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~maitri~ maaneet FF THREAD 4 (Page 41)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
Beautiful, brilliant, awesome part.
loved it.
 hey bhagwan maan ka kya hoga
he  is really dodo .
he still don't understand his heart's word.
now he thinks his dodo want to settle score
hey bhagwan
here geet didn't remember about that thing
 aww geet is so sweet and understand maan well.
geet want to stop him but maan is maan na.
now maan chahatha hain geet ek baar lerke wale ko dkeh
 are maan jee, kab aapne dil ke baat samajhoge.
 
on a serious note maan need to understand and if it;s like by this way only maan get sense in his brain so he can understand his hearts' word hopefully.
isse sach mein kehete hain aapne pavon mein kudali marna.

he accept that challenge and will lose sure.
geet know it.
 precap is interesting.
 continue soon.


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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged

So sweet the way maan wipes geets tears. He is in love with her and that is why he cannot accept that geet loves another. Loool when they hug, maan is having some very passionate feelings towards geet.

 

Loool me love geet's dhamki that she will run away.

 

When will we see maaneet together.

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 1:57pm | IP Logged
awesome ...

continue soon ...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
hes still clueless.. LOL... oh cant wait when the ladke wale materialize...Wink... genie is goina go up in smokeLOL

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
nice update

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:03pm | IP Logged
Oho Maan will only convince his dodo for marriage!!! Maan dekhte hai aakhir kab tak aap apne dodo se door rahpayengeWink Geet very well knows about her genie(unlike him) so now time for some realizations...

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
awesum update muskan...
loved every bit of it!!!!ClapClap
great job!!
now cuming to the point...
when i started reading the update...
everything was sooo serious serious types...Confused
stupid maan not able to understand his own heart!! and
foolishly agreeing to find a match 4 his dodo...Ouch
i was so tensed k wht will happen next...Confused
will he really find a ladka 4 dodo...and den i came across...


she turned to face him wondering wat even is he talking about?
Main ne tumhe kaha tha don't interfere in my personal life, thats why u r saying this to me now
woh tumne gussen main kahan tha.. I know u didn't mean anything
tum mujhe se naraz nahi thi
...he asked curiously
Thi .. his heart sunk
lekin usse baat ke liyen nahi.. he wondered phir kis baat ke liyen
tumhari wajah se sab mujhe jaane se mana kar rahen the.. I really had to fight with them & go. It was all so difficult.
He made a baby face sorry.

and den i was lyk

what a transition muskaan...poora serious types mood changed into

hehehe...u r a great writer muskaan..
do continue soon!!!
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Sach mein khud hi apne pairon pe khulhaadi maar raha hai...Genie se dodo ban gaya hai ye Maan... ab shayad kuch realize ho usse ki Geet ke bina woh bhi nahi reh saktha...n hopefully kuch yaad aajaaye...nice update...

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