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Jab Hum Mile- Shanak Fic 30 pg 48 (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 May 2011 at 6:17am | IP Logged
loved the first update di...

continue soon...

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hey everyone  got a major test on Friday, here is  promo for next part


 Jatin Sharma had snoozed off despite his efforts to stay awake and await news of his missing sister.
Suddenly the phone rang waking him up.

"Sir Khanak Madam milegi," a peon said on the phone.

"Kahan hai woh?," Jatin exclaimed.

"Mere samne sir," he replied.

"Theek hai main abhi aata hoon," Jatin replied as he got up from the armchair.

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 " Aap ko pata hai ki hamara chota beta kab aagaya?," Madavi inquired.

Sunil shook his head.

" Iss barr phone nahin aaya. I will  tell you when he calls," he assured his wife.

Madavi shook her head.

"Pata nahin uska kya hoga Sunil. I am worried," she muttered.




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Sonali!!!
 
Sorry for the late reply, but MOTW OSs are driving me up the wall!!
 
Nice concept and build up!! Both of them strong characters!!
 
Continue soon!!
 

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wow shona what story im loving it shaan a secrate agent and khnak police comiisrs aughter cool story cant waitThumbs Up

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 hey everyone this has been one crazy week, here is a short update for now, will try to pm for next update, sorry just it's been hectic.

 Part 2

 

 Khanak felt his eyes on her  as she walked away from his white jeep. By the time she turned to see if he was still there, he was already gone. Had his presence been just a dream?

 

 No she shook her head. She recalled how the goons had dropped dead all of a sudden, how he released her from her  bonds , then  he had pulled her aside so they wouldn't  get spotted. Then  later on he had saved her from falling.  He had an intense  look on his face. He had introduced himself as SK.  What was his story she  wondered as she arrived inside the police station. A peon saw her drenched appearance and quickly grabbed the phone to call Inspector Jatin Sharma.

 

Jatin Sharma had snoozed off despite his efforts to stay awake and await news of his missing sister.

Suddenly the phone rang waking him up.

 

"Sir Khanak Madam milegi," a peon said on the phone.

 

"Kahan hai woh?," Jatin exclaimed.

 

"Mere samne sir," he replied.

 

"Theek hai main abhi aata hoon," Jatin replied as he got up from the armchair.

 

 The peon had Khanak  take a seat.

 

" Madam maine Jatin sir ko abhi phone kar liya hai. Woh  bus abhi aate honge. Aap ko kuch chaiye hai?( Madam I just called Jatin Sir, he should be here soon. Do you need anything?)

 

Khanak came out of her thoughts and shook her head.

 

 The peon brought her chai and then went off to make sure everything looked presentable. He could not ruin this opportunity to get in any bad books with a senior inspector.

 

 

 Meanwhile  in another area of Mumbai, in an upscale mansion resided the Khandlewal family. Sunil and Madhavi Khandlewal had two grown sons. Akshay the elder one had joined his father in business and was engaged to be married. Their younger son Shantanu was a mystery to them. They had thought he would be a lawyer by now and would be involved in starting his own firm. However much to their surprise he had taken up  a government job after his college graduation instead of  starting law school.

 

 They had returned late from  a party of a business associate.  The couple was getting ready for bed. Madhavi couldn't help but think about her younger child. He was away yet again. Shantanu usually called his father when he was getting ready to return.

 

 " Aap ko pata hai ki hamara chota beta kab aagaya?," Madavi inquired.

 

Sunil shook his head.

 

" Iss barr phone nahin aaya. I will  tell you when he calls," he assured his wife.

 

Madavi shook her head.

 

"Pata nahin uska kya hoga Sunil. I am worried," she muttered.

 

 

" Madhavi tumhe pata hai uska kam kaise hai," Sunil stated.

 

" I don't understand why he likes all this traveling. They don't even give him  proper time off," she said exasperated.

 

 Sunil had an inking about what his younger son may be hiding but perhaps it was for everyone's good. He had always expected the best from both his children. It was Sunil's mother, aka Shantanu's Dadi and Madhavi that babied him all the time. He  too hoped one day Shantanu would join the  family business or go back for law school. However how to convince his son to settle into a different path would not be an overnight task. Shantanu always need a strong reason to veer away from his original intended plans.

 

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sonali di loved the update 

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Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:57pm | IP Logged
Hey Shona di...HugHugHugHugHugHugHugHug

awesome update...

loved it ...

khanak was thinking of SK...amazing description...

Sunil wanted shaan to change his profession...awesome description ...
continue soon...

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hei sonali,
it was nice..
khanak already started thinking about SK..
mysterious shantanu..
continnue soon..

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