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Nivren's baby - part 7

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Hey Guys! I ended the lasst part with the twins entering our Nivren's world and yes this is what is happening today! So lets catch the action live!

Viren slowly opened the ward door where Nivi was lying and he smiled when he saw his angel on the bed. the doctor had told him that she wasn't awake but he said she doesn't need her to be. He slowly walked across the room and sat down on the bed. he took her hand and kissed it and said thank you mera jaan mujhe do aur jaanon ko de ne ke liye. Then he saw the cot on the other side. He slowly moved and saw the cutest babies in the world lying inside it. tears flowed down from his eyes. He couldn't believe that he was the father of such young darlings. 

He put his hand in the cot and slowly brushed the cheeks of the two babies. They were beutiful and simple and they represent his and Nivi's life perfectly. He saw them move and then the tiny hand wrapped around one of his fingers and again tears rushed in his eyes. He had never experienced such strong love and emotion before. He loved it. He thought about how his and Niveditha's life had changed forever from today and that they had a family and not just themselves.

Nivi was opening her eyes to the new world before her. She looked around the room and saw Viren sitting next to the baby. She smiled seeing him cry. She knew he was enjoying the moment. She had been asleep after all the pain she had gone through. She slowly called Viren. He turned with an immmediate jerk and looked at her. He stood up and came next to her with his mischevious smile. 

Niveditha tum kaisi ho, he asked. "main teek ho Viren par hamari bachi kaisi hai" he smiled and said that woh teek hai" he knew she disn't know about the twins and he was eager to tell her but he loved to keep her waiting so he kept quiet until she asked herself. "toh beti ya beta" she said again with a wonderful smile. "he said beta, because he knew she had wanted a boy and he could seee her eyes light up and then she saw him and she replied, "sorry Viren mene tumhari liye beti nahi de payi" he laughed and said tum ye kya bol rahi ho mujhe toh beti bhi mil gayi hai. 

Niveditha was growing more and more confused and then she questioned whether he was referring to Dwita but he shook his head and said nahi. He loved seeing the frowns form on her face when she was concentrating hard and he traced the frowns and kissed her forehead and said, "Niveditha tum ne aik nahi bal ki do bachon ko janam di hai" he could see her happiness. 
She was so exited and she tried to peak in the cot but it wasn't possible it was a bit too far. 

She asked Viren to bring it closer and he did as he was told. She smiled when she saw the peaceful babies. Viren slowly lifted the girl out of the cot and gave it to Niveditha and then he went to  bring his boy. The girl was simple and peaceful just like Nivi had been. He smiled when he saw that at such a small age itself he could see another badmassh like him in his son. When he tried to lift him out he gripped on firmly to the cloth and then "chsss" and before long Viren was wet and the room filled with laughter. Yeh tu ne kya kar di ya papa ke shirt par" Nivi couldn't control her laughter her son had on the first day itself peed on his father. Viren was laughing too and knew tht being a parent was not easy at all.

He slowly bought the baby round finally. They both adored each other and their kids when the rest of the family came in. They all congratulated the pair and looked at the two children. CC was on the moon too she was looking at the children in delight. Everyone was happy and then Vandana noticed that Viren's shirt was wet and asked the reason for being so. He turned and looked at Nivi and they both started laughing. 

The family was confused and then Nivi said yeh toh mera badmaash beta ka nishaani hai. The whole family understood and the room erupted into laughter. 

Hope you like it guys! keep watching Next up- family entry at home!


Edited by chandmeinchupi - 17 May 2011 at 1:27am

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Its beautiful dear..loved it..loved Viren's excitment and emotions..

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 1:46am | IP Logged
Awww so cute scene... Viren was in tears, really touching. I'm loving your scenes. Please continue soon. Thanks dear.

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Awesome part yaar:)
i loved it...u hav so beautifully described evry emotion nd i felt it by heart..
thanks a lot fr such a feel good post :)
love u:)
love NivRen :)

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 2:42am | IP Logged
wow...amazing dear...loved it...please continue soon...

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 4:15am | IP Logged
wow that was sooo cute Smile i just loved it
please continue soon

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This is so cute...chweet little nivi and little viren...how cute...thank u so much,...fathima u r amazing...awesome..love u...!!

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Nice to hear that u guys like it but keep commemting

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