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CHAPTER 26 C (last part)

With passing days there are certain thngs tht do nt change 'if we assure n promise tht whtevr howerve we are'this the bst way thngs shud move''..

Yeah tuM ker kiay rahy hoo'

UFF NUPUR u have lost it'im cooking

Per meray kitchen ko kiya kiya''.

Ek tu wifey im cooking for u n u''

Acah pati dev kiya ban raha hai'..

Khatay aloo'.wanna taste'..he put one in her mouth.. waited for her expression for a moment

She closed her eyes'in tuich'.as it was too sour

Mayank..its to sour but thy r yumi'..hmm taste 'she offered him one

He grinned'

Sliding his hand on her waist he pull her close'..causing her to collide to him

I have better way to taste it'..n he leaned a sour yet sweet dish''

'''''.

Mayank agar tum meray asa pass bhi aay na ab tum mein tumhain maar dalo gi

Nupur..relax pls realx'.arms se clam down'

Clam down '.mera dil chah rah hai tumhara qatal kerdo''ahh

Nupur'hey shone im there with u na'.pls slow donw shout me ny wate ur enegy ../.bad mein mjy mar dal na'..abhi conc..

Ya im dying with pain right now'..yeah sab kuch tumhari wajaha se hoaa hai

I know I know'.but abhi pls realx'..pls'

With  one hand she was holding the starchier n with other his hand'so tigly tht her nails were too tiged in his skin..he didn't complained as she was in much more thn he can imainge..n moreover he was freaking out 'due to the sight'..

Here u go MR.sharam'.ur lillte boy..

He hold it with proud '.dekho nupur mera beta'.

We dropy eyes she looked at the little fellow'oye mera bhi hai''

He kissed her forehead'..thnks'..

Ur absoulty not at all welcum'..

Sorry'he said with so much guilt as if he was the only cause of all the pain

She chukled n collide her head with is''thanks stupis Sharma

He winked'ur more thn welcum'..hmm'hold him..he put there son in her arms'n she grip his hand'.n looked at him in guilt to wch he looked at her in surprise'..

Im sorry tumhara hath'.OMG '

There were very deep scres of nails on his hand''.

Heeyy'he put his arms around her shoulder'n sat beside her ..promised to share evrythng with u..itna pain tu share ker sakta hoon'haina'..

She kissed his cheek''

Be just like ur dad

No down b dumb in love like me''

Mayank'..pls'dnt'

Acha na'.phir se dahoot gi'pora labour room dekh raha tha ..pati per atiyachar

Acha aur mjhy per jo horaha tha woh kiya tha'.

Tu mein ny kiya kiya

Tum ny kya kiyaa'..

ND: ab kya kiya is ny

Mayank: batao batoo..kya kya kiya mein ny'.

Nupur: dad'mera beta''

He took him in his arms

Mayank: he is cute haina'..he said almost jumping in joy '.

ND; yes he is just like my daughter'he strt taping his feet'.crosing his arms arm his chest

MAyank: ap mera credit nhi lay saktay '.he is my soon

ND: bs is baat k daar hai'

Nupur: kya keray dad'.bs'.

Mayank: haaa''ab dono baab beti'.no prblm mein apny betay k sath team banoo ga'..kyun champ

''''''

 

Raj: dad'he hited hs head with hand'.ap phir bhool gay

ND: mayank tum gay ..aj nhi bacha sakta

Mayank: kya kero..us ko dekh ker wasy hi kuch yaad nhi rehta'aur dates tu mjhy khabi yaad nhi rehti ..islyan tu hisroty k paper mein pasing marks aaty thy mera

Raj: too bad ..ur were such student '..very bad

ND chukled n mayank pass a glared to him

Mayank: bad k bachy dad ki help kerny k baj'mazk uratay hoo

ND: help urslef kyun ab sham k 7 bj rah hain'..

Mayank: hmm'I know my wife 'I'll handle her'.             She cant be mad at me'.

 

He moved in side the room with guilt'holding his ear he stod infrnt of her''

She moved her face other side n he came agin'."sorry"'.plss

Bowing down his head holding ear

Mauyank: u know n aim stupid Sharma'..pls maaf kerdo'im soory I forgot 'I didn't'I rember it til yesterday but pata nhi kasay aj bhool gaya'.sachi mein ny gift bhi liya tha'.

Mayank:  Nupur: kya yaar'.aur time waste nhi kerty chalo kuch kertay hai

Nupur: mein batao kiya keray

Mayank: kiya

Nupur:  us incedient ki yaad mein 2min silence'pls'.

mayank: nupsi plsss'..

he looked at her with plead guilt n love'..pls'sorry '

nupur: thik hai'Happy anniversary (nt the weding anversary)

mayank: moved fow n took her off feet in his embrace..tighly hold her '.i love u 'happy anniversary '

broking the hug he make her wore a smiple necklace wch he bought'n kissed her shoulder'.n whispered sorry before kissing her ear'..

nupur: its ok'.u always make feel special evry day'so it doenst matter if u forgot a spcieal day'.u have showered so much of love on me'tht ek din tu wajha bhool jaoo tu bhi chaly ga

mayank: tu tum mjhy kisi wajha se payr kerti hoo

nupur: uffu stupid mera woh matalb nhi tha'..

mayank: mera gift kaha hai'.

Nupur: subha diya tu tha'tab bhi yaad nhi aaya

Mayank: ohho'.ipad'.kya kero sweet heart'ap her roz mjhy itny sary gifts dayti hain k wajha jana mein zaroori nhi samhjta'

Nupur: acha '

Sliding his hand in her waist he pulled her near'so near tth she can feel her breath on his face

Maaynk: I want sumthng more

Nupur: kya'.

Mayank: idhir dekho'.

She looked at him n he signaled her wht he want s..she lowered her eyes

Mayank: kya nupur..itna sab kuch hogay humary beech aur tum ek kiss k lyan itna Sharma rahi hoo

Nupur mayankkk'.

Mayank: im nt gonna take it today'..i want u to give like u gave me at our wedng night'.he grined widly n she blushed like anything

Mayankkk''plsss'..

Nupur..pls'..

Close ur eyes

He did so n she looked at him lovingly how blissd she feel to have him in his life'.his love his care his gestures'.he himself has been the reason for her to live her life'

Mjhy itny payar se baad mein dekh layna abhi woh kero jo pati nhy kaha ha'

He oped his one eye n chukled 'she to smile widely'..

Common nupurr'

She raised her slef to tose n move fwd'n take an hold of his neck'.placing her lips on his'he griped her from her waist..n pulled her near'moving inside'.he holde her with bth his hand '.take her of her feet'..she griped her hairs tighly n pulled him near 'if possible'..n explored him once agin'..

A knock on the door make thm came out of there world'he slowly put her back on her feet'

Raj: daad mom'.

He smiled listening to his son'n set his hairs..moving away he came back n peck her lps again

I love u 'n opened the door'

Mayank: yes champ

Raj: wht champ'ap ki wajha se mein ny mom ko gift bhi nhi diya

Nupur: dkha mera bety ko bhi yaad tha

Raj: ofcourse yaad the'mein ny khud cell me reminder lagay tha'.

Mayank laughed out loud n nupur shocked his head

Nupur: buklil baap per gaya hai'.

Here u goo'he fwd his gift to bth of thm

Mayank: can I open

Raj: ya plss..na jaldi se'he himself tor the raper n in exctment..n mayank was smiling at him

Mayank was so surprise to see a watch he saw tht day at shop n thought of buying n thn left for unknow reason''.yeah 'tum pagal ho kiya'from whn r u saving money for this

Raj: wht only six mounths'..

Mayank he kissd her forhead'thnku soo much dear

Raj: mom stop watching as like a filmy heroine n open it

Nupur open it n find apair of earrings in it ..smiple n elegant just thy way she likes..she too kissed him n the trio went to ND'thy bth bend down n took his blessing ..he hugeed mayank tighly'.sumwhere he realy repect him a lot for giving his daughter evrythng'..

Raj was watching thm n came upto mayank n was abt to bow down when he caught him

Mayank..wht r u doing ..dnt

Raj: why u always do this to nanao'so I shud b haina mom'..

She smiled with teary eyes n he took him in his arms hugging him'..n hold him tighly'.

At night she was palying with his shirt reting her head on his chest..n he on was playing with her hairs'

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thnku'.

She raised her head as his words have speciall feeling ot it

Maynak: thnks for being in my life'thnks for colliding with me the frst day'.thnks for scolding me the other '.thnks for caring for me whn I was injured..thnks for understanding me whn I wasn't abl to'thnks for holding me whn I was dying'.thnks for being mine'thnks for being my better half'thnks for being My ARDHANGINI''.

N hugged her tight'.convey much more..tht words cant

 



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EPILOGUE

Closing ur favt piece is I thng the most difficult part….n u nevr get satisfied with it …so am i….

ARDHANGINI…better half…or may be the part of u which truly holds the part which is unknown to you….who let u explore ur self…who discovers u …read u ….hold u throughout the thick n thin of life……

In Hinduism…Ardhangini is a person who share the world with u …n u do the same with her….a part of you who take cares of u and family…..

In Islam wife is also referred as "libas" the attire tht gave u a modest appearance…who hides ur bad n provoke ur good…n same is demand form the husband……

Ardhangini…the story ….. for me is a journey…of two joyful soul getting struck sumwhere with harsh realties of life…but trusting n findig solace in each other…….who not only found love in each other…but more thn tht …thy found themselves around eachother…..

 



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HELLO GUYS

Its last time here in this thread I m addressing u….thnku soo much for staying here for almost 6 mths….feew…I cant belive….

Thnks for tolerating whtevr I provided to u…thnks for appreciating me throughout the journey…moreover staying with me even whn I was not not feeling like….

Thnku evry one….evry single reader of mine …..all of u …

 

N like always I 'LL REQUEST MY SILENT READERS TO PLS SPEAK UP ..HOW U FEEL ..A REALLY WANT TO HEAR FROM U ALSO ….

N AB AAI IMTEHAN KA TIME…CHLO SHABASH ANSWER MY QUESTION TO PLSS..

1. WHT FOR U ARDHAGINI HAS BEEN?

2. WCH WAS THE BEST PART OF THE STORY ?

 

LOV YA …

IMPATIENTLY WAITING FOR UR COMENTS

FIZA AHMED

 

 



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sorry Fiza for delayEmbarrassed

i edited my comment on pg 26

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amazing to say least..out n out ultra romantic update...loved every bit of it to its fullest...continue soonEmbarrassed

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really dont have words to describe my feelings...Smile...this ff is now ended...yaqeen nai huraha...beautiful ff...the way u describes the feelings of two different people...amazing... situations, circumsatnces which brough tthm together, making thm understnading eachother...sweet...

whn ever i read this ff i truly enjoyed it...it never made me bore...every time i sumthg found new in each and every episode...hwich was the best part of this ff so far...till the end...dialogus, emotons, situations eveythg u handled u nicely and smothly...heads of to u dear...u deserves a big hug...HugHugHug

CUM TO THE UPDATE:

maynk cookd khatai aaloo ...yummy...Party...how caring he is...Smile...aaj kal kaha itnai aachay husband miltai hai...buhat rere haota hai...LOL
and i loved the hospital scene...mayank mai tumhay maar daloo gi if tum meray kareeb bhi aayei...ROFLROFLROFL...i was just laughing imagine this all...LOLLOLLOL

and wht a intelligent boy raj is...bilkul mayank pai gaya hai...WinkWink...kiya gifts diyei hai sweet...


Nupur: mein batao kiya keray

Mayank: kiya

Nupur:  us incedient ki yaad mein 2min silence…pls….

mayank: nupsi plsss…..

he looked at her with plead guilt n love…..pls…sorry …

nupur: thik hai…Happy anniversary (nt the weding anversary)

mayank: moved fow n took her off feet in his embrace..tighly hold her ….i love u …happy anniversary


atlast tumnai likh hi liya 2 min khamoshi...ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL mind blowing, awsome, i was literally badly laughing at this moment... mayank bhi too mch hai...and raj bend down for taking blessings...my god...so sweet ..copy hi apnay dad ki...ClapClapClap...


At night she was palying with his shirt reting her head on his chest..n he on was playing with her hairs…

Mayank: nupur

Nupur: hmm

Mayank: thnku….

She raised her head as his words have speciall feeling ot it

Maynak: thnks for being in my life…thnks for colliding with me the frst day….thnks for scolding me the other ….thnks for caring for me whn I was injured..thnks for understanding me whn I wasn't abl to…thnks for holding me whn I was dying….thnks for being mine…thnks for being my better half…thnks for being My ARDHANGINI…….

N hugged her tight….convey much more..tht words cant


i love the ending .seriously...u really made a justice with ARDHAGNI... AND REALLY PROVED IT FIZA... .loved the way u portrayd ardhagni...and it is true every religion has the same meaning of ardhagni if u think so...buhat khubsuraat relation hota hai yeh...u cant bachoff this...life ka real meanings tu issi malom hota hai...

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EPILOGUE:

beautifully describes the word ardhagni ...short but covered each and every thg ...wht a journey fiza this frm the last 6 months...finalyy this journey is ended but leaft loads of beautiful memories with smile which retain in  our minds for dont know how long...HugHugHugHug


ANSWERS:

1. WHT FOR U ARDHAGINI HAS BEEN?

    for me it was the journey of two difernt  natured people..who thmselves didnt know abt true meanings of life, love, respect...

for me it shows the meaning of ardhagni in true senses...life is not just abt taking sumtng from it but to give it back is the true happiness and satisfaction which u felt...

Alove story jis mai ek dosrai parwah kerna bina ek dosrai ko batayei ek dosray ki pblms aur tensions ko kam kerna...

in short i truly loved it...

2. WCH WAS THE BEST PART OF THE STORY ?


- BEST PART WHN MAYNAK CONFESSED HIS LOVE IN FRONT OF NUPURS DAD...

- WHN MAYANK WAS HIDING HIMSELF FROM NUPUR IN COLLEGE...TO SHOW THT HE IS NOT IN LOVE WID HER.AND WIDOUT HER HE CAN LIVE...BUT BECHARA HAAR GAYA THA SHART...LOLLOL

- THEIR WEDDING NIGHT...

- BESTEST OF ALL...  WHN NUPUR SIGHNED THE PPAERS OF THEIR MARRIAGE IN ORDER TO SAVE MAYANK...SmileSmile



EPILOGUE OF MINE...  ROFLROFLROFL

HOPE THT U CUM UP SOON WITH THE SAME ADDICTED FF WITH NEW CONCEPT...U REALLY MAKE US ADDICTED TO THIS...ROFLROFL...

LOADS OF THANKS FOR GIVING US SUCH A BEAUTIFUL FF...REALLY THANKS  ALOT...FOR CUM UP INTO MY LIFE AS A PERSON WHICH I NEVER THOUGHT THT I WULD BE  SO CLOSED TO  U AS I AM TODAY...HugHugHeart THANKS FO BEING WID ME WHNEVER I NEEDED U ...LOVE U A LOAD...



love ya a lot...hope u liked it...muahhh...

Hug Heart


Dr,MAHa ( ur Turtle) WinkWink
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