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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 11:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lekshmic7

as usual AWESOME update. loved d whole part. arnav's scene ws a confusing one, so much mysteries wr hidden in d phone convo. next one, i dont want to tell anything about yamini! tinku-gunjan scene was so cute. both of dem r so adorable. den comes d much awaited sajan scene.!! window scene was just rocking.it remainds me of MJHT. sam's teasing was so cute. loved it. bt my favorite scene was d last one. oh my GODDD!!! It was HILARIOUS.! unexpected one. Tinku was just amazing. poor samrat!!! chindi chor! what will he do now?now his only expectation was Gunjan!! totally, MARVELOUS update. adding d pics thingy was also superb.dey wr so apt 4 d situations. liked it. continue super soon. thanks 4 d pm. pls update mbyph too.waitin eagerly.


Thanks Lakshmi for your sweet feed-back.Its really very precious for us.Smile Yes,ARNAV Part was confusing...We'll revel something about ARNAV's family,in our next update. The character of YAMINI is out n out negative... She is very sharp-minded girl.TINKU-GUNJAN scenes would be always attract readers attantion...because,their simplicity n purity is real beauty of their relationship.EmbarrassedWe are glad that,you liked SaJan ladder scene..yes it was hilarious...we'll continue this scene in our next part... Thanks for liking Our pic.selection...its totally S3 efforts.Smile
 
I think,S3 are working on MBYPH Updates.They will post next part of MBYPH,very soon.Smile


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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_tuli

very imp update for me...
but will read later... LOL
reserveddd as of now Wink

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   kisi ki baaho me soye hue... apna use bana liyaBig smile Big smile  Awesome siggy first of all...
 N the update... another stunning write-up... Clap Clap Clap
Arnav's thing is getting a bit clarified but it is a mixed and a long story involving Gunjan's parents also... So I think to reveal the whole thing, it'll take sum time Embarrassed No probs i'll wait... Wink But Arnav's part was very much matured n I liked the way he apologised to his brother after realising that wateva b d reason he is elder to him n respect means a lot...Smile this was d best attitude by Arnav! And his thought process was awesome... such an understanding guy and more importantly a loving one. I really adore such people. Embarrassed Big smile I hope he cums to noe d truth soon... (u c if he cums to noe even I'll cum to noe n my poor doubt will b resolved LOL)

Bhushan House part was a typical Bro-Sis drama... it was cute and d expressions were shown very beautifully Smile Ohhh haaa n this B part made me arise one more doubt which i think is again related to the previous doubt. Ohhh God such a doubtful ff LOL LOL LOL shud i reveal my doubt to confuse u too?? ok i'll do... my doubt is this...
(( Ab kuchh bhi pehle jaisa nahin ho paayega... Di,aaj phir kitni chup hain... Mom aur Papa bhi... Koi kuchh nahin keh raha. Phir se DELHI jaane ki news ne sab ko udaas kar diya hai. Sabhi kitne depress hain... DELHI... humara ghar...  (The thought of his home... and a broad smile engulfed his innocent face...  he remembered that small house... the happy times he shared with his family... but then...) nahin, ab toh woh ghar bhi nahin raha... (His smile had vanished and sadness clouded his face...) Kitna enjoy karte the hum wahaan... mera school... kitne saare friends... Di ke saath mil kar kitni shararat ki hai maine wahaan... par,aaj DELHI jaana kisi torture se kam nahin...I know,wahaan jaate hi 'woh sab' phir se start ho jaayega... (And just this thought and he shuddered... he hated the thought of it all. His eyes brimmed with tears...but then, he quickly wiped them... ) Y so??? wats wrong??? Y is Tinku saying like this?!! Anyways I don need to think much coz i noe wat u'll say. U'll ask me to WAIT AND WATCH LOL

CAN I KILL THE KHANNAS??? OKAY I'LL ONLY INJURE NAINA KHANNA BUT THIS FATHER AND DAUGHTER, I WANNA KILL THEM!?Angry Confused They r simply gonna use Samrat and his family... Gosh sooo cheap! Ouch Ouch If I was there na... they wud hav had neva even thot of doin so!! Tongue Ouch

Now my favourite part of the whole update... SaJan meet... the meet isn over yet coz they hav to deal with Gunjan's dad!! But watever u hav posted in this update was awesomeee Hug
Sooo cute, soo loving... it reminded me of the show itself...!! Joe I think u took d punishment a lot seriously... Gosh if u post soo gud things for  punishments I wud luv to punish u often Wink Wink
Samrat's expression and convincing quality is mind blowing... And Gunjan's innocence is always wonderful...He was soo confident while talkin to Gunjan makin that poor thing confused Embarrassed
but it was very very very very cuteee and when he was saying that, "TUMNE MUJHE 'US' POSITION ME DEKH LIYA..."LOL haaayee soo adorable!!Embarrassed *pouts*  And TINKU was sooo soo awesome in d last part... loved him soo much... if I eva find him na I'll start cooochi-cooing him soo much...LOL LOL LOL very sweet... btw i think there is a mistake in writing when Amit cums n shouts at Sam and asks him to get down... u had to write GD but u wrote SD... Embarrassed Embarrassed

I wanted to say this... but forgot while writing... The pics that u guys have posted is sooo fattang! *hi5* Ekdum apt for all d situations...Wink Wink They were like icing-on-d-cake... Superb selection!!!
Tooo good guys... all of u were rocking!!! Waiting for the next update only to see how Gunjan saves Samrat and how he reacts after this... baaki sab toh will go with d flow!! Wink Hug

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Thanks Tuli for your fast replySmile...long n sweet toh as usual hoti hi hai.Embarrassed Not only ARNAV part... Actually,whole story concept is very mature... we are going to show some very common but, bitter truth of our society.Ouch ARNAV is very simple,sober guy...out n out family person.He likes GUNJAN...after confirmation of his family...He adore her as a to-be wife... We'll reveal something about his family in our next Update...Embarrassed
 
"Doubtful FF" ...Nice 'Nick Name'.LOL No,actually Its very simple story...we are hiding something about BHUSHAN Family...due to maintain story essence.Embarrassed After secret unfold... story turned to very serious mode...so,now...read n enjoy...Smile
 
We'll be continue SaJan Ladder scene,in our next part too...EmbarrassedFirst we decide that... it'll be post along with this part...But,Yeh part already kaafi long ho gaya tha...SmileIsse aur long karna readers ko torture kerne jaisa ho jaata.Wink(They are already fade-up with our long-longest partsLOL). Yes,I scare to your punishment.(Because,I am very 'seedha-saada' baccha...N don't want to die soon.LOL) SAMRAT would be SAMRAT...What can we do..??Embarrassed Thanks for liking this part.Because,I personally feel...writing of 'Situational' comedy is very tough then other things...yaa,emotional scenes too.
 
TINKU is our favorite too. Smile We love to write his parts...(but,his dio. portion is very difficult for usConfused).  Remember my words...no body can forget his character after this FF ending. And,Thanks for quoting that mistake...(GD-SD thingEmbarrassed) its totally my fault. and I really can't say that... "Bade-bade Updates mein aisi chhoti-chhoti mistakes ho jaati hain Senorita(Tuli)..."LOL[Totally SRK styleWink] Mistake toh mistake hai...I admit,just rectify it.Embarrassed
 
Thanks for liking posted Pics. n that siggy (Made by '-Drishti-').SmilePlease,wait some more time for next part...Because,I am going somewhere...and,S3 are very busy in MBYPH... toh isse abhi hold par rakhte hain...Tongue may be,only TEASER part hoga.(posted by S3Wink).
 
Thanks again Tuli for your all precious feed-backs n  encouraging comments for this FF.SmileIts really a lot to us. (My 1 another Longest Reply.LOL)

Keep Smile always,
Joseph.Heart

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayadika11

awesooome...
fab.
loved the FF...
do cont.soon..
thanx for the pm.
take care.


Thanks Mayadika for your precious comment.Embarrassed We'll be try to update soon.Smile

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Posted: 19 August 2011 at 7:50pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tasnin96

OMG !!!!!!
It was mind blasting, superb...
SaJan scenes were damn cute... tinku is sooo naughty..
lovely update... cont soon.
Thanks a lot for pm.



Thanks Tasnin for your sweet feed-back.Its really a lot to us.Thanks for liking SaJan n Tinku partEmbarrassed We'll be try to update soon.Smile

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 2:07am | IP Logged
its always treat to read ur updates awesome update guys Clapi always love char's thoughts and povs with their descriptions whole update was roller coaster ride of emotions started from arnav ended with samrat ,arnav's confused mind his pain his determination it showed how much gunjan meant for him though he only just saw her once he committed his life for her unknowing with the mystery behind changed mind of his family something is hidden in it and i guess time will reveal this truth 

gunjan and tinku bonding is very awesome to read here soul siblings who r connected with heart if one is in pain other can feel same pain tinku's care and concern for his di was very touchy ,in so young age he is mature enough to cheer his di knowing fact that all r in pain n its his responsibility to cheer up them 

yamini being over confident and stubborn showing it won't be easy for samrat to get her away from his life bcz she only wants him she doesn't love him and he knows it very well she only cares for herself totally self obsessed girl whose overconfident will be crushed by sam one day lol

coming to sajan's meeting at window totally sajanish it reminded me olden golden memories of sajan and mjht this was the way samrat always used to meet gunjan and first attempt of window was like same seriously enjoyed it a lot it somehow brought me back into magical memories of sajan loved samrat's naughtiness and gunjan's confused scared but innocent and pure convo it was worth reading i seriously loved it but tinku part was seriously enjoyable LOLpoor sam kya halat kardi LOLnow curious to know how will samrat will handle this situation or will gunjan help him or not do update soon and thanks for pm and yeah i loved new both siggies beautiful Embarrassed


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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 5:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Joseph_A

Originally posted by cool_tuli

very imp update for me...
but will read later... LOL
reserveddd as of now Wink

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   kisi ki baaho me soye hue... apna use bana liyaBig smile Big smile  Awesome siggy first of all...
 N the update... another stunning write-up... Clap Clap Clap
Arnav's thing is getting a bit clarified but it is a mixed and a long story involving Gunjan's parents also... So I think to reveal the whole thing, it'll take sum time Embarrassed No probs i'll wait... Wink But Arnav's part was very much matured n I liked the way he apologised to his brother after realising that wateva b d reason he is elder to him n respect means a lot...Smile this was d best attitude by Arnav! And his thought process was awesome... such an understanding guy and more importantly a loving one. I really adore such people. Embarrassed Big smile I hope he cums to noe d truth soon... (u c if he cums to noe even I'll cum to noe n my poor doubt will b resolved LOL)

Bhushan House part was a typical Bro-Sis drama... it was cute and d expressions were shown very beautifully Smile Ohhh haaa n this B part made me arise one more doubt which i think is again related to the previous doubt. Ohhh God such a doubtful ff LOL LOL LOL shud i reveal my doubt to confuse u too?? ok i'll do... my doubt is this...
(( Ab kuchh bhi pehle jaisa nahin ho paayega... Di,aaj phir kitni chup hain... Mom aur Papa bhi... Koi kuchh nahin keh raha. Phir se DELHI jaane ki news ne sab ko udaas kar diya hai. Sabhi kitne depress hain... DELHI... humara ghar...  (The thought of his home... and a broad smile engulfed his innocent face...  he remembered that small house... the happy times he shared with his family... but then...) nahin, ab toh woh ghar bhi nahin raha... (His smile had vanished and sadness clouded his face...) Kitna enjoy karte the hum wahaan... mera school... kitne saare friends... Di ke saath mil kar kitni shararat ki hai maine wahaan... par,aaj DELHI jaana kisi torture se kam nahin...I know,wahaan jaate hi 'woh sab' phir se start ho jaayega... (And just this thought and he shuddered... he hated the thought of it all. His eyes brimmed with tears...but then, he quickly wiped them... ) Y so??? wats wrong??? Y is Tinku saying like this?!! Anyways I don need to think much coz i noe wat u'll say. U'll ask me to WAIT AND WATCH LOL

CAN I KILL THE KHANNAS??? OKAY I'LL ONLY INJURE NAINA KHANNA BUT THIS FATHER AND DAUGHTER, I WANNA KILL THEM!?Angry Confused They r simply gonna use Samrat and his family... Gosh sooo cheap! Ouch Ouch If I was there na... they wud hav had neva even thot of doin so!! Tongue Ouch

Now my favourite part of the whole update... SaJan meet... the meet isn over yet coz they hav to deal with Gunjan's dad!! But watever u hav posted in this update was awesomeee Hug
Sooo cute, soo loving... it reminded me of the show itself...!! Joe I think u took d punishment a lot seriously... Gosh if u post soo gud things for  punishments I wud luv to punish u often Wink Wink
Samrat's expression and convincing quality is mind blowing... And Gunjan's innocence is always wonderful...He was soo confident while talkin to Gunjan makin that poor thing confused Embarrassed
but it was very very very very cuteee and when he was saying that, "TUMNE MUJHE 'US' POSITION ME DEKH LIYA..."LOL haaayee soo adorable!!Embarrassed *pouts*  And TINKU was sooo soo awesome in d last part... loved him soo much... if I eva find him na I'll start cooochi-cooing him soo much...LOL LOL LOL very sweet... btw i think there is a mistake in writing when Amit cums n shouts at Sam and asks him to get down... u had to write GD but u wrote SD... Embarrassed Embarrassed

I wanted to say this... but forgot while writing... The pics that u guys have posted is sooo fattang! *hi5* Ekdum apt for all d situations...Wink Wink They were like icing-on-d-cake... Superb selection!!!
Tooo good guys... all of u were rocking!!! Waiting for the next update only to see how Gunjan saves Samrat and how he reacts after this... baaki sab toh will go with d flow!! Wink Hug

Confused

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Thanks Tuli for your fast replySmile...long n sweet toh as usual hoti hi hai.Embarrassed Not only ARNAV part... Actually,whole story concept is very mature... we are going to show some very common but, bitter truth of our society.Ouch ARNAV is very simple,sober guy...out n out family person.He likes GUNJAN...after confirmation of his family...He adore her as a to-be wife... We'll reveal something about his family in our next Update...Embarrassed
 
"Doubtful FF" ...Nice 'Nick Name'.LOL No,actually Its very simple story...we are hiding something about BHUSHAN Family...due to maintain story essence.Embarrassed After secret unfold... story turned to very serious mode...so,now...read n enjoy...Smile
 
We'll be continue SaJan Ladder scene,in our next part too...EmbarrassedFirst we decide that... it'll be post along with this part...But,Yeh part already kaafi long ho gaya tha...SmileIsse aur long karna readers ko torture kerne jaisa ho jaata.Wink(They are already fade-up with our long-longest partsLOL). Yes,I scare to your punishment.(Because,I am very 'seedha-saada' baccha...N don't want to die soon.LOL) SAMRAT would be SAMRAT...What can we do..??Embarrassed Thanks for liking this part.Because,I personally feel...writing of 'Situational' comedy is very tough then other things...yaa,emotional scenes too.
 
TINKU is our favorite too. Smile We love to write his parts...(but,his dio. portion is very difficult for usConfused).  Remember my words...no body can forget his character after this FF ending. And,Thanks for quoting that mistake...(GD-SD thingEmbarrassed) its totally my fault. and I really can't say that... "Bade-bade Updates mein aisi chhoti-chhoti mistakes ho jaati hain Senorita(Tuli)..."LOL[Totally SRK styleWink] Mistake toh mistake hai...I admit,just rectify it.Embarrassed
 
Thanks for liking posted Pics. n that siggy (Made by '-Drishti-').SmilePlease,wait some more time for next part...Because,I am going somewhere...and,S3 are very busy in MBYPH... toh isse abhi hold par rakhte hain...Tongue may be,only TEASER part hoga.(posted by S3Wink).
 
Thanks again Tuli for your all precious feed-backs n  encouraging comments for this FF.SmileIts really a lot to us. (My 1 another Longest Reply.LOL)

Keep Smile always,
Joseph.Heart



yeahh u were to go na... on your special request I replied soon Wink chal u Thanked me na already so u r welcome... LOL LOL This reply was sooo damn funny yaar... i cudn stop laughin yl reading it... LOL LOL LOL  Awww it'll take a serious turn after revealing all the truths n mysteries??? Embarrassed No no no then I don want them to b revealed... but m also desperate to noe them... shucks... u all na! Always drop me into dilemmas... Ouch
Yeahh I got that nick name earlier only but i didn write it jus bcoz i had sum hopes to get my doubts cleared LOL LOL But this update forced me to make u guys aware about the name... Embarrassed Wink
Really??? I don think anybody is bored in these updates??? I think u cud hav written sum more! Tongue nai chodd itna kaafi tha... LOL LOL OMGGG did i jus hear u sayin 'seedha-saadha baccha'????? yaaa baccho ki toh insult ho rhi hai... ROFL Yaaa i agree with u... expressing a comic scene is really difficult... difficult than senti scenes too Smile
Ofcourse yaar... I donno about others but I'll never forget TINKU... I jus love him allooot... I hav an elder bro but aftr this i wish I had a younger bro like him too... Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
Dude... awww me Senorita?? Embarrassed BTW U cannot b SRK okay!!Tongue LOL LOL  He is the best... Blushing N if u say anything na... then... Confused Tongue Tongue
Yeahh I can wait now... n bye bye have fun wherever u r goin!!! Big smile Hug Hug will miss this... lez c when I get to read again... till then Take Care...

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by snowwhite28

Hi joseph  & S3 again wonderful update...

Samrat was the show stealer i simply love this samrat...& tinku was sooo naughty & hilarious too specially that one"aab main bada ho gaya hoon"Sillykabhi kabhi limits cross kar deta hai but he is cute...he is very caring & protective brother too...

gunjan is so lonely...i hope her loneliness get over soon by entry of samrat in her life...Approve

Tinku caughted samrat red handedOuch ab toh samrat ki khair nahiEvil Smile...i hope gunjan use bachaley...

sajan window scene was awesome...yar mjht ki yaad aa gayi...

i think samrat is already fallen for her.Blushing..the way he was thinking about gunjan...Embarrassed

talk between arnav & his bro was confusing...
yar mystery kab reveal karoge...Disapprove aur wait nahi hota...

yamini was disgustingAngry...i hope samrat ke family ko uski reality pata chal jaye aur samrat aur uski shaadi cancel ho jaye...Evil Smile...i know yeh itna aasan nahi hai...but still hoping for the best...

plzzz update next part soon...waiting for the talk between samrat & his would be father in law & would be saale sahab..Wink

continue soon...




Thanks Tanu,for your all nice words for this update.Smile Yes TINKU is very naughty...He is small but,wants to behave like elder...just like normal growing kids.Wink GUNJAN is very family oriented girl...she cares to her family too much...so,totally commited for ARNAV...becuse,she knows ARNAV is the choice of her family.
 
Thanks for appreciating SaJan ladder scene.Yes,TINKU caught to him red handed.LOL GUNJAN usse bachati hai yaa nahin...yaa bachati hai toh kaise...??Confused yeh toh next part mein hi pata chalega.Wink
 
We'll be reveal ARNAV Family mystery,very soon...Please,wait (little-bitEmbarrassed).And,We'll be definitely try to post next part soon. Thanks again buddy for your sweet comment.

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
hey guysHug mindblowing update loved itClapgunjan tinku bonding just adore them very cute tinku is a very protective bro who always takes care of gunjan Embarrassedloved sajan window scene it was awesome reminded me of mjht Day Dreamingsamrat being naughty n poor gunjan alll confused loved itEmbarrassedlast part was hilarious tinku was awesome LOLeach n every scene loved it very well writtenClap now cannot wait to read next part do cont soon n thanks for the pmSmile

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