Originally posted by umayal
Back after reading the part Many times.
Actually I went to native ,I was there on sunday, today returned back and read your update that too at my home(TN), so it was Double treat for me.Hey Umi! Hope you had a good trip and back!
What a installment it was. Nice sweet update.
The Heading (Part Name) you have kept seems to be Trailer for the Part.Yeah I knew most people would guess about Sachin and Manav, I wanted to make everyone wonder about the second one. I doubt many people had expected Satish to make an entry at this point and in such a manner.
'Two meetings and a Reunion', when I read it,I knew for sure one would be Sachu-Archu as we know it already, but was thinking whose could be the second one. Sathish-Manav was a pleasant surprise and a matured calm talk that exactly portray the characters they are.
Then comes the Reunion that the heading says about.
First I thought was it Sachu's union with his family.Is that going to be the fruitful result of Archu's convo with him.Sachin's reunion! Oh, I didn't think only ki people can interpret it this way also! Yay I fooled you! :P
But when I read the second meeting and the power cut only makes it Know or indicates that its the much awaited ARMAN's union.
ARMAN reunion was so lovely said and written that I would come later to it.
First would like to say that or give a Big
to you for keeping all the characters intact with the original character they are portrayed of.
Always your FF ends me in thinking, wasn't this the nature we first saw in this character in original PR and it vanished later. Wasn't this the nature we had admired,Loved or Liked in this character and got hooked to watch the serial.
Same goes in this part too. Either it be the playful,little irresponsible Sachin, or Our lovable ARMAN alies Bholu,Hardworking Manav and sweet ,soft innocent archu or the Ever Decent Sensible Sathish, all stayed true to their character and they all are lively and live in your FF with their Original Traits. Thanks for it.Awww.. Umi you write such things so sweetly, brings a smile on my face each time.. yes, the originally conceived characters were such gems plus there was such a stellar cast, I really don't understand why Ekta ruined all the characters and the story for us. :(Then, First comes the First Meeting:
Archu - Sachu talks, the way he gave her food reminded me of old sachu. Really this is one character that had so much potential and would had played a perfect Lakshman in case of Manav if retained and allowed.But unfortunately the scriptwriters of original PR killed it.They killed him even before his track started in the serial. Poor chap.. I liked his character and the guy who played him.. I forgot his name.. Raj something.
So what, Nikki's FF is there na, to fulfill all of it. so here you had gone with it
and its the start, a beginning ,This time it was failure attempt for archu and not so smoothy convo between them, But I wish to read and visualize more of them in the upcoming parts or future. Wish to see their Devar-Vahini convos.Of course! You can imagine what will be the state of Archana and Manav after the naughty devar returns home.
Sachu was still in a confused state, could understand his current turmoil too- being returned as a loser after big talks, Still, he has to change himself and get through for what is needed, the splendid support which the family needs right now.
And archu was no where wrong in her behavior with him also. Anger tho will definitely come. and as she need ,Sachu needs them and family needs sachu. so a cooperation is needed. hope she succeeds in it in the upcoming future.Then, comes the Second Meeting:
Can Any meeting or scene would have given such a satisfaction or more appropriate one to take the insecurity of Manav from his heart rather than this Meeting. The perfect Guy Figure, whom Manav as always thought of and the insecurities he build just because Karanjkars wants that perfect Guy, Hearing from that perfect Guys own mouth ,that archu was Meant for Only Manav and she Loves only Manav was the best thing for Manav to hear.
Can it be anyone rather than Sathish himself telling Archu loved Manav right from the first and She was no where near to or committed to Sathish will give such a credit.
So it was the Perfect meeting of the Two.
And it was as Decent as of the two and how Sathish was portrayed right from beginning. I like and Love this character so much. even this was not spared in original is a Diff story.Nah, I think Satish was more or less okay till the end. Not as butchered as the rest. Passable.
All the dialogues were superb. it was written so nicely. Symbolically(with the line he looked at his chappals and shoes but didnt compare anything) you said Manav's comparison with Sathish ends as Manav believes that Archu was his alone
and no more comparison or inferior feeling needed there. He started believing it and that shows or gives me the pleasure of reading the much awaited feeling from Manav. Thanks a lot for it Nikki.
This meeting was the Best and a matured one. both behaves so true and I could see them so lively there. Though not believing Manav is innocent, Sathish maintained his decency and cool with Manav ,said,stated all the facts that he was clear about.And Manav as always humble and soft, he apologized though he was not at fault, the circumstances were.You know, I always wanted Manav and Satish to be good friends, and even though it did happen in PR, it did not exactly happen the way I'd wanted or imagined it to. This is a different attempt in the same direction.Then, comes the much awaited and the sweet ARMAN reunion:
I have put the heading,But dont know where to start, where to end and how to say.
It was sweetest, Emotional and a perfect reunion on the PERFECT CIRCUMSTANCES and SITUATIONS and not as original PR.
All was setup for the wonderful reunion perfectly. And mostly it was real and not Dramatic.
Could visualize everything.
The way it started with power cut, could know you were for a Treat
. but thought had to wait for privacy as everyone would be there, but you have made only two of them and other's out. so obviously we are for it.
The way archu asked Manav to come first,close the door and then scolding him for making the floor dirty, I was reminded of my mom's one's. Exactly the way I would get and how embarrassed with a sleepy smile I would be standing...
Then comes the Second Perfect Hug for me. the first ARMAN hug in orig PR was my most fav as it was the first one and it was there because archu was so comfy with them and all she poured out needed such a one.
And the one you have given here was the second perfect one.Manav's state, he asking you wont go na
And the Reason for Tears(I loved the way you put it.
). Its because he realized she was always there for him even in hatred and all circumstances and that he can now be safe and secure ,have a loving one to be on his side and expect something from his loved one.
Very well put and archu didnt know it but the way she comforted him by responding the hug was even more lovely.
Then comes pampering of Manav, the oh so not naughty Manav trying to be cute,naughty and childish. could visualize him keeping his head on her lap and archu stroking his hair,Lovely scene and the way he would be at peace is visualized there in the way you had written it.
I would go on and on, if you leave me ,then it would become Longer one than the part you had written/posted ...As it already became one... ...Sorry for such a lengthier one. But couldn't stop.
So I stop here, I just loved this part.Am so so so glad! I have visualized this scene in my head so many times ever since I started this FF.
An still wanted More. could not stop that thought, that too it ended with such a last scene which obviously make us ask more. ... you know how greedy we are on that
...So always wanted more.
Thus eagerly waiting for the Next update and awaiting it. Know you are Busy, sorry to bug you with update request...but Kya karoon yaar,yours was the ray of pleasure .--- will try and update soon..
Will reply to the rest of the comments tomorrow guys, I really should go to sleep now.. am making too many spelling errors..