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..Ambika.. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
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*edited*LOL
srry fr my late reply..
amazing updt joseph...it was so gud
i m seriously in love with this gunjan...
u write soo well...
dailogues were perfect..
and u described the scenes soo well..
u r really inspiring for beginners like me...
and one of my favourite writers on i-f...amazing wrk.,...
excellent..
keep it up
cont. soon
love
ambika


Edited by ambikamuskaan - 03 June 2011 at 9:48am

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Awesome Update loved it cnt wait till sajan meet continue soon
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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
amazing update! 
it wasn't boring it was really nice! 
well i love the sister brother bond between gunjan and tinku! 
such loving siblings! its so nyc to see how they care for each other! 
i loved the sam brij convo too!
and both the mothers giving love to their children it was good! 
well now its a suspense for all of us too! ki who is the girl for samrat! 
and after that how will sajan meet ? 
if they meet kya hoga ? will they get married? will they fall in love ? all these questions are coming to my mind! 
aage aage dekhte hai kya hota hai!! 
well there are few lines which i really liked from this update 
like well tinku was the show stealler in terms of dialouges! 


T - Mom...'Di' koi Train yaa 'Flight' thode hi hai... jo uske aane se pehle Announcement hogi... Aapne unhen nahin dekha hoga simple...

T - Sorry Di ... Ok..Tum kahti ho toh chood deta hoon...par, Tumhen Uska face dekhna chahiye tha... Pura 'Gabbar Singh' lag raha tha woh... (and laughed...GUNJAN smiled too) but,Di...be carefull...Mom ko kuchh doubt ho gaya hai...maine situation sambhalne ki koshish toh ki...par,kya karoon...? meri reputation hi itni khraab hai ki, koi mujh par Yakeen hi nahin karta... (said innocently n made a puppy face)

T - Ok...Mom... Main jaata hoon... suddenly,came close to GUNJAN's ear n whispered... "All the BEST Di... lecture time start ,now..." smiled n left the room.


Well now i am waiting for the next update which is on 3rd will be waiting! zyada time maat lagana please! and keep rocking! 
waiting too see how you put up the sajan chemistry! :) 

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 358674

wow
its really nice
awesome 


Thanks Buddy ! for your sweet Reply.Embarrassed
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kritianya

Realy nice part
thoda emotional,dramebaaz,swt,touchy tha
next part jaldi update karna


Thanks Kriti for your precious Comment. Embarrassed Thanks for liking all emotions of this part... I'll post next part on 3 Jun.11Embarrassed
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by saduf

awesome update...fablous...its was not at all boring...
 
Sadaf


Thanks Saduf,for your precious feed-back.Embarrassed. Actually,I was not satisfied with Final post part...Confused so,I thougt...Its boring...But,Thanks a lot for your all nice words.EmbarrassedIts very encouraging Smile
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:51am | IP Logged
amazinggg,superb
fantastic part. ...
too gud
plz cnt soon
luv u
vritika

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preety88

Fantastic update...cont soon


Thanks Preety for your sweet Reply.

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