Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Hues Of Life (MG) Pt 12 pg 32 (Page 3)

MsMovielover IF-Dazzler
MsMovielover
MsMovielover

Joined: 12 December 2010
Posts: 3050

Posted: 18 May 2011 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
sounds very interesting
continue soon 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

angelina_2005 Goldie
angelina_2005
angelina_2005

Joined: 01 May 2005
Posts: 1350

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Hey interesting concept... Loved it :)
Update soon :)))

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

-psk- Senior Member
-psk-
-psk-

Joined: 12 November 2010
Posts: 206

Posted: 19 May 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
gr8 concept..
nice..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz
_BlackPearl_
_BlackPearl_

Joined: 30 October 2010
Posts: 25213

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Interesting!!!

loved it ...sounding happening.

do PM & con ...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

SaJan-SaJan Goldie
SaJan-SaJan
SaJan-SaJan

Joined: 24 April 2010
Posts: 1532

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 8:46am | IP Logged
hi...
nice prologue...
plz do cont soon..
 n plz add me in ur pm list..
thnx 4 d pm..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

--ANGEL-- IF-Dazzler
--ANGEL--
--ANGEL--

Joined: 01 January 2011
Posts: 4349

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
interesting start...looks like maan is already attracted to geet...update soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

Shalve IF-Sizzlerz
Shalve
Shalve

Joined: 06 September 2010
Posts: 12618

Posted: 20 May 2011 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
congrats on yr new FF... interesting Prologue 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

a little faith Goldie
a little faith
a little faith

Joined: 09 January 2009
Posts: 2037

Posted: 22 May 2011 at 4:11pm | IP Logged
Dear Pooja,

I love your apt descriptions that add details whilst weaving together the narrative.  Excellently done.  For instance, added to the chills. And His hands went immediately to hug himself.
I loved the manner things are specific in the general sense, finely done! For instance, 'the person in question'And 2 minutes to the exact time

Her skin was pale coloured, or maybe it was the effect of the cold, her lips were rosy pink, and he felt a sudden urge to touch them.Beautiful description.

He was brought back by a sudden cough.Nicely done, bringing us back to the present action tooLOL 

The end line very funny though we don't fully understand the history behind it. 

Very intriguing prologue, please count me in your pm list.
Love Sabah


Edited by a little faith - 22 May 2011 at 4:11pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kweetrockstar

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Hues Of Life (AR/ArSh) Pt 12 pg 54

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 48 49

Author: kweetrockstar   Replies: 387   Views: 42609

kweetrockstar 387 42609 25 May 2013 at 10:59am by Jasleenkaur01
Hues Of Life (Mayur) Pt 12 PG 25

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 22 23

Author: kweetrockstar   Replies: 177   Views: 20706

kweetrockstar 177 20706 11 December 2012 at 8:19pm by amandadsouza95
AR~The Green-Blue Hues#2 *Complete*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 71 72

Author: Pebblez   Replies: 573   Views: 123314

Pebblez 573 123314 01 March 2011 at 7:02am by ObodroKargosh
The Green-Blue Hues~AR ff..UPD PART 20 PAGE 153

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 161 162

Author: Pebblez   Replies: 1288   Views: 260904

Pebblez 1288 260904 20 February 2009 at 7:42am by Pebblez

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index