...So a standing ovation for U with lots of hugsHug...!!!

The best of the bestest that happened is US....not to forget FARU n MAHA....!!!
Ardhangini gave me with 3 precious gifts of life...this FF brought us closer with every update...with u came Faru(my pagal) n Maha...just wanted to tell u guys that i feel truly blessed to have u in my life...ur friendship means alot...Thanks alot Fizu for ur love n concern u show at times when needed the most...words r not enough to express what i feel for u...Thankyou Fiza for this Beautiful journey...Thanks for ur unconditional love...it hurts to read its the last time u r addressing in this FF...but remember whether u address or not i was...is n will be very much present in this thread as i do read BYLM till date...so i will be doing the same here...soo its not at all end to me...its actually a new beginning towards a friendship LIFE LONGApprove...!!!



 

So tht was the reason of ur late coment …I was so scared …u know n ai wait for ur coments thn….sum how I always loved writng this ff..i enjoyed doing so ..it came up just the way I wanted …n the bst tht u all loved it so much

 

Lol…I love uuu….alteast sum1 comented on the update….thnkuu….i just want it to gave a hilarious ending ..they way throughtout this ff u all have been smiling I want u to do so in end to o…

 

Thnks feeling the smiple dialogues to be romantic n loved will….for me a gesture is more romantic thn a kiss…imlike tht so enjoyed potraying like this…..

2min k silence credit to maha..honeslty it was n sms joke wch I took

Aur yeah date bhool jana

Yeah mein khud ko protect ker rhi hoon mjhy khud yada nhi rahti kisi ki brdthday ..cell mein reminder meray liyan hi tu hai

Thnks for agrreing with me

 

N wht is this ..u know I droped my jaw n im still  looking for it …u made me hell embaresed..n a bow done to u for the love n ur words more thn tht ur feeling for me..

True I nevr thought I will found such true frnd here ….bt u all gave me so may relations….thnks aloot….i want to say too much but I cant just out it in words

Amen may we stay like ths

Lova ya

Fiza

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Originally posted by -Faria-

Fiza,(My Cascade ur sadu+ khadoos+ aur bhi hai nehi bataungi...Big smileLOL)  and Vally(My shahsi kala)--- baas baas mujhe aur jaida e motional maat karo... baccho ki jaan le logi kya???
aisa acche acche bat karoge tou mera pao zameen pe nehi asmano pe uregi...


Thank u fiza- thank u so much for givng us such a nce FF and thank u so much for giving me frnds like u(monkey), Valley(my poor shashi kala- jo mera har pagal pan pyar se accept kar leta hainLOLBig smile),,, the extra emotional frnd maha ...(lol maine ekbar comment karna bhol gayi tou wo ro pari...LOLLOL)---- i luv u all guys
u all have a very crucial part in my LIFE.
MAY ALLAH blerss u all- humari dosti humesha aisa accha + age ja kar aur bhi mazboot ho- ye dua karti hu..

nd FIza ji waiitng for ur net FF- taki main valley ki tang kuch sakti hu...LOLWink.. i really miss it...

Love ya all
yaar kasm se valiyah ny mjhy itna emotional kerdiya hai k 5 times us k coment parhny k bad bhi i cant just rply here..im still spechlees..
 
aur tu...man*****/...*****./***** aur kitni suno tujhy bata mjhy bata ...shram nhi ati kholam kholam meri izaat horahi hai ...
 
but the bst was maha 's definition ...i was lughing like anythng at office n i ask her to cum n see...n she was laughing to...n hay mien asi hoon kiya...lol...
ayy meir shila ko tu ny shikria ban diya hitler
 
ameen Allah keray humari dosti aur bahray..i cant afford to loos u ..u knw tht wht u mean to me...u valiyah maha...suja..jiya ...u all r too close to me ..han bus thori teri taraf mein shayad zayada biass hoon
 
likh tu rahin hoon ab bachy gi ja lay gi kya ...
 
lov ay
aur yea h lay
ek saaza


@BOLD-Yah Fizu- me too cant afford tit re... i really loved u al. i knw suja and jiya through thier awesome FF and within small period of time they became my est frnds... ajkal in dono se baat nehi hoti.. but i really miss them lots...


Btw me , Vally, Maha.. and all r waiting for ur new FF... do start sonn
take care

aur ha mujhe saza nehi chaiye - yaar chaiye...lol llol lol
tera us ff ke waja se mjhy jitna parhna par raha hai na life mein nhi paraha...arm se baht ...woh atlest 10 chp likhy k bad update kero gi ...cant aford loop wholes in it
 
yaar tu tera hi hai tjhy shak hai

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 1:04pm | IP Logged
superbbb ff 
amazing :D 
claps fr u amazing :D 

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