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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Okay, i read this stupid ff in which Armaan was peanuts and Riddhima was munchkin. Forgot which one it was.. Just wanted to inform u cuz u sounded pretty serious when u asked us to apprise u of any such thing:)
Love. 

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by belle_moi

*Edited*

Hey now, that was an awesome installment, I love the way you write, but I am a little critical. I think you should work more on the story, just dont drag it, not that i dont love it, but the story isnt moving forward. Everything apart, its truly nice reading your ff:)
Love.

*Edited again*
AWWW!!! Sorry! That was a fantabulous installment.
Love:)


Dragging? Shocked

Okay! I was actually under the opinion that its going very quick
But if you feel so, can you please also mention exactly what is being dragged, so I can work on it?! Because I don't really have any idea what is being dragged, I haven't noticed anything as such...

And actually I think its seeming to be dragged because I'm irregular with updates at the moment, because if you notice, they confessed, like what, 5 chapters ago? And they've just moved in together, so that is reaching another milestone in their relationship...The real story's just started now...A lot to come still!

Still, if you feel its being dragged, please do tell me what is being dragged...Or else I really won't know what you're talking about! So if you could tell me, I'll definitely improve on it! Thanks a tonne for an honest opinion! Smile

Thanks, I appreciate the honesty! Big smile

And I've just put up one installment! So why the two comments, if you don't mind me asking? A bit confused here! Confused

 HAhaha! Imagine, I just read that. I never read my pms actually, just saw urs and read it. Guess, all explained well now.
Love.

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by belle_moi

Okay, i read this stupid ff in which Armaan was peanuts and Riddhima was munchkin. Forgot which one it was.. Just wanted to inform u cuz u sounded pretty serious when u asked us to apprise u of any such thing:)
Love. 


Did you really read it? Shocked

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:49pm | IP Logged
umm.. why would i lie? i'm not talking about urs here:)
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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by belle_moi

umm.. why would i lie? i'm not talking about urs here:)
Love.


Can you tell me which though? And exactly how long ago it was? Geez, I never expected so much happening! Dead

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
no, actually it was so stupid that i did not even bother reading it. Maybe someone else can help u with that or u'll have to dig it up urself(imagine that). I just thought u should know. And ur ff is really cool:)
Love.

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by belle_moi

no, actually it was so stupid that i did not even bother reading it. Maybe someone else can help u with that or u'll have to dig it up urself(imagine that). I just thought u should know. And ur ff is really cool:)
Love.


Thank you! Hug

And seriously, no offence at your comments! And none taken! Big smile

And can you help me here, a little? Because I have exams from Thursday, don't have much time to dig up! 

Guys, if you'll come across it, please let me know! Ouch

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Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
It was quite some time back actually..
But chill dude, when u write somethin good, stupids with no creativity and brains run to copy it. Take it easy, people love the original. Come to think of it, anyone whose read this wont even read any such idiocy after the first para:)
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