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Rano came with a tray of lassi.. & served rahul & gave the tray to Maan & said to serve the rest to others. He made a face repeating.. serve others.. & went to the hall.. he banged the tray on the side table in irritation catching every ones attention, spilling most of the drink.

Rano - yeh kya kiya.. uff!!!
she immediately called the maid & arranged for another drink. He was getting impatient, it felt like his soul was in that room.

Geet turned & looked at rahul.. her charm !! anyone could fall for & now she was smiling that too a smile very nave & special.. straight from her heart that too because of her genie. It had to be a million dollar smile. Rahul straighten himself.
Rahul - well.. I am rahul
Geet - hi
her smile was washed away as she realized the whole situation. She was not at all nervous.. she knew exactly wat she had to say. She is so used being in control of her life, she knew wat options she had.. actaually not much. She had been trying not to hurt anyone but this is the closest her parents got her in their entire life, thanks to her genie. Before rahul could say another word.
Geet - I am sorry I can't agree for this marriage.. could u plz refuse for this alliance
he smiled ..u love him
she didn't think she had to reply that. She kept quiet.
Rahul - if u change ur mind let me know..  definitely won't behave like a dodo!!
she rolled her eyes.. genie told him.. my name..uff !! was he actually trying to fix me up with him.. is he insane.. wat is wrong with genie.
Rahul shook hands ..thats when Maan barged in again.. his eyes burned in fury.. seeing their hands connected. Rahul almost instantly pulled away but only after giving a little squeeze which his furious eyes didn't miss.

Rahul walked pass him.. ur dodo is all urs !!
Maan mimicked.. him.. as he left & rushed to her.. very angrily.. I don't like him.. say no!!
she kept quiet.
He looked at her hand couple of times.. the feel of someone touched her was irritating him.
Wat is it genie?
Ur hands r dirty
. He dragged her to the washroom & poured the whole bottle of detol & then rinsed them thoroughly. She kept looking at him in awe.. he was so possessive of her.. why didn't she ever get to see this side of him or she never understood then!! like always.. she was just being a dodo!!!

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he had been like this always..but it all seems different now. He was protective & possessive about her even in college. Nun of their male frds were allowed to come to their flat. He had made it very clear to them. Not that they looked at her differently. They all were their common frds, who knew her quiet well & treated her as a food frd still genie would get wild. She remembered when one of their classmate Tariq had come up to take the notes from Maan & dodo had opened the door for him.
Maan slammed the door on his face shouting why the hell did u come up kaha tha na neche wait karne ka liyen
dodo didn't understand the logic
Geet - kyun nahi aa sakten
Maan clinched fist almost punched the wall next to her.. scanning her top to bottom, she was dressed in her night suit. Without duppata. He gave a disgusted look.. why the hell did u open the door, nakul kanha hain?.. aur yeh kya dress phen raka hain.
She made a baby face.. this is wat I wear every day at home
just get lost & dare u touch the door again
Geet then thought he didn't want to give the notes to tariq thats why he is doing all this natak.
She twisted her lips & went to ballu to complain.
She lifted ballu.. genie off late thinks too much about himself. Bechara tariq.. kabse notes mang raha hain & genie usen help bhi nahi karta..aur dehk kitna footage khaa raha hain
Maan rolled his eyes.. & went back to study
Geet - kitabhi kida
pulled out her tongue ..teasing him
dodo...he warned
kitabhi kida..kida ..kida... she screamed. He closed his book & came out angrily.. she pretended not to be intimidated. She looked at him from corner of her eyes.. when he turned to leave ..she whispered kida.. & giggled..

he turned back furiously.. all ready he was pissed off... one he himself didn't know why he was so particular about anyone not coming home especially when she was around. Even girl frds were not allowed. Something he didn't know why it just bothered him so much but it did & never cared to reason it either.. nor did his dodo ever questioned him.
 
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Maan lifted his brows & questioned still washing her hand & now wiping it with a towel... she continued to look at him in awe!! he rubbed her hand between his with a towel. She stared at him as he splashed water on her face naughtily ..she snapped up & as a instinct splashed water back on him.. they continued splashing until they were both breathless running & chasing dripping wet .. in that small washroom.. she stopped for a minute.. catching her breath.. pointing her hand between them ..indicating him to stop.. he pretended to stop... & naughtiness just went wild.. when he realized she was standing right under the shower.. he inched closer.. her breath caught..as she was now pinned to the wall.. her eyes went down.. feeling a sudden shiver realizing his hand now approaching her waist.. she gulped her saliva. Then her skin soaked in cold stream of water totally unexpected. ..she exhaled in relief & anger.. it was her turn to get even now.. she angrily held his collar & pulled him in the water with a jerk.. he tripped & landed on her .. squeezing her between his body & the wall.. his arms around her, his lips on her chest above the soaked cotton..his heart beat raised as his body reacted to her closeness. She was still as the thought of feeling him over her curves..for a moment those cloths felt like barriers. Then the though itself made her warm & her n**** tingled. Her soaked white suit was not concealing much. Neither was his rough callused hands brushing upwards to her shoulder.. now intending to rip off the duppta.. but.. very slowly sliding them.. she sucked in a breath but didn't protest. Like he knew exactly how intoxicating it feels under those cloths.. how dangerously addictive it could get. Sharply he brought his erotic thoughts to a halt & jerked back ward.

He ran the fingers threw his wet hair & bend down to lift the duppta he had slid off... he threw it at her without looking at her. Million questions drew him.. how was he so familiar with her scent!! how was it  that his soul seemed carved with her feel. Wat the hell is wrong with him.. this is his dodo!!! he went to his room & changed. He could his courage to go back to her room. But he did hear from Rano that rahul refused for the alliance.

Later at night he heard Rano shouting at Geet. He stood at the door, couldn't put his wits together to face her. Rano came out in tears & requested Maan to talk to her. Geet turned her back at him.
He kept his head down as he walked towards her.
Genie I don't want to talk about it
why don't u move on
she kept quiet
this bit was distancing them.. he couldn't let that happen..
he took a sharp breath & came in front of her.. ok tell me about him
Geet smiled at her plight!!!
Aacha mujhe uske baren main batavoo
somethings are nice when they r left untouched!!! unrevealed..unspoken about it
.. she said in a very painful voice.. a voive he was not familiar with.
Maan didn't know why his heart felt so miserably hurt to even think about someone with her. But yah the truth was she does love someone & he could see that in those eyes.
Let it be R.I.P

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Edited by muskanp - 27 May 2011 at 1:41pm

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res
oye hoye...
balle balle...
me 1st again...
PartyyuhoooDancing



awesum update muskaan...ClapClap
tht was sooo sweet of rahul!!
and maan...bechara...
ab abhi can't understand!!!!LOL
am actually laffing over his plight!!
poor geet...hope maan understands everything soon so tht she doesn't hve to hide her feelings n e more!Embarrassed



Edited by kawaii_geet - 25 May 2011 at 1:27pm

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Thanks for the updateSmile
What a heart thobbing and emotional update...
Geet knows how she feels for Maan ..
her love for him is serene and unconditional...
Maan the biggest dodo is unable to recognize his love,care protectiveness and jealousy for  his dodo and Rahul at once found out about him...
MAAN the biggest dodo of the century...
 
You write so well that after reading ur updates the quench of getting more goes higher.
 
Muaaah to u for writing so well .
 
I wish I could nominate u for some writer's award or so...


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oh rahul was really nice, and the little squeeze,it all pushed him to another jealousy round..
 
washing with dettol...cant stop imagining and laughing...would he ever recall what he was doing ...
 
the last part reflected her pain, want to know when she realized her love for him, the first time, must have been hard as he was having a GF back then ...and why she seems familiar to him???????
 

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awesome muski...

how easily Rahul understood that it's Maan only...  when did woh buddhu samjhega ki dodo sirf uska hai...

loved the possessive  Maan and  bathroom scene.. Blog mein kuch zyada hai kya WinkWinkWinkWinkWink???




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awesome update...n awesomest precap...waiting to know how Maan will find it out...!!!TongueTongueTongueTongueTongue


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Maan going to find someone who love Geet..I am waiting for reaction when he find himself.

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Okkk come on dude!!

Just let him know!!

Its making me go crazy!!!

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