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Posted: 09 June 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

Shabash...aj paka i'll write n kal i'll update


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fiza kal u will update na? pakka?

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Heloo guys

Ya I know im terribly late …but belive im just suffering from sver writers block..as far as this ff is considered….knowing ur all request..im though updating this chap….i hope I justiy ur wait…

It a simple chpt to get things back together….

But the last chp wll may b late may b on time I cant say this…im nt gonna update it till I really feel like updating…so sorry if a keep u waiting…..pray tht my mind came back to place n I strt writing agin..

 

Sorry I haven't rplyd to any …but ur immense love n respect makes my heart bigger n my smile wider…thnks u all for being in my life

 

Lov ya

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CHAPTER:25

Sum days later

Moving out of her room…he went on terrace to find her stnding on the edge….looking at the dark sky…..finding sumthng …mayb the strts tht made the fortune….there movment chnge our fate…..he came up to her n stood beside her………..

 

Mayank: kya dhoond rahi hoo

Nupur: kismet…..

He looked towards her who was still nt facing him…..holding her shoulder he turned her to face himself….she looked in his eyes….n found pain but her reflection too…too clear…

Mayank: its high time we let othere make our fortune …misfortune……offering his hand….nupur..lets begin our journey as one….sliding her hand ……

Nupur: are u sure…u can take time…I dnt….shhh….

Mayank: I dnt have time….n I cant wait…pulling her hand he took her in his embrace…closing his eyes..he felt relived….feeling tht all tht has happened has just washed away…I just want to be here….right in ur arms…n u close to be like my heart…..

Nupur: samrat se milo gay…she said with fear n shiver……she cnat say wht he is gonna do with him…..

Mayank: nhii….mjhy nhi milna plss…khabi bhi nhi…..mjhy is samrat ko nhi dekhna…..meray liyan meray us bhahi k image he thik hai….mein is insaan se nhi milna chata….he said tighting his grip on her…while she slightly patted his back to clam him down……I want to live in illusion nupur……I cnt take it in just like tht…….i love him aloot..n I cant just frgot all the years I have spended with him…..but whnever I remebr all tht he said n had done….i just cant image his face infront of me…..

Nupur: I know….u dnt need to….whn still I cant belive….how can u do so…..

Wiping his tear …..he broke the hug with the smile…..

Mayank so ms nupur bhuhsan….ready to get married to stupid Sharma……he leaned down to look in her eyes……

Nupur: she looked up with a shy smile…hmmm….

Mayank: griping her waist ..he pulled her close…soch loo….im nt gonna spare u..leaned more close

She pushed him away

Nupur: act decent Sharma…..

Mayank: wht romance with ur would be wife is nt decent….

Nupur: yes…its would be…nt ur wife

Mayank: tuuu…

Nupur: intezarr kero….

She move back….n he was moving fowd

Mayank: haa…intezar my foot…...im nt gonna…

He run towards her n so as she…n went to shilpa anty …n set in between them…he was stnding up on stirs….with a grin n look" im nt gonna leave u"….with she having " common get me if u can"….

 

NUPUR: thnks anty …for trusting me…..

SA; thnks beta….for being in our lifes…..tum ny sirf mayank k lyan hi nhi humaray liyan bhi buhat kuch kiya hai….mera itna bora bhala kahny k bawajood…..u have always been like a daughter

Nupur: so…am I nt ur daughter … han

Sa: she smile..ur more thn tht……I wish u have alwsy been there wih us…..she move fwd n kissed her forhead….beta kya ek favour mang sakhti hoon….

Nupur: ji anty zaroor…

SA: im going to delhi tday…to tell vivek evrythng abt smarat…..i know he will to broke ..but sumwhere he knew….he has been like tht..i being a mther has always neglected tht…..

Nupur: anty y r u blaming urself…its God knows y just happened

SA: beta…she hold her hands…Vivek really wants to b there at Maynk n urs wedding

Nupur: wht do u mean want to ..he needs to b

SA: u know how mayank is….n right now….pls try n convince him to ask his father to cum to his celebration….he wil b glad…..pls.beta

Nupur: dnt wory anty …I'll try to talk to him……but I cant promise….she said helplessly

SA: ur trying is enough…I know he cant say no to u….

Nupur: I know him anty …he himself want uncle to b there….but..us k ego

SA: hmm…buhat bara hai….wasy yeah anty anty kya laga rah hai….hmm…Maa khany mein koi problem hai…

Nupur: she smiled….sory ant..i mean maa

SA: better…..she hugged her….

Mayank: yeah kiya hai….he almost shouted ….

Thy broke in shock

Kya hoa…they said in union…..

Mayank: kya hoga ekta kapoor k….agr saas bahu asay pyar aur mohabat se rahy ga…..he recived a cushion on his face…..wht…..

SA: kyun nazar laga rah hai hum maa beti per han…..

Mayank: tu mein kah hoon…..

SA: tujhy itnay salo se pyar ker rahin hoon…ab is ki bari hai..

Mayank: he droped his jaw….n thn frown…n the two ladies where laughing

ND: kya hua

Mayank: dad….he run towards him…tum kis ki side per ho

ND: KKR..k

Mayank: uffu….woh tu haar gai…aur IPL khatam hogai ….mein meray ya nupur ki bat ker raha hoon……

ND: ohh…..muskil hai….per chaloo…tumhain tu koi lay ga nhi …islyan….

Mayank: islyan….bolonaaa

ND: abay yaar….thik hai mein teray side per hoo…

Mayank: haha…I love u……

They all laughed….

SA: yeah abhi bhi bacha hi hai…..chal mjhy airport chorany ja

Mayank: ap ka ja rahi hoo…..

SA: she came upto him..n cuped his faced…teray Dad k pass….aur thora chezay layni hai nupur k lyan as u want shadi Mumbai mein hoo…so

Mayank: ap samrat se milny jarahi hoo

SA: tumharay dad ko bhi tu bata na hai..acha ab tum yeah sab choro….mein kyun k abhi shadi k functions k bulikil kareeb aao gi..tu shopping aur taiyari kerlo…..samhjy…aur jaza nupur chay gi wasa hoga ,….samhj gay

Mayank: tu ek kam kero shadi akelay nupur ki kardooo….meri shadi bhi hai shayad…..he pouted ….

ND: adat dal lay beta….shadi k baad is se bhi zayda hoga…..

Nupur: jao maa ko chor ker aao…phir mjhy shoping per jan hai…go..stupid Sharma……

…………….

Myanak: oki madam…kya layna hai….

Nupur: kuch simple…..n elegant

Mayank: nupur …can I ask u sumthng…if u want n feel right…its ur big day decide by urslef

Nupur/; she looked at him with pissed off look…..boloo

Mayank:: I really want to see u in the same aitire style u wore at Eid festive in colloge…the frist time …I felt my heart stope for u …….he said tht with so much passion tht sumhow she lost her words …the only thng she can do was to look in his eyes n absorb asll the love he had for her…..pls….if u find it right

She smiled to fullest..n touched his cheek….n nooded in assurance with a smile

Mayank: thnku

Nupur: yeah kasi hai….it was a simple pink with light emblishment

Mayank: achi…but if u don't mind ..can tu were sumthing in red….with may b sumother color mixed …..

Nupur: she smiled……hmm..oki…

Wht abt this one….

Mayank: dnt uthink it seems like a garden..itny phool hain is mein

Nupur: mayankk…oki we'll see sumhting difrrnt

Wht abt this…

Mayank: naaa…rainbow….char pach aur color bhi dalday tay

Nupur: tuhnin exactly chiay kiya

Mayank: kuch bhi …jis k dhek ker lagy haan yeahi hai

Shopkeeper: aj tak larkiyoon ko tu itna sochty way dekha ta….kis larko ko pehli bar dekh raho hoon

Nupur chukled n maynk passed an agnery glared to him

Woh dekhy…thy bth said in union….

After lot of discussion ..agreed on one…simple red…with silevr embellishment

Mayank: ok wht next

Nupur: urs sherwani

Mayank: sherwani zaroori hai….its hot yaar…reham ker mjhy per

Nupur: tu wht u wanan wear

Mayank simple shlwar kmaeez

Nupur: with a little emobrodery n stole matching with my dress….samhjy

Mayank: oki ma'am as u wish…

Nupur: good boy….

He chukled n followed her….

Nupur: wht r u looking for

Mayank: weding ring…..

Nupur: wht say weding bands…..

Mayank: hmm better idea….same same…chly ga

Nupur: no..doray ga…

N thy shred a high five….

Mayank: tum GOLd k set wear kero gi….he almost shouted in shock

Nupur: nhiii

Mayank: so wht ru going throught it …a

Nupur: asy hi yaar…

Mayank: stop doing window shoping…n go to soliters…

Nupur: uff…. A diamond for a diamond

Mayank: such over estimation I tell …..

Nupur: haan…tum maro gay meray hatho

Mayank: maray way ko kiya maro ki wife

Nupur: my nt yet ur wife

Mayank: legally ur my wife…n dnt let me bet to claim u mine….he said huskily ,,,n by passed b shocked n blushed nupur,…..sharma na band kero aur pls ab shoping bhi bs kero…..

They were siting in car near beach after n hectic day of whole loads of shoping …as weding was few days away…..

Nupur: why ru smiling like an idiot

Maynk: four days to go…he said n loked at her

Nupur: ghar chalay …

Mayank: nhi

Nupur: mayank…..

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Delhi:

Vivek Sharma: I know shilpa …I very well know….i told u ur son is following his fathers path

SA: vivek…u never did wrong with ur loved ones…

VS: but I may have did with others loved one….i knew all ths ths y was constanly having an eye on nupur….n she is intelligent enough to knw evrythng

…………….

Mumbai:

Mayank: hum ny itni shoping ki aur tum ny apna weeding gift nhi bata ya

Nupur: mein jo mango gi woh do gay

Mayank: jan maat mangna….woh nhi doo ga…she looked in surprise…I want to live with u …dnt wnt to die ..i want to cherish evry moment spended with u as u being mine ….

Nupur: smiled….mayaaank….

Mayank: kyaaas…….he moved closed

Nupur: uncle ko maaf kerdo pls…..

Mayank: nupur…

Nupur: mayank kyun…..tum janty ho tum nhi thy tu unhony kitna sath diya mera

He looked at her in surprise…..

Nupur: tumhain kiya lagta hai…itna bara loan bagir kisi gurantee k milta hai…uncle ny di thi

Mayank: mjhy koi faraq nhi parta….he looked away

Nupur: tumhain faraq parta hai…mano na mano maynk u really love him…u cant lie ti urself but not me….tumhain MUkti kaun laya tha…yaad hai kuch …

Mayank: dad…he wishpered

Nupur: yes….dad….who always tried to make up for the mistake u found in him…but u nevr let him feel he has n elder son..mayak he really loves u …he is ur father

Mayank: I have lost trust on evry relation nupur

Nupur: im also in a relation with u mayank …tu kiya mein

Mayank: nupuuurr…..asa kahna bhi nhi….per

Nupur: zindagi bhar woh tumhary agay jhokay hain…ek bar dil se un ko awaz day ker dekho ..pls meray liyan…..pls……

…………

SA: chalo yeah choro apny baray betay ki shadi mein nhi jana hai…..taiayri kero

VS: chata tuu mein hoon…per mera beta yeah nhi chata

Bell runged…

VS: helloo…

Silence

Heloo..kaun

..he closed his eyes…n found a tight hold on is shoulder….asking him to go on

Mayank….he just manged to say tht

N a huge smile with tears was on his face..after so long seems like never he heard his son addressing him….on his own

VS: kasay ho beta

Mayank: thik hon….woh

VS: han bolo….

Mayank: will u cum on wedding

VS: if my son wants me to ….im dying ot beta..he said hiding his sob

Mayank: hmm….i want to….

Saying so he cut the line nnupur hugged him tight…he hold her to hold himself…..n there vivek was siting with shock n Gods best surprise for him…his son called him n asked him to join his biggest happiness

VS: mera beta ny mjhy invite kiya shilpa…..meray betay ny

SA: mein ny ap se kaha tha na..woh ap se buhat pyar kerta hai….dekha apny …..

VS: Mumbai k sab se bara hotel book kero….sab se bara event manger …yeah shadi duniya yaad rekhy gi

SA: vivek ap k beta aur bahu simple shadi chaty hain….

…….

Mumabi..

She bowed down n touched his feet

VS: he placed his hand….im angry on u

Nupur: y…

VS: mayank tu pagal hai…tum bi…pori duniya dekhti asi shadi organize kerata….per nhi simple weeding

Nupur: duniya ko dekhny se kiya hota…humain sirf ap sab chaiy …bs

………….

Wedding day:

Myank was satnding infront of mirror..n was huming a song..he was settling his hairs with gel…moving away he looked his top most button was opened …he tred but could…

Uff…ab is k kiya kero…dad bhi bata nhi kaha hai(nupur's dad)…dekhta hoon

VS: can I help…..

He turn around n felt awkward….

Mayank/?: nhi I'lll

VS: pls…he move forward n did it…..

Mayank: thnks….

VS: u still r angry on me

Myank: im nt..im just nt able to forgot evrythng…I need time….meri lfe mein sab kuch itna ajeeb hi hota hai

Sumhow the envrmnet was too awkward ND was there n was listening

ND: tumahri life mein tu nupur bhi hai ..tu woh bhi ajeeb hai

Mayank: dad….tum tu meri side per thy

VS: han per agr tum humari beti ko kuch kaho gay tu hum chup thori na rah gay….

Mayank: matlab ab bhi…meir side koi nhi layta

ND: wasy aj kuch insaan lag rahy hoo

Mayank: matalb ab tak mein mein ab ko insane bhi nhi lagta tha

ND: nhi

Mayank: dad….who cares apki beti ko tu mein buaht kuch lagta hoon

VS: woh bechari tu masoom hai

Mayank: masooom…aur woh….such an underestimation…

SA: kya horah hai yaha..tu abhi tak taiyar nhi hoo

Mayank: ho tu gaya….bs mera perfume nhi mil rah drwer mein dektha hoo

He was loking through it n found sumthng tht vanished his smile…

VS: kya hua mayank

He took out a brouch…

Mayank: maa…samrat laya tha….kahta tha..tumahri nupur ki shdi per mei lagao ga…..he sat on bed ..ND left frm ther…n VS put his hand on his shoulder

Only once if he would have said he regret wht he did….i would have forgave him….y he did tht

SA: bs mayank…aj nhi…aj sirf us khushi ko enjoy ker jo buhat muskil se tujhy mili hai…..

Mayank: maa…pls nupur ko ek bar dekh lo…I know she will b missing her mom….plss

SA: mein dekhti hoon

………..

She was standing in mirror fully dressd up….looking as gorgeous as any1 cant b….a knock n opening of door bring her out of dreams……

SA: kya ker rhi hai meri beti……she said n when looked at her a smile n adoranced appear on her face…..

Nupur: kya hua maa….zayada hogaya kiya

SA: she chukled…..hmmm buhat zayada

Nupur: haa…ab kiya keroo

SA: kuch nhi…jo kerna hai woh yeah ..she pointed to her..kerdy ga

She was looking at her confused

SA: aray baba…itna khubsort lago gi tu mera beta tu gaya…

Nupur: maaa……

She kissed her forhead…..

Chalo..apni nai zindagi ki taraf pehal kadam utho….aaoo…..

Nupur: dad kaha hai…..mein un k sath aaooo

SA: bulkily…placing her hand on her hand …she moved out n called her dad

Nupur: ap mjhy se milny bhi nhi aayy

ND: meri beti itni pyari lag rahi hai……chalo

Nupur: ap mjhy se milny kyun nhi aay….

ND: beti ho shadi ho ker chali jao gi …afsoos tu hota hai…

Nupur: kyun mein tu yahin rahny wali honn

ND: aray haan…yeah tu bhool hi gaya…. stupid Sharma ny tu yeah mooqa bhi nhi diya..uff

Thy bth laughed n thn she hugged her father tight….

ND: bless u beta …..chalo…asy rotay hoay nhi jatay ….comon………..

 



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awesomeee :D
but wat about sam , nothing usse sudhar do :P
n mayur zayada plz in next part 
mayur spl update :P

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Awesom update
 
do continue soon

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Posted: 10 June 2011 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Oye hoye Cascade
thank u for ur update jaan
i know u wont believe it- but today morning i was thinking abt this ff- i decided to request u for updating this FF. and u see - u updated it...:D love u. dear...muahhh...

hayeee mayue scene was totally awesome... Loved their closeness...mera  mayur kitna sweet and innocent hai...
ahhh feel bad for mayank- he was still sad for sam... but i loved each n every word of him... he wants to cherish their  good memory only. he wants to forget sams evil deeds. he just want to be happy with nupur...
i just hope mayur will get all d happiness of d world
loved sam mom nad  nups convo
hahahahahaha mayanks ektawali joke was very funny...:D


wah mayu has fogiven his dad and invited him on weeding- veryyy good... ab sab kuch thik ho rahe hain... i hope sam will understand his mistake and mayu will get their old, lovable sam soon...

the shopping part was also very nice
i  loved the whole update
u r superb as usual
love u dear
take care...and update next part soon

btw sam chup hain- ye thoda ajeeb lag rahe hai... i hope he wont create any difficulty on mayur marriage...




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