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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by armaania13

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by armaania13

I come back after a weekend trip with my friends, and see another Thread for AWOTB and an Update!!!

And what an Update!!!
Simply ADORABLE!!!
LOVED IT!!!
Shru, I dont think I have words left anymore..
This FF just keeps getting better with every update!!!

Riddhima and her numberous rules  versus Armaan and his one rule!!!
Can I have this Armaan pleashhh??????????!!! He is just tooo cute!!!

My favorite part::

Rule 4) Only Good Morning and Good Night kisses will be permitted. No making out before dinner. No exceptions." He read. He looked at me with an expression of part disbelief, part amusement, part smiling. "You're giving timings for kissing, making out?" He confirmed. I nodded.

 

"Its essential we have rules for this! And oh, there's another clause in that rule." I pointed to the end of the paper again.

 

"Nothing below neck region?" He asked in disbelief.

 

"So we don't go overboard!" I nodded and grinned.

 

"Yeah, in this case, we'll see how much you follow this rule, and oh, this clause as well!" He smirked cheekily, rolling his eyes. I had no idea what he meant.



and of course this one too big time:
There's just one rule!" He thought for a moment and said. I looked at him questioningly. "You're not allowed to leave me or stop loving me!" He encircled me by my waist, pulling me on his lap and kissed my cheek.

 

I hope you can update soon again!!!



Thank you for managing a long comment even on such a short installment! Hug

But honestly and seriously, was it that good, because I haven't given my 100% to this one! Confused


You know Shru, this is something I noticed -- everytime you say you feel that you didnt give your 100% or you feel that the update isnt good enough, I just find that I have found those updates SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
And I know that a lot of the other readers share my views on those updates!!!

I just love the way you weave these situations into the story and with so much humor and those specially adorable romantic scenes between AR!!  They just leave you with such a warm fuzzy feeling!!!


Yeah, I always prefer keeping this story light and more to the humorous and cute side, because I am that kind of a person...I haven't experienced anything that serious or heavy yet, touch-wood, and the thing is, writing this FF is like a stress-buster to me, so I just try and make the read light so it becomes a stress-buster for my readers as well! Wink

And thanks a lot! When I say I didn't give my 100%, I meant this part was damn spontaneous, not at all thought-out or planned, and it is the beginning of a new beginning in their lives, and I just hope its come out just right. I wanted to do justice to it, but my lack of time, lack of thought and lack of concentration resulted in the part coming out just like that without any check or supervision! That's why I'm nervous about this one! 

But thanks a lot for liking it anyway! I can safely say that even when, God forbid, any of my readers lose interest, I can rely on you for an opinion! Hug

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:04pm | IP Logged
YAY YOU UPDATED :D

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Edited:

OMG this was such an unexpected update :D
but i love that

aww they moved in <3

LMAO ridz's rules LOLLOL I am sure the kiss one won't work Wink it already broke LOL

ooo I can't wait to see their cute fight when they want to use the bathroom LOL and obviously to tease Ridz more, Armaan might just come out in a towel
ROFL

why am I feeling like some drama will happen because of this ring issue later on. Like Ridz might panic or something Confused hope I am wrong and nothing of that happens Disapprove


Edited by Dr.BasketGupta - 20 May 2011 at 2:44am

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Simmy003

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Simmy003

Omg, such an adorable installment!!! They moved in togetherr!! How cute! :D And goshh, Riddhima and her rules!! Lmao all of them were hilarious and cute at the same time!<3
Especially the one where Armaan can't flirt with other girls and if he does, he gets kicked out of the house!! bahaha Love it! Poor Armaan and I know he will follow all of them rules except ahem you know which one ;)
Anyway, wuvvved the update Shru! Continue sooon pwease :)


Thanks! Big smile

And update na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW! Like NOW NOW! Angry I'll do morcha-bandi on your thread otherwise! Angry
Areeey, I can't update right now now, but I'll try and write sooon, patience my child patience :P


Aur kitna patience? Shocked  You're testing it! Big time! Angry I want to read an update! *Sob Sob*

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Simmy003

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by Simmy003

Omg, such an adorable installment!!! They moved in togetherr!! How cute! :D And goshh, Riddhima and her rules!! Lmao all of them were hilarious and cute at the same time!<3
Especially the one where Armaan can't flirt with other girls and if he does, he gets kicked out of the house!! bahaha Love it! Poor Armaan and I know he will follow all of them rules except ahem you know which one ;)
Anyway, wuvvved the update Shru! Continue sooon pwease :)


Thanks! Big smile

And update na!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW! Like NOW NOW! Angry I'll do morcha-bandi on your thread otherwise! Angry
Areeey, I can't update right now now, but I'll try and write sooon, patience my child patience :P


Aur kitna patience? Shocked  You're testing it! Big time! Angry I want to read an update! *Sob Sob*
LOL, I like making people wait :P then you are more curious and then you like the update even more you knoww? haha but I'm doing my homework right nowww! Tomorrow, I promise Big smile

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by armaania13

Originally posted by Castle-Beckett

Originally posted by armaania13

I come back after a weekend trip with my friends, and see another Thread for AWOTB and an Update!!!

And what an Update!!!
Simply ADORABLE!!!
LOVED IT!!!
Shru, I dont think I have words left anymore..
This FF just keeps getting better with every update!!!

Riddhima and her numberous rules  versus Armaan and his one rule!!!
Can I have this Armaan pleashhh??????????!!! He is just tooo cute!!!

My favorite part::

Rule 4) Only Good Morning and Good Night kisses will be permitted. No making out before dinner. No exceptions." He read. He looked at me with an expression of part disbelief, part amusement, part smiling. "You're giving timings for kissing, making out?" He confirmed. I nodded.

 

"Its essential we have rules for this! And oh, there's another clause in that rule." I pointed to the end of the paper again.

 

"Nothing below neck region?" He asked in disbelief.

 

"So we don't go overboard!" I nodded and grinned.

 

"Yeah, in this case, we'll see how much you follow this rule, and oh, this clause as well!" He smirked cheekily, rolling his eyes. I had no idea what he meant.



and of course this one too big time:
There's just one rule!" He thought for a moment and said. I looked at him questioningly. "You're not allowed to leave me or stop loving me!" He encircled me by my waist, pulling me on his lap and kissed my cheek.

 

I hope you can update soon again!!!



Thank you for managing a long comment even on such a short installment! Hug

But honestly and seriously, was it that good, because I haven't given my 100% to this one! Confused


You know Shru, this is something I noticed -- everytime you say you feel that you didnt give your 100% or you feel that the update isnt good enough, I just find that I have found those updates SIMPLY FANTASTIC!
And I know that a lot of the other readers share my views on those updates!!!

I just love the way you weave these situations into the story and with so much humor and those specially adorable romantic scenes between AR!!  They just leave you with such a warm fuzzy feeling!!!


Yeah, I always prefer keeping this story light and more to the humorous and cute side, because I am that kind of a person...I haven't experienced anything that serious or heavy yet, touch-wood, and the thing is, writing this FF is like a stress-buster to me, so I just try and make the read light so it becomes a stress-buster for my readers as well! Wink

And thanks a lot! When I say I didn't give my 100%, I meant this part was damn spontaneous, not at all thought-out or planned, and it is the beginning of a new beginning in their lives, and I just hope its come out just right. I wanted to do justice to it, but my lack of time, lack of thought and lack of concentration resulted in the part coming out just like that without any check or supervision! That's why I'm nervous about this one! 

But thanks a lot for liking it anyway! I can safely say that even when, God forbid, any of my readers lose interest, I can rely on you for an opinion! Hug



Honestly, its an Absolutely Adorable update!! You can stop being nervous.
And I know that the next update and all that follow will be equally so!!!!

Bas, now if we can get u to complete this chapter at the earliest, that would be the icing on the cake, considering your busy schedule!!

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Posted: 19 May 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
*Reserved Will B Back*

*Edited*
Awww Armaan N Riddhima Are Cutee. Finally Dey Have Moved In.
The Picture Part Was Adorable <3 
Hahahaha Ground Rules. Woowww.

He removed his ring, but instead of putting it away, he placed it in his other finger. "This way, I can wear it, and no one will know its an engagement ring! Happy? And the day, we officially get engaged, in front of the entire world, I'll just change the finger!"

Lol He Is Veryy Cleva <3

LMAO Riddhima Is Cleva.. The Types Of Rules Shes Set Up For Armaan. 
Poor Babyy.. :P
Awww Armaan Is Sooo Adorable. Loved His Rule. Its Da Best One Out Of All.
Oye Hoyee Armaan N Riddhima Kiss <3

Continue Sooonn <3

*Edited*
Shruuu.. That Was One Hell Of A Part. It Was Packed Wiv Manii Manii Things.. 
Im Spechless.. That Part Was Spell-Bounding <3 I Loved It <3
Wowww Riddhima Has Loads Of Stuffs..
Awww Shes Got A Cute Toy Collection. Adorable!
Arghh I Hate Harry Potters Book. Dnt Knw How People Cn Read It :P.
Hehehe She Has A Blanky. LOL. Awww
Seriuosly She Has Many Stuffs Man. Even I Dnt Have Dat Much LOL
Aahhh Da Mystery Guy Was Krish Her Cousin Bro.
Forgot Bout Him. Bt Den Remembered Wat Picture YUW were Twkin Bwt =)
OMG The Part Bwt Krish Was Emtional. It Made Me Cry. My Heart Melted Readin Da Part.
Shruu Yuw Wrote Everythin So PERFECTLY.
Hats Off <3
Armaan Is Da Best Boy, Man, Brother, Cusin, Friend, Boyfriend, Fiance, Husband & Father ETC.
I Wish I Have Some1 Lyk Dat In Ma Lyf.
Armaan Is A Person Who Has Everythin. EVERYTHING!
I Love Armaan <3
Godd MIND-BLOWING!
Waitin For Da Nxt Inst Or Part =] x


Edited by -RabiaKSGKaJen- - 22 May 2011 at 5:06am

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