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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 5:12am | IP Logged
Edited my reply on page 29.Smile

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
Hey Mr.Khadoos...ROFL
edited my comment on pg.24...
its a li'l short this time due to some personal problems...plz bear with it...nxt time pakka long rply...Embarrassed
& do rply to it ok, m w8ing...Tongue

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 7:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ekta_monaya

 Reserved...Cry

after reading...

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OMGGG...blushing like hell...!!!!
Will edit soon...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing

                                                             *Edited*

Ok again i failed to comment 1st...Cry...but no problem coz m 1st on the 24th pg.no...see m so ENTHUSIASTIC to comment 1st...ROFL...hope nxt time i succeed in commenting 1st...ROFL & this time i ressed before u updated too...LOL Wah HATS OFF to me...ROFL -Yaa...I feel same thing...ROFL ROFL.True ENTHUSIASTIC to comment 1st..ROFL

Ok now cuming to this update...it was really EXTRA-SPECIAL for me as i mentioned before...Blushing...it was superb, mind-blowing, ultra-cute, terrific & Ultra-januable... & way too much BLUSHABLE...OMG I still cant blive wat i read...Blushing...was it really true?! Someone PINCH me plzzz...Embarrassed...u knw wat i read this update almost 8 times!! & this "SPECIAL SAJAN MEET SCENE almost 10 times...i still cant blive myself that i read it so many times...this can xplain to you how much ADDICTED i am to your FF...I Love this FF completely...Day Dreaming & m hoping for some more ultra januable scenes...Embarrassed
Thanks a lot EKTA for your compliment..BlushingEmbarrassedBlushing 8-10  time reading is not small thing..Embarrassed.Thank you so much for liking this FF ,to much.EmbarrassedYaa,some SaJan scenes are coming.Embarrassed.Januable or not...decide,after reading.Embarrassed

now cuming to Samrat-SM convo...it was really cute...awww...sam is the adorable son while SM is the caring & sweet mom...totally mother-son convo & way too adorable...superbly written scene...loved it...Embarrassed...Thnk god Samrat ke bathroom ka shower kharab ho gya warna "AISI" meeting "KAISE" hoti SaJan ki...ROFL...Thnk u so much SM for letting him in Brij's room...ROFL
What a thought...Blushing.Girls bhi naa...Blushing.Poor,SM ko kya pata tha...'Aisa Kuchh' ho jaayega...Embarrassed.

& now cuming to ISHITA...awww...shez so sweet...a REAL character actually & not the typical nagging daily-soap bhabhi...instead a loving soul...m loving her character whu knws wat is good for evryone & wat not... & i hope that she suceeds in bringing gunjan in sam's life...*FINGERS CROSSED*...
ISHITA n BRIJ is very sweet characters of this story.Yes,she is not playing a typical 'Bhabhi' character...She really feels, GUNJAN is right girl for SAMRAT.

& now Gunjan-GM scene...again a very sweet scene...totally mother-daughter convo... & 1 line was so typical said by gunjan's mother..."SALWAR SUIT tumpar acchi lagti hai, atleast uss JEANS TOP se toh zyada acchi lagti hai..." Its such a TYPICAL dialogue by mothers...ROFL...isse padhke meri mom ki yaad aa gyi...always telling me the same thing...ROFL...i must say u wrote the girl's convo so well...terrific yaar...simply superbbb...Clap Clap Clap Thanks Ekta...Because,I was so nervous during the writing that part.GUNJAN's question to her Mom about her dress is natural feeling because,woh generally Jeans-Top carry karti hai... toh, 'Salwar Suit' mein bahar jaana...thoda awkward toh lagega...Embarrassed.And,Please...Aunty ki baat maan lo...(Just like Gunjan) Kya pata koi SAMRAT jaisa mil jaaye...Blushing..ussi 'condition' mein..BlushingBlushingBlushing.(At least,mere 'Bro.' ka peecha toh chutegaROFL ROFL ROFL,Jab se tumhaari chat read ki hai...ROFL He scared..Wink..'Bhabhi' ko kaha hai..Iss ladki ka kuchh karo... warna,main safe nahin...ROFL ROFL ROFL)

& then i loved Gunjan-Ishita-SM convo...m sure jab SaJan ki marriage ho jyegi tab in teeno ki convo's padhne me bohot mazza ayega...LOL...Gunjan is so INTELLIGENT...apni family ke saath PLAYSCHOOL banayegi...ROFL...too good Gunjan...i must say vry practical thinking...ROFL...loved this convo vry much & then i evn loved ISHITA's thoughts...shez so right...Gunjan ko koi NAA kaise keh sakta h... how true!!Embarrassed -Are you sure...SaJan marriage hogi...??ShockedConfusedShocked.What a confidence...Wink.ISHITA thought is right on that place...but,SM views about SaJan marriage thing is also right so,unhen koi hope nahin hai.

& then cuming to my FAV scene...SaJan 1st meet scene... OMG OMG...i was like...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing after reading it...it was just...i dont have words yaar...i was blushing like HELL...Blushing...Samrat in TOWEL...Blushing & then...Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing Blushing...Poor Gunjan!! I really can undrstnd her condition...really a very JANUABLE scene...aisi meeting maine aajtak nai dekhi... & then Samrat assumed her as the would-be-Mrs.Samrat Shergill...?! OMG OMG m gonna fainttt...Shocked...itni ACCHI galat-fehmi ho gyi isse...ROFL...thnk god Samrat is not a DHAKKAN here...in fact he's the SMART one here...ROFL...but i wonder wen he'll cum to knw the truth toh bechare ka kya reaction hoga?! W8inggg eagerly for it...lets see if he really chooses that YAMINIII over Gunjan...Dead...i know NEVER...hope so uski assumption sahi ho jye...plzzz joseph plzzz... & iss meeting ke liye spl.thnks to ISHITA bhabhi...really ISHITA ki JAI HO...!!ROFL...m just waiting for Gunjan's POV & Sam's teasing with her in the nxt update...i really cant wait nymore...Embarrassed & then samrat's last dialogue...Ermmm...Ahem Ahem...Blushing ROFL...i wonder how u wrote this?! I mean Mr.Khadoos writing SUCH scene is totally UNBELIVABLE...ur suceeding in breaking the image wich u created by MBYPH...Gr8 coz m really loving it...Embarrassed ROFL  -Definitely Yaar,I am so desperate to broke my own set image.EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
but,story is important then other things. SaJan first meeting scene is important part of this story...woh scene memorable hona chahiye tha because,further story...uski need thi. But,Yes I was nervous... because,This is my first try to write this type of scene..
Embarrassedand most imp. thing woh scene funny n embarrassing hona chahiye tha...not,vulgar...Definitely SAMRAT is not DHAKKAN here..,he is very smart...sorry,Extra ordinary SmartEmbarrassed.By the way,My next part is ready(working again on SAM-TINKU part convo.Wink)...I'll post very soon.Wink

& then i forgot to mention TINKU-GUNJAN scene...it was so so cute...LOL...DD...ROFL but BTW wats MB & MBA??? ...m curious to know...  - I think,DD is suitable  for You AngryROFL ROFL.MB n MBA's full form is very hilarious... woh Part-5 mein reveal karoonga.Embarrassed 

& BTW u said that "Delhi waale kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h..." maybe karte honge but Mumbai waalo ki kabhi nahi coz we Mumbaiwaalas r the BEST...Hum kisi ki bhi bolti bandh krwa sakte h...for eg. MoNaya...Mohit is Delhite while Sanaya is Mumbaikar & kabhi dekha h mohit ko sanaya ke saamne zubaan chalate hue?!...nahi naa...ROFL ROFL ROFL so this proves my point...ROFL ROFL ROFL...this Tinku is just like my elder-cousin bro, SID...actually mera bro isse bhi aage h...ROFL ROFL 
-Oh God...!! I can't believe it...You also belongs to DELHI naa...Shocked Shocked Shocked.Kitni fast way mein party change ki...Shocked Shocked Shocked.By the way,MOHIT n BARUN is exceptional case of 'Delhite'...Ok..LOL.waise bhi SANAYA ke saamne maine kisi ko zubaan chalate nahin dekha..
ROFL ROFL ROFL . aur,waise bhi jab SANAYA bolti hai...MOHIT only usse dekhta hi rehta hai...(watch,any MoNaya interviewEmbarrassed) kuchh soch hi nahin paata..toh,bolega kaise ?? ROFL ROFL ROFL. TINKU is just like SID...!!Smile Aur,mujhe laga yeh character mer cousin jaisa hai ROFL.TINKU bhi kaafi aage hai...upcoming parts read toh karo...Embarrassed.

This update was a complete package for me...BEST update of this FF till date...m in LOVE wit it completely...Superb, fantastic, mind-blowing, marvellous, terrific update...HATS OFF to you Mr.Khadoos...Clap Clap Clap Thanks TLEmbarrassed for your all nice wordsEmbarrassed.

Ah! Finally i Un-ressed...Sorry for Unreserving so late...actually my Grandpa is not well & so i've cum here wit my lappy & hardly get time to cum onlyn...hope u undrstnd...really sorry yaar...doosra wala unress i'll do aaram se fursat me...Thnk You So much for bearing me & my rply...nxt time btter rply krungi...pakka promise...Embarrassed
BTW wen r u updating???...Ab toh maine bhi UNRESS kr dia, ab toh update kr do...LOL...m waiting eagerly plzzz update soon...Embarrassed -Don't say sorry for that...Smile I understand yaar for your problem.This is sufficient reply...I loved to read it.Embarrassed I'll be update so soon...thoda dio. par re-work kar raha hoon...Dio. thode toh catchy hone chahiye..Embarrassed..and,mainly I want to show, SAM-TINKU scene/convo is little-bit extra special.Wink

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...

W8ing eagerly 4 nxt update...do cont soon...ROFL ROFL-I'll be continue soon...ROFLROFLROFL .Just Relax...Embarrassed

Luv,
Ekta...Hug



Edited by Joseph_A - 08 June 2011 at 5:53am

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 8:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SwaNia_2

Res... but overall... as usual awesome updates.Smile


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Awesome updates. SmileSorry for the late reply. Read both the parts together, and was a real pleasure reading them. Samrat scenes with his family were lovely, his rapport with his bhabhi was beautifully put across. The devar-bhabhi nok jhok was so well described.Clap I simply loved Gunjan.Smile She is so sweet and her sweetheart little bro... she dotes on him. Not surprising... .older siblings do dote on the younger ones. And younger ones love that attention. Loved Tinku's possessiveness towards his sister... and  Gunjan's naughtiness... too good.Clap

But the absolutely awesome part was the SaJan meeting... so well described and written. Hats off to you Joseph... brilliant...Clap

Samrat's dad will not accept GunjanShocked. He has no idea what he is rejecting.LOL. All in all superb updates. Waiting for the next update. Do update soon.Smile


Thanks Swati,for your precious Feed-back Embarrassed.thanks a lot for liking whole Update n all scenes...Embarrassed..Gunjan-Tinku shares a very strong bonding.She loves him but,same time...not supporter of Tinku's misbehave with other elder.I personally feel, Love n Respects is very important quality of a Idol Family.Thanks for liking SaJan first meet scene.Embarrassed Your appreciation is very precious thing for me.Embarrassed I'll be update very soon.

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
                       ...Aur PYAAR Ho Gaya !   

PART-4   (1/2)

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AASHIYANA :
 

At Kitchen
 
GUNJAN entered in very hurry way... (almost running)...her breathing speed was high... ISHITA saw her,asked in teasing tone... " 1 Packet dhoondhne mein itni der...? Aur yeh 'RAJDHANI Exp.' ki speed mein kyun aa rahi ho...? Kya kisi MARATHON mein participate karne ki practice chal rahi hai...? "
 
GUNJAN looked at her...with very curious look...came close to her...n said in little-bit scared tone... "Bhabhi ! wo...woh...aapke room mein koi hain... Maine unhen pehle kabhi nahin dekha...toh...
 
I - (Curiously) Mere room mein...? (First looked at SUDHA Jii side...then turned to GUNJAN side) Kab...? Kise dekh liya...?
 
SM - Arre ! Woh SAMRAT ki baat kar rahi hai... Usse hi dekh liya hoga... (said in normal tone)
 
I - SAMRAT !! par...mere room mein...? (ISHITA didn't about that reason)
 
SM - Haan ! Woh actually,uske room ka bathroom shower work nahin kar raha tha...toh,maine hi usse kisi aur room yaa BRIJ ke bathroom ko use karne ko kaha tha...
 
I - Oh ! (looked at GUNJAN) Toh kya hua...? Kabhi kisi stranger ko nahin dekha...? Kya har baar kisi ajnabee ko dekh kar aise hi darr jaati ho... (said with smiling face but,little teasing tone)
 
G - Nahin Bhabhi...woh baat nahin hai...par, (stopped suddenly...n visualized Room incident)
 
I - Par...? Par...kya...? Ruk kyun gayi...? 1 min... usne tumse kuchh kaha kya...?
 
G - No...nahin toh... Par,woh hain kaun...? (asked curiously)
 
I - Woh SAMRAT hai... BRIJ ke chhote bhai... Iss ghar ka laadla Beta... (n smiled softly)
 
G - Oh ! Par maine unhen yahaan pehle toh kabhi nahin dekha...
 
I - Haan,Kyunki woh yahaan nahin rehta... MUMBAI mein rehta hai... Usse Hamare HOTEL BUSINESS mein interest nahin... Wahin 1 Badi company mein job karta hai... (said in general tone) ...but,tumhen kya hua...? Tum toh aise bhaag kar aayi jaise, kisi Bhoot ko dekh liya ho...
 
G - No...No...Bhabhi maine kuchh nahin dekha... sach mein...maine toh apni aankhen hi bandh kar li thin...  (stopped suddenly.just then she realized..what is she saying?)
 
ISHITA looked at SUDHA Jii with a strange look... then,again looked at GUNJAN n said..." Yeh tum kya keh rahi ho...? SAMRAT ko dekha... bhaag kar yahaan tak aayi... Aur ab keh rahi ho kuchh nahin dekha... Aankhen bandh kar li thin... Oh God ! Tum aur tumhaari baatein mujhe paagal kar dengi... forget it... ab agar packet mil gaya ho toh... 'Pudding' ke liye paste banana start kar sakti ho...
 
G - (Little embarrass) Ji...main ...main abhi paste banati hoon... n she started to mix Chocko powder with Milk n Egg...but,still thinking... ((Oh ! Ab main kya bataaon Bhabhi ko...ki,maine room mein kya dekha...?? In-fact main toh kisi ko bata bhi nahin sakti... Kya sochte honge woh mere baare mein...par mujhe kya pata tha ki,woh wahaan honge... Oh God! main toh unhen face bhi nahin kar paaoongi... Nazrein milana toh door ki  baat hai... Its really embarrassing ... Waise,maine kaha toh ki,maine kuchh nahin dekha...I wish,woh mujh par trust karein... Ab Bas jaldi-jaldi yeh saare items ban jaaye...toh,yahaan se jaaoon...))
 

After some minutes...
 
I - (looked at SUDHA Jii n said) Mom... yeh chicken toh curd mein rost ho chuke hain ab toh bas Mix paste ke saath Micro-Wave mein grill karna hai... aur kuchh toh nahin karna hai...??
 
SM - Nahin... ab aur toh kuchh nahin main usse grill karti hoon...
 
G - (Interrupt) Aunty aap rehne den, Main aa gayi hoon naa...main yeh sab kar loongi... Aap ko ab aaram karna chahiye... aur phir meri help ko Bhabhi bhi toh hain...
 
SM - Arre ! Nahin main thik hoon... Main kar loongi..tum toh waise bhi abhi 'Pudding' banane mein busy ho... yeh...
 
G - (Cuts) No...Aap ab jaaieye...maine kaha naa main kar loongi... aur,agar aap ko khud se hi sab kuchh karna tha toh mujhe bulaya kyun...? Main yeh paste bana kar woh chicken 'Grill' kar loongi... Don't worry...
 
SM - Nahin bete...main kar loongi naa... waise bhi kahaan kuchh karti hoon...
 
G - Ok... phir aap hi karo...main jaati hoon...kyunki,yahaan toh kisi ko meri zaroorat hi nahin... (said Dramaticaly,ISHITA smiled after seeing her acting)
 
SM - Achha Baba...Main hi chali jaati hoon... Ab toh khush... Yeh ladki bhi naa... Itni ziddi hai ki... Iss se toh koi jeet hi nahin sakta...  n she left the kitchen with smiling face...
 
GUNJAN smiled softly... SAMRAT saw this... he was stood,behind of the window... He was smililing after seeing this...feeling so nice... liked her caring nature...
(( Not Bad... !! You are just like my...'Dream Girl'...
(B
lushed)  Soft, Simple, Beautiful, Caring... n so so Sweet... (smiled)  Hum pehle kyun nahin mile...? waise,very smart girl...pehle hi Mom aur Bhabhi ko apni side kar liya hai... Meri 'Naa' ki toh koi possibility hi nahin chhodi... par, tumhen main 'Naa' keh bhi nahin sakta... Itna fool nahin hoon... jo,tumhen khud se door kar doon...(smiled) par,yeh Mom aur Bhabhi ko kya ho gaya hai... Yeh mujhe uss se introduce kyun nahin kara rahe... Mujhe uss se baat karni hai... kamaal hai..woh mere liye aayi hai ..aur yeh log hain ki,mujhe uss se milwaane ki jagah... uss se mere liye Lunch banwa rahe hain... I know,Yeh sab Bhabhi ki hi shararat hai...Yeh 'Bhabhi' bhi naa... sach Dude ! Yeh toh abhi se hi meri hone waali wife ko pareshaan kar rahi hain... Inhen toh main baad mein bataoonga...lagta hai Bro. se inki complain karni hogi... Kitna kaam le rahi hain uss se... Uss...?? Uss ka naam kya hai...?? Pehle uss ka naam toh pata karoon... Chal SAM ab toh khud se hi khud ko introduce karna hoga... warna,toh yeh  log mujhe evening tak uss se milne nahin denge... aur Introduction...?? Inka bas chale toh 'Arrange Marriage' ka naam par hamara Official Introduction hamari 'First Night' ke baad karayenge... (smiled softly) ))
 
SAMRAT was about to enter in the Kitchen... suddenly,he thought... (( Oh ! Par Bhabhi ke rehte toh hum thik se baat bhi nahin kar paayenge... aur, Bhabhi toh hamein baat karne ka chance dene se rahi... Woh toh aaj puri tarah se hamare beech 'Haddi' ban ne ke mood mein hain... par,Koi baat nahin... Mera naam bhi SAMRAT hai... Kuchh na kuchh toh karna hi padega... 'To-be-wife' ke liye toh thoda 'SAMRATICIOUS' hua hi ja sakta hai... (smiled naughitly)  so,Dude ! pehle toh uss se Kitchen mein akela karta hoon...phir,hi uss se aaram se baatein ho paayengi... )) 
 
 He blushed very badly...he was still glaring to GUNJAN...who was busy in her Kitchen work... thinking some minutes... n he left from there and direct went to ROHAN's (Nephew) room.
 
 ROHAN was busy in complete Summer Vacations Home-Work... SAMRAT entered in the room with big smiling face... said in extra sweet tone... " Hi ! My 'Super Man' ...wassup Dude...?? Kya chal raha hai...??
 
ROHAN looked at him, angrily...and said in very anger tone " Chachu ! Aap toh mujhse baat bhi mat karo... I don't want to talk you... I am busy now,so please don't disturb me..."
 
S - (Softly) Arre Kya hua mere 'Super Man' ko...? Itna Gussa...?? phir,toh koi kaafi Big waali mistake ki hogi aapke Chachu ne... par,punishment dene se pehle apne sweet Chachu ki fault toh batao... warna,Mujhe kaise pata chalega ki,mera ROHAN mujh se kyun naraaz hai...?  (asked in very sweet tone)
 
R - Oh toh aap ko pata bhi nahin...??
 
S - (Came close...n sat beside to him)  Nahin...bilkul nahin... Tum jab tak bataoge nahin...mujhe kaise pata chalega...(said innocently)
 
R - Aap itne dinon baad aaye... mere B'Day par bhi nahin the...Mujhe laga aap jab aaoge...mere liye koi achha sa Gift laaoge...par,aap kya laaye... Woh thodi si chocklates aur Biscuits ke packet... !! I am not a tinny-minny kid ...main toh woh saare packets 'Dustbin' mein daalne waala hoon. (said in very cute anger tone)
 
S - ( Hold hie ear n said softly) Ok...Baba... Sorry ! Woh Big waala Sorry ! Yeh toh bahot badi mistake hai... but,I promise... aapke Chachu hi iss mistake ko sudharenge ..aur,aap ko 1 bahot hi achha aur bada sa gift denge...(said with smiling face...still hold his ears) Ab toh apne Chachu ko maaf kar do... 
 
R - (said excitedly) Sach...!! Aap mujhe bada sa gift denge...?? par,Kya...? Bataiye naa... (He was nagging)
 
SAMRAT was smiling softly... (( Too good Dude..!! Ab mera yeh Sweet 'Superman' hi mujhe uss se milane mein help karega... Aakhir 'Nephew' kiska hai...(proudly) Apne Chachu ki help yeh nahin karega toh aur kaun karega...? Ab toh main issi ki help se ...Haddi... I mean, Bhabhi ko kitchen se nikaloonga... agar Kitchen mein woh akeli nahin hui toh hum baat kaise karenge...? ))  He was still smiling... ROHAN saw this... and asked in curious tone...
 
R - Arre ! Aap chup kyun hain...? aur kya soch kar itna muskura rahe hain...? 1 sec. kahin aap mujhe 'Lallu' toh nahin bana rahe...? Chachu bachhon se mazaak karna achhi baat nahin hai... 
 
S - (smiled n hugged tightly) Nahin...main tumhen 'Lallu' nahin bana raha... Main toh sirf soch raha tha,kaun sa gift doon...? waise...'Play-Station' kaisa rahega...? Broke the hug.
 
R - WoW ! Chachu..Its Great...Too Good... (said in very exciting tone) I love you... (hugged him) Kahaan hai 'Play-Station' mujhe abhi dekhna hai...Please,Chachu...!!
 
S - Well abhi toh woh 'Shop-Keeper' ke paas hai... jo shaam mein tumhaare paas hoga... par,I am confused... (act to show serious)
 
R - Kyun...? Kya hua...? Confused kyun...? (asked curiously)
 
S - No...woh actually,main decide nahin kar paa raha ki,tumhen 'Play-Station-3' doon yaa... previous edition...? Kuchh samajh nahi aa raha... (act n said in serious tone)
 
R - What the problem Chachu...?  Obviously Play Station-3...woh zyada latest hai
 
S - Haan...par , woh 'Extra Smart' bachhon ke liye hai... You are smart but, 'Extra-Smart'...?? (looked at ROHAN, doubtfully) . Don't mind...but,I don't think tum abhi usse handle kar paaoge... Koi baat nahin PS-1 bhi thik hi hai... (said casually)
 
R - No way, Chachu ! Mujhe toh PS-3 hi chahiye... main handle kar loonga naa...
 
S - Ok...par, Main kaise maan loon ki,tum usse handle kar loge...? Tum abhi kaafi chhote ho ROHAN...
 
R - No...I am not little kid... aap mera test toh lo... Aap jo kaho main kar ke dikha sakta hoon... phir,toh aap beleive karoge naa ki,main 'Extra-Smart' hoon.
 
S - Ok...then...prove it...
 
R - Aap keh kar toh dekho... Main abhi karke dikha doonga... (said confidently)
 
S - Achha ! (Act to thinking) phir... Ok...Tumhen Bhabhi ko iss room mein next 1 hrs. tak rok kar rakhna hai... Abhi aur issi waqt se ...Kya yeh kar paaoge...?
 
R - Par...? Mummy toh kitchen mein hain... woh abhi kaise aayengi...? Aaj toh cook bhi nahin hai... phir,Lunch kaun banayega...?
 
S - Tumhen 'PS-3' chahiye yaa Lunch...? Maine kaha naa tumse nahin hoga... Tum abhi itne smart nahin ho... Tum PS-1 se hi manage kar lena... (act to little disappointed)
 
R - No...Chachu,mera woh matlab nahin tha... I'll ..aap bas 1 baar Mummy ko yahaan bhej do...phir,main unhen engage kar loonga...next 1 hrs. kya...2 hrs. tak room se nahin ja paayengi... (said confidently)
 
S - (Said Excitedly) What...? Are you sure...? Tum yeh kar paaoge...?
 
R - Off Course main kar loonga. Aap bas evening mein Market chalne ko ready rehna...
 
SAMRAT was extremely Happy. Kissed to ROHAN's cheeks ...n almost running to Kitchen side,
 
R - (( Yeh Chachu ko suddenly kya hua..? Oh God ! What is this... I hate kisses... (Irritatedly,cleaned his cheeks) Ab toh pura face hi wash karna hoga...yeh bade logon ki problem kya hai... jab dekho yaa toh kiss karenge yaa baloon ko apne haathon se kharaab kar denge... I hate this...Par,yeh itne Khush kyun hain...? Kya iss liye ki,mujhe unke Gift ka Idea pasand aaya...!! Oh my sweet Chachu... How cute... I love you))
 
ROHAN was happy with his kiddish thaught...he never thought about his sweet Chachu's 'Naughty' plan...
 
 
Kitchen :
 
SAMRAT entered in the Kitchen...with his cute smiling face... GUNJAN saw him... she was little scared and embarrassed... turned quickly to opposite side... SAMRAT was enjoying ...her face expression...her awkwardness (( Oh God ! She is too shy...Abhi itna sharma rahi hai toh...(blushed) Koi baat nahin,main hi Besharm ban jaoonga... Donon hi sharmayenge toh... (smiled) She is really sweet... waise,itni determination se toh koi apne ghar ka bhi kaam nahin karta... No ,actually,Yeh bhi toh ab ussi ka ghar hai... Ab hum sab uske apne hi toh hain...(smiled softly) ))
 
Meanwhile GUNJAN... (( Oh ! Yeh yahaan kya kar rahe hain...? Kahin Bhabhi ko sab kuchh bata diya toh... ? Oh God ! Kya sochengi woh mere baare mein...? Par,wahaan meri kya galti thi...? Unki Towel maine thode hi naa...))  turned slowly n looked at SAMRAT...He was still staring to her...but,before she remove her eyes on his face...He winked n smiled naughtily... GUNJAN mouth was opened...she turned quickly... (( OMG !! Woh toh mujhe hi dekh rahe hain... aur... aur... Unhone smile karte hue mujhe aankh maari... How dare he...? He is so cheap... No,actually Cheapest... lagta hi nahin ki, BRIJ bhaiya ke bhai hain... A really shameless person. Koi sharm hi nahin... Koi aur hota toh... kuchh dinon tak saamne nahin aata... Aur,kitni besharmi se smile kar rahe hain... such a worst personality.))
 
Just then, ISHITA saw to SAMRAT... He was still smiling n seeing to GUNJAN... ISHITA was feeling little strange...she broke the silence in the kitchen... said in very curious tone...  "Arre ! SAM tum yahaan...? Tum kab aaye...? Maine toh tumhen dekha hi nahin... Kuchh kaam tha kya...? Yaa...phir kuchh poochna toh nahin... (smiled)
 
S - (said immediately) Oh ! No...aisa kuchh nahin... wo... woh... ROHAN aapko bula raha hai...
 
I - What... ? ROHAN...? Abhi...? (strangely) par,kyun...?
 
S - Mujhe nahin pata... Woh main toh bas uske room ke paas se guzar raha tha,toh usne kaha ki Mummy ko bhej do... toh maine aapko keh diya... Aap khud chal kar ,uss se kyun nahin pooch leti...?
 
I - Arre ! Tum nahin jaante uss Badmaash ko... Kuchh gum kar diya hoga... aur kuchh nahin... Baad mein dekh loongi... (said in normal tone)
 
S - Nahin... Nahin Bhabhi..! Aapko abhi usse dekhna chahiye... Child Psychology kehti hai ki...
 
I - Wait...wait...Tum kab se Child Psychology ke student ban gaye...? aur waise bhi abhi kaafi kaam bacha hua hai main abhi kahin nahin ja sakti...
 
S - ((Yeh Bhabhi bhi naa... Aaj toh haath dho kar mere peeche padi hain... Mujhe pareshaan karne ka koi chance lose nahin kar rahin... Inhen achhe se pata hai main yahaan kyun hoon...? par,acting toh aisi kar rahi hain,jaise kuchh pata hi nahin... Ab kaise baat karoon...? No ...SAM.. don't lose hope...Try again...))  Par Bhabhi...! Aap bas 1 baar usse dekh toh lo... shayad usse iss waqt aapki bahot zaroorat ho... 1 bachhe ko uski Maa hi toh samajh sakti hai...aapne "Taare Zameen Par" nahin dekhi kya...? (act emotionally)
 
I - Oh ! Tum bhi naa... Main achhe se jaanti hoon usse..aisa kuchh nahin... aur dekh nahin rahe abhi kitna kaam bacha hua hai...
 
GUNJAN was also worried for ROHAN...said quickly, "Koi baat nahin Bhabhi... Main hoon naa ...Main yeh sab kar loongi...Aap please jaaiye...shayad ROHAN ko sach mein aapki zaroorat ho..."
 
SAMRAT smiled softly...after hearing GUNJAN's line... (( Oh ! GR8 !! Its means , She is also wants to talk with me... Good !!  Obviously Dude...! Ladkiyaan toh waise bhi mujh se baat karne ke bahane dhoondhti rehti hain...aur jab hamare Rishte ki hi baat chal rahi hai toh uss ke paas mujh se baat karne ka solid reason bhi hai... Not bad... bas,tumhen toh kehna chaiye...'Hum Hain Naa'...koi baat nahin main keh deta hoon ))
 
SAMRAT looked at ISHITA and said in very exiciting tone... Off Course Bhabhi... aap jaaiye... Yeh sahi keh rahi hain... 'Hum hain naa'... Don't worry Hum sab sambhal lenge... He looked at GUNJAN side but,said to ISHITA. GUNJAN was shocked after seeing his smiling face...
 
ISHITA told to SAMRAT...  "Oh ! Main bhi naa... Maine toh tum donon ko ek dusre se introduce hi nahin karaya...  SAMRAT yeh hai..."
 
S - (Cuts) Main jaanta hoon... Aap abhi jaaiye...aapko der ho rahi hai... Baaki ki introduction hum khud se puri kar lenge... Don't worry...
 
GUNJAN was about to say some thing to ISHITA... "Par Bhabhi..."
 
S - (Cuts) Oh Come on...! Unhen der ho rahi hai... Tumhen jo kehna hai...Mujh se kah sakti ho...Main hoon Naa (smiled) and don't worry ! Main karoonga naa...tumhaari Cooking mein help... Tum bas mujhe instruction deti jaana...main thik waisa hi karoonga... (winked)
 
GUNJAN was totally shocked to seeing his behavior... Just then,ISHITA said, "Achha Baba ,agar tum donon itna keh rahe ho toh main jaati hoon...aur abhi dekh kar aati hoon ki, Uss Shaitaan ko mujh se kya kaam hai...? looked at GUNJAN... "Micro-wave ka time set kar diya hai... Ho jaaye toh 'Pudding' bana sakti ho...
 
G - Ji Bhabhi...main kar loongi... Aap jaaiye...
 
ISHITA smiled softly n left from there... SAMRAT was extremely happy...Now,Kitchen is empty...no body was there...Except, Only he n his 'to-be-wife'...
 
 
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SAMRAT went to near GUNJAN... GUNJAN was trying to avoid his presence n showing busy herself in cooking works...SAMRAT was feeling little strange... (( What is this...? Yeh mujhe ignore kyun kar rahi hai...? Kya isse mujh se koi baat nahin karni...? Kahin yeh woh room waale incident ki wajah se toh ab tak embarrass feel nahin kar rahi (smiled) Come On ! Aisa bhi kuchh nahin hua tha... I think,yeh kuchh zyada hi shy nature ki hai... Dude..! Mujhe hi First step lena hoga...warna...hum aise hi reh jaayenge...))
 
SAMRAT smiled softly... n said in loving tone...
 
S - Hi... !
 
G - Hi...  (said with fake smile)
 
S - I think , Ab hamein Formal introduction kar leni chahiye...
 
G - Mujhe pata hai... Mujhe Bhabhi ne sab bata diya hai...aapka naam SAMRAT hai aur... aap...
 
S - (cuts) WoW ! GR8...I am impressed... (said excitedly)  but,mujhe tumhaare baare mein toh kuchh pata hi nahin...in fact, Name bhi nahin... What is your name...? (asked more sweetly... n came little more close to her...) Just then, sound of Micro-Wave's Timer Buzzer , out...
 
G - (step forward) 1 sec. shayad , Chicken ready ho gaya hai... n went to Micro-Wave side
 
S - (( Iss whistle ko bhi abhi bajna tha... Lagta hai hamari Story mein kaafi saare 'Haddi' aur 'Chicken ki taang' hain... (irritating completly) ... Par,Koi baat nahin... Hum kaam karte hue bhi toh baatein kar sakte hain...))  went to near GUNJAN...n said sweetly , "Waise,I want to say thanks to you..."
 
G - (strangely)Kyun...? (( Ab Maine aisa bhi kya kar diya...? Uff kitne 'Chipku' type hain... Jahaan bhi jaa rahi hoon... peeche-peeche hi aa ja rahe hain...! ))
 
S - (smiled) Woh,tumne room waali baat bahar kisi ko nahin batai...iss liye... aur, specially Bhabhi ko warna,woh hum donon ko hamesha tease karti rehti... (blushed)
 
GUNJAN said nothing..only gave a fake smile (( What is his problem...? Kya main paagal hoon jo woh baat Bhabhi ko bataoongi...? Kya yeh mujhe duffer samajh rahe hain... Yaa khud ko over smart...?? ))
 
S - Arre ! Tum chup kyun ho...? Tumhen kuchh bhi nahin poochna...?? Ok... Its your choice but,main koi chance nahin le sakta... Mujhe toh pehle hi sab kuchh clear karna hai... baad mein problem nahin honi chahiye... (said in little attitude tone)
 
G - (( I am sure... Inhen kuchh na kuchh mental problem hai... warna, aisi ajab baatein kyun kar rahe hain...? Main kyun kuchh poochoongi... ? Aur baad mein problem...?? Kaisi Problem...?? wait... kahin yeh Cooking or 'Chicken-Pop' ke baare mein toh baat nahin kar rahe...? Definitely, Ussi ke baare mein keh rahe honge...Inhen kya lagta hai,Mujhe cooking nahin aati...?))  smiled n said in little confident tone... "Don't worry ! Baad mein bhi koi problem nahin hogi... Main hoon naa... Main sambhal loongi... Mujhe sab pata hai... Aapko disappointment nahin hogi..."
 
SAMRAT smiled so badly after hearing this... (( Oh God ! I can't beleive it... Yeh,toh abhi se mujhe assure kar rahi hai... Don't worry ! Problem toh main bhi nahin hone doonga... Main itna fool nahin jo,hamare beech kisi tarah ki Problem ko aane ka chance doon... Itni sweet voice aur smile ke baad toh koi Duffer hi tumhen upset karne ki soch sakta hai... Main toh sirf 1 hi cheez soch sakta hoon... [smiled naughtily] ))
 
G - Bhabhi ko zyada der nahin ho gayi...?? wait, main abhi unhen dekh kar aati hoon...Shayad,unhen meri zaroorat ho... 

 GUNJAN was about to move from her place... just then, SAMRAT hold her hand softly... He felt a silky n soft skin touch in his hand... GUNJAN was shocked to seeing his this activity... He just realized...what did he...? remove his hand quickly... Both was feeling little awkward... SAMRAT wanted to broke this awkwardness... came little-bit close to her... n said in very soft tone...
" Yahaan tumhaari zyada zaroorat hai... Woh main... Main kehna chahta tha ki,Bhabhi aa jaayengi... Don't worry... par,tum chali gayi toh... toh main akele yeh Kitchen ka kaam handle nahin kar paaoonga... (He was covering ) 
 
GUNJAN said nothing...nodded in positive...but,she was feeling a very strange feeling this time... SAMRAT smiled again... He liked her face expression of her mixed feelings... came close again to GUNJAN n asked  very sweetly... " Waise , ab tak tumne apna naam mujhe nahin bataya...? Kya main tumhaara naam jaan sakta hoon..." smiled n waiting for her answer...
 
GUNJAN was about to say something... Just then a harsh,sweet kiddish voice came from door side...
 
" GUNJAN... Miss GUNJAN BHUSHAN...!! Kya kuchh aur bhi poochna hai aapko...?? "
 
SAMRAT n GUNJAN turned to door side... n saw... TINKU was there... TINKU also saw SAMRAT... n recognized him quickly... (( OMG !!  GABBAR ...aur woh bhi yahaan...?? iss ka matlab...oh God...! Kahin isse pata toh nahin chal gaya ki,humne hi... ?? Oh toh hi, yeh Di ko pareshaan kar raha hai... Don't worry Di...! Ab main aa gaya hoon...Aap bas dekhti jaao... Ab yeh khud kitna pareshaan hoga... iski himmat kaise hui meri Di ko pareshaan karne ki...? Isse toh sabak seekhana hi hoga...waise bhi mujhe isse hisaab barabar karna hai...issi ki Car ki wajah se meri 'Di' ke leg mein injury hui thi...))
 
SAMRAT was stood on his place... n looking to TINKU with a very strange look... GUNJAN said to TINKU... in general tone... "Arre ! Tum kab aaye...? Main tumhaara hi wait kar rahi thi... Achha kiya jo yahaan aaye...main abhi...
 
T - Di...woh aap chalo yahaan se... Mom ko kuchh kaam hai aapse ...Woh apko bula rahi hain... (Looked at SAMRAT side,rudely)
 
SAMRAT was little shocked... (( Di ?? Oh,means yeh mera hone wala 'Saala' hai...? How sweet...par,Yeh kab aaya...maine isse toh ab tak nahin dekha tha... Oh, koi baat nahin... pehle inse hi 'Dosti' kar leni chahiye ... aage jaakar kaafi help milegi...woh kehte hain naa... "Saari Khudaai ek taraf...Joru ka Bhai ek taraf" (smiled) He is sweet...Friendship mein zyada problem nahin hogi... SAMRAT ka charm hi aisa hai... I love kids...par,yeh mujhe kuchh jaana-pehchana sa face lag raha hai...jaise...jaise isse maine pehle bhi kahin dekha hai...par kahaan...??  )) 
 
SAMRAT went to near TINKU...said in sweet tone... " Hi Little CHAMP...!! My name is SAMRAT (forward his hand for shake hand) aur aap ka naam...??
 
T - (( CHAMP...!! Dekhta ja Bachhu... Yeh CHAMP tumhaari kaisi 'Champi'  karta hai... SAMRAT ho yaa VIRAAT... TINKU se koi bach nahin sakta... Tumne Meri Di ko pareshaan karne ki koshish ki hai... Punishment toh banta hai Boss.))  He forward his hand gently...n made a shakehand with fake smiling face.
 
S - Arre ! Kya hua...? Kya soch rahe ho... Apna naam nahin bataya aapne...?
 
T - (little harsh tone) TARUN... TARUN BHUSHAN... I hope,Aapko yeh name yaad rahega (said in full of attitude) Waise bhi mujhe koi jaldi bhool nahin paata...
 
GUNJAN glared to him... she was understanding,what is the meaning of TINKU's line... But, SAMRAT (( WoW ! Impressive... Dude Yeh hui naa koi baat... Itni impressive personality toh sirf SAMRAT ke 'saale' ki hi ho sakti hai...I loved it.))
 
G -(said quickly)Arre ! Tum ...tum abhi jaao... Mom se kehna main abhi aati hoon...
 
S - Haan... Tumhaari 'Di' abhi kaam kar rahi hain naa... kaam khatam hote hi aa jaayengi...par kahaan...? I mean kya tum paas mein hi rehte ho...?
 
T - Look... Mr. SAMRAT...first meri 'Di' koi kaam waali 'Bai' nahin hai... woh yahaan kaam nahin kar rahi sirf, Aunty ki Help kar rahi hain... so,mind your language...
 
SAMRAT was totally shocked... what a answer...?? ((Yeh kis tone mein baatein kar raha hai...?? Kya isse pata bhi hai ki,main kaun hoon...?? I mean, Kya yeh jaanta hai ki Main iski 'Di' se shaadi karne  waala hoon...??...Iska hone waala 'JIJU' hoon...?? I don't think so,... Warna,yeh aise thode hi naa baat karta,... waise,I understand...Bachhon ko yeh sab batana thoda difficult hota hai...))
 
GUNJAN said to TINKU in little-bit strict tone "TINKU...!! Yeh kya badtamizi hai... Kya tumhen nahin lagta,tumhen sorry kehna chahiye...?? Woh tum se bade hain..."
 
SAMRAT was extremely happy after seeing GUNJAN's sudden reaction... (( How sweet ! I loved it... Tum abhi se hi mere against kuchh bad nahin sun sakti... so,cute... Koi baat nahin... abhi chhota sa bachha hi toh hai..usse hamare rishte ke baare mein nahin pata...so, aise react kar raha hai... Agar tum usse mere liye daant sakti ho toh main bhi usse tumhaare liye pyaar kar sakta hoon...))
 
T - Ok...Sorry Di... ! Par,Aap chalo naa yahaan se... Maine kaha naa,Mom aapko bula rahi hain...
 
G - Main aati hoon... par, Sorry tumhen mujhse nahin unse kehna chahiye jinse tumne abhi badtamizi se baat ki hai.   SAMRAT was still smiling...
 
TINKU saw his smile...n thought in his Devil mind (( Kaafi laugh karne ka dil kar raha hai GABBAR SINGH ko... Mujhe Di se daant sunwa kar kitna khush ho raha hai... MOGAMBO kahin ka... Abhi iski happiness ki hawa nikalta hoon...Wait n Watch Bachhu ! Abhi tumne mujhe jaana hi kahaan hai...))
 
TINKU came close to GUNJAN... n slowly asked in her ears... "Di ! Yeh kaun hain...? I mean, Yeh ROHAN ke kya lagte hain...?? "   SAMRAT saw this... He was trying to hear their convo... but, their conversation volume was very low...  GUNJAN said in very low tone... 'Uncle !' 
 
 TINKU smiled evily...went to near SAMRAT... n said in litle dramatic way... " Sorry 'Uncle' ! Mujhe aapse iss tarah baat nahin karni chahiye thi... Extremely Sorry !"
 
S - (smiled n bent, gently) Oh ! Its Ok... Maine toh...
 
T - ( Cuts n turned to GUNJAN side) Di...You are right... 'Uncle' really sweet hain... Dekha kitni easily maan gaye... Well , tumhen hamesha 'Bade Papa' ki yaad aati thi naa... in fact, hum discuss karte the naa ki,Yahaan hamara koi Uncle nahin... now,No problem...ab tum bhi inhen 'Uncle' keh sakti ho... Yeh itne sweet hain ki, bura nahin maanenge... turned to SAMRAT side... n said innocently, "Kya hum donon aap ko Uncle keh sakte hain...? I don't think ki,aap bura maanenge..."
 
SAMRAT was totaly speechless...no, Actually Shocked... he couldn't expect this attack from TINKU side... GUNJAN...!! woh bhi... Uncle...?? No...never... He composed himself...n said to TINKU...in his sweet tone (Obviously Fake... Aap sab aur kya expect kar sakte ho...?)   " Bura maan ne ka toh sawaal hi nahin hai...par, Aapki Di mujhe Uncle kahe...kya yeh thik lagega...I mean...kya main Itna bada...
 
T - ( again cuts) Yaa...You are absolutely right...Main bhi yehi soch raha tha... Yeh 'Uncle' tag aap par suit nahin karta... 'Di' par toh aur bhi nahin...
 
S - Oh, so sweet... (smiled) ((Not Bad... yeh itna bhi naughty nahin bas thoda sa...I mean little...bas zara sa shararti...)) TINKU  next  line broke his thought ,completly...
 
T - 'Di'... Kya aapko nahin lagta... Inn par 'Bhaiyaa' kuchh zyada suit karega... Waise bhi toh aap 'BRIJ Uncle' ko 'Bhaiyaa' kehti ho... toh,Unke Bhai bhi toh aapke 'Bhaiyaa' hue naa... aur phir Yeh itne bade toh hain hi ki,inhen 'Bhaiyaa' kaha ja sake... Think,agar Itna handsome aur Good looking Banda hamara 'Bhai' ban jaaye toh sab par kitna achha impression padega... said in very exiciting n pinching tone.
 
SAMRAT was totally shattered... This was Un-expected 'GOOGLY' from TINKU side... He was about to say something...just then...
 
T - Arre ! Aap kuchh bol  kyun nahin rahe...I know,Aap emotional ho rahe hain... (Teased) Siblings bonding hoti hi aisi hai... but,promise to me...aap next 'Raksha-Bandhan' par Yahaan zaroor aayenge... Aap nahin aaye toh Di hum donon ko Rakhi kaise baandhegi...?? Par,agar aap naa aa sake toh koi baat nahin...Apna address de dena...  Di aapko aapki 'Raakhi' post kar degi...Phir,toh aap ko koi Problem nahin hai naa...' SAMRAT Bhaiyaa..." ??
 
SAMRAT lost his temper... (( This is enough... How dare he to called me 'Bhaiyaa'...?? 'Uncle' , 'Bhaiyaa' keh sakta hai... , Saala 'JIJU' nahin keh sakta...?? Isse toh main dekh loonga... He is really dangerous kid... agar isse chup nahin karaya toh,Yeh toh hamara Rishta hi badal dega... Mujhe laga tha ,Yeh meri Help karega...par,yeh 'saala' toh mujhe helpless karne mein laga hua hai... Abhi class leta hoon isski...)) 
 
SAMRAT came close to TINKU n said angrily"Hey Don't call me 'Bhaiyaa-Waiyaa'...Ok...!! Main kisi ka 'Bhaiyaa-Waiyaa nahin hoon... looked at GUNJAN side...she was smiling...said to her angrily "Aur tumhaara toh bilkul bhi nahin... toh khabardaar jo kabhi mujhe 'Raakhi-Waakhi' dene ka socha bhi toh... " turned to TINKU side again n said angrily
"aur,Tum...tum mujhe sirf SAM kahoge... No 'Uncle' No 'Bhaiyaa'...  n tuned... He was about to go... just then... TINKU said...  " Ok... SAM ... nice name... sounds good... " (in teasing tone)
 
S - Yaa...Its better for you...
 
G - Arre ! Please,aap iski baatoon ka bura mat maaniye yeh toh...
 
T - (cuts) Don't worry Di... 'Member of MBA' itni chhoti si baat ka bura nahin maanenge... am I right MB...??
 
S - (turned n asked angrily) MB...?? Member of MBA...?? what is the meaning of these word...??
 
T - Oh...! Woh aap nahin samjhoge...Bachhon ki baatein hain...Bade logon ki samajh mein nahin aayengi... waise,shayad aap jaa rahe the... Have a nice day...Bye...!!
 
SAMRAT said nothing n left from the kitchen...with very anger way... GUNJAN glared to TINKU n said in unhappy tone...  "TINKU ! what is this...? Tumne aisa kyun kiya... ? Unhen kitna bura laga ...
 
T - (said normally) Don't worry Di ! Maine jo kiya thik kiya...woh yeh deserve karta tha... Dekha nahin, usne 'Bhaiyaa' kehne par kitna over react kiya... Its means,uske mind mein kuchh aur hi chal raha tha...
 
S - Well,aisa bhi toh ho sakta hai...woh kisi stranger se kisi tarah ka 'Rishta' nahin rakhna chahte hon... waise bhi hum unhen jaante kahaan hain...
 
T - Aur,Jaanne ki zaroorat bhi nahin... do you know Di... came more close to GUNJAN... n said in very low tone... "Di,Yeh wohi GABBAR hai jiski subah humne Head Light todi thi...' (said innocently)
 
G - KYA...?? Oh... means woh Gaadi BRIJ Bhaiyaa ki thi...??  Oh God ! Yeh maine thik nahin kiya... Kya sochenge woh jab unhen pata chalega...
 
T - Don't worry Di... Uss accident ka sirf 1 eye-witness tha...Yeh GABBAR... aur,yeh ab tak humein recognize nahin kar paaya...Its means isse mera face yaad nahin... aur,waise bhi maine isse itna irritate kar diya hai ki,Yeh dobara mera face dekhna hi nahin chahega... Ab yeh jab bhi mujhe dekhega...isse sirf abhi waali coversation hi yaad rahegi... Accident toh yaad bhi nahin rahega... Maine uska mind fully divert kar diya hai... (said proudly)
 
G - Phir bhi TINKU... mujhse galti toh hui hai...
 
T - Nahin Di ,Aapse kabhi koi galti nahin ho sakti... aur agar humse galti hui hai,toh woh bhi uss galti ke zimmedar hain... woh Car ko Road ke side mein bhi toh park kar sakte the naa... Anyway,ab jaldi chalo...warna woh GABBAR dobara aakar hamein pareshaan karega...
 
G - Ok...Main bas yeh 'Pudding' bana loon ,phir chalte hain... waise Mom ne kyun bulaya hai...
 
T - Mom ne nahin bulaya tha... woh toh main aapko uss GABBAR se bachane ke liye jhooth bol raha tha... (said innocently) ok, aap Yeh 'Pudding' bana lo...jab tak main yahin wait karta hoon...
 
GUNJAN smiled softly... came close to TINKU n hugged him lovingly... n kissed to his forhead... She knew... He is the sweetest little kid...sorry,little Bro of the world.
                                      
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Hi Guys !!
             First I want to say,Thank You so much for your all sweet n encouraging Comment for Last Update.EmbarrassedFinally,Part-4 is completed.I don't want to take Your so much time for my Updates... so,this time I edited next 2 parts[C n D]. I'll post it very soon...Embarrassed I tried my Best EmbarrassedGuys,Sorry for any disappointment.Embarrassed please, bear my silly mistakes. Thanks guys for your wonderful support.

In Next Update :~ [17th Jun.11]
* End of Misunderstanding. 
* ARNAV's entry
 

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Till then...Bye...!! n Yes,Don't forget to Enjoy this Lovely Song...Embarrassed Day Dreaming



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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:22pm | IP Logged
Res =)) I will read and edit...Wink

*Edited*

Okay, so it is me first this time!Party
Sorry Ekta!ROFL

Joseph Bhai, what can I say!Confused 

But still a big hug for this big update!Hug

Such mind-blowing, sumptuous parts you post that the English Dictionary may be short of words but your appreciations won't stop! Wow! Flawlessly written!Clap 

I loved the bonding you showed between Rohan and Samrat.LOL I also loved the way Sam tried to get his work done through Rohan!!LOL "You need to be extra-smart to get PS3"

Samrat still thinks Gunjan is the girl for him, wish that could happen soon!Embarrassed So, obviously his attempts to be with Gunjan alone in the kitchen were tooo good!Clap 

Where do you get such ideas from?Confused My mind stops whenever I write updates and you are like fabulous!..Embarrassed

The Tinku part was so cute, he is such a doll! [Okay he is a boy but anyways!]LOL
I loved his possessiveness for his elder sister. And the Rakhi tying partROFL! I am still ROFLing on that!ROFL

Samrat aka Gabar's anger is on his nose. He scolded Tinku so loudly for calling him "Uncle" and "Bhaiya"

I liked the way you showed Gunjan's POVClap. She thinks he is so shameless. Well, he was trying to be though!LOL

I am so damn addicted to your FF! Please do continue soon, I wait for it to be updated!!!

Kay, now coming back to this particular update!Embarrassed

Well, the presentation style is awesome. You are my IDOL on I-F! What updates you make...
I am so in love with each and every update of yours.

Well, this part was mostly based on Sam's POV! Aww... He is such a sweetheart!
The part where Gunjan said she will take care of the things and SM should rest. Was so GunjanIsh. And Sam was eavesdropping. 

And when Gunjan was worried about Rohan and asked Ishita to go and see for him, Sam thought it was for him.ROFL

God! He will be shocked when he gets to know the truth!LOL

I can still imagine him shamelessly flirting with Gunjan. Just like the serial...

You may have changed the characters, but you have wonderfully kept the SaJan essence intact. You surely know how to play with words and frame Not-So Filmy yet attracting sentences. You seriously are my idol on I-F.

Thank you so much for the Pm! Please Continue Soon..
I tried my best to make a looonnnggg Comment, sorry if I could not!

By the way, I need your help!
Please help me out with my update tooo.. I am totally confused!!

Love,
Nivriti


Edited by SajanRox - 12 June 2011 at 9:53pm

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Too Good, Joseph... absolutely amazing.  Clap  Clap Tinku is so adorable.  He cares so much for his sis. The relation of bro-sis is indeed very special. And you have written so well about this special bond.Clap  Clap. Samrat will never change... and good enough, we love Samrat just the way he is.Wink. The chahcha- bhatija part was lovely too. But whatever little of SaJan part you gave us in this update was absolutely superb... the best. Gunji's thoughts and her reaction... I am short of words to appreciate. Do update soon.Smile

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