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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 11:57pm | IP Logged

Hey Joseph and S3….Smile

Plzzz don't throw Chappal on me okk..again for being Extremely Late……I have alots of pm to read...plzzz bear with me..Ouch

Okk come to the update it was Out Standing and Fabulouse piece of work once again...ClapClapClap

Starting with Bhushans home…...Each n Every scene was finely written….Guys konsi update me ja k koi hint mile gaaa..plzzz reveal soon na..whats the matter is….i thought may b there is a problem related to Arnav Gunjar marriage...but when Amit and nisha were talking abt Arnav and gunjan-Arnav marriage….i was sooo confusedd…Confused...tooo much confused…ConfusedConfused ye b nai to masla kya he phir…im loosing by control day by day..infact update by update now...plzzz guys now start to remove  these confusions…..Embarrassed

One Question plzzz...what medicines Amit Nisha and Gunjan were talking abt..is that only general , normal medicines..or any seriouse kind of , Gunjan Amit scene was so cute..purely daughter father love..Embarrassed...in this update I missed tinku alottt…not a single scene he had...Shocked

Then Shergill mension scene...OH god..SD is so rude..hez too much...firstly for Samrat...and then for our so sweet Gunjan...Guys why he was behaving like this with Gunjan..Kahin Samrat-Gunjan k barey me doubt to nai ho gya kyaWink…but how..i don't think so...then why he behaved so rudely and weirdly with Gunjan..even SM and Brij didn't like this..I love the line when Finally SM spoke abt her views for Gunjan as a Samrat's wife…..ohhh so sweet…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed she really want this we know..but infront of her hitler husband..its require to much courage na..but thanksfully she uttered those words….and definitely SDs reaction was totally expected on this statement….when she compared Yamini with Gunjan…..everyone likes Gunjan for Samrat except his dad..so I was thinking why do all family members cant convince a single person…I know he has stubborn nature but its possible na if all would force him for Gunjan..most of all Samrat don't like Yamini but love Gunjan..and luckily his mom bhai bhabhi all are with him…...so why cant they convince him...WinkEmbarrassed.breakfast scene at shergil's house were very nicely written...ClapThumbs Up

SM is so sweet..she is so kind n loving women...love the way she treat Gunjan as a family member...Heart

Ishita and Gunjan scene was too Gud...mind blowing scene it was..i was imagining them as Devrani-Jethani..Big smile..surely they will b the best devrani jethani if Sajan marriage would b possible..they way Gunjan was teasing her their convo and Gunjan took care of her was beautifully written…...Specially tum hi ajao Rohan se khelne..LOL.and then that God lene wali baat..LOLLOL...so cute scene it was..but in this whole scene I truly loved one touchy and thought provoking line..when Gunjan unnowingly said something seriouse abt life's strategy ...something like " zindagi me sb kch badal jata he..or ...hamare hath me kch nai rehta...hamen yakken hi nai ata k itna sb kch itni jaldi kese badal skta he."  Ouch ...Aisa hi kch tha..theek se yaad nai…but it was the Best line...after this Ishita's realisation abt Samrat-gunjan relationship..that was so sweet..shez very intelligent how fast she understood everything...thank God..now she would help Samrat surely...Embarrassed

Arnav scene was again fantastic but with full of questions and curiosity in mind….Guys plzz open soon this mystery..

Now come my most fav scene...HeartHeartHeartHeart.the pictures which u used in all this scene..(in Grey frock)...somewhere I was expecting this scene...as like original mjht ones...

Shez trying veryyy hard to wake him up..but hez Samrat afterall...Big smile i loved Rohans dialogues in this matter...i thought u may b write totally like the show...but the way u adopt different things on the same pictures of original one ,but u totally changed the scenes..n situation with ur own creation..it was Out standing work...that I appreciated and admired a lot...really Wonderful...this new style was Perfectly set on those pictures...Thumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs UpThumbs Up

Enjoyed each n every bit of this scene since starting to end...starting from outside the room and then come closet n closer to his bed...and finally on his bed…icing on the cake was that " Short" scene...from Rohan statement to till the end...Superb scene guys...Awesome work...ClapStarClapStarClapStarClapStarClap

Samrat got one more chance to tease her..this time he used Short as his weapon….and Gunjan shez incredible…how anyone can b so innocent yaar…kitna easy he usy fool bna lena...exactly said by Samrat...Conditions were mind blowing...and she unwillingly agreed without arguing and annoying on him..so sweet of her.Embarrassed

Without even knowing that..her this sweet feature can drive Samrat crazy for her even moreEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Samrat naughty thinking after her leaving were soo cute...too much beautiful when he was imagining gunjan as Mrs samrat shergill n all...Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Fabulouse work...Wonderful update...keep it upClapClap

Thanks for the pm

Update soon the next part

 

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 6:21am | IP Logged
wow
awesome ff
loved it
will read other parts soon
thnx for the pm

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 7:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fend

awesome update loved it Clap
loved sajan scenes it was soo cuteDay Dreaming
loved the teasing part the way  samrat teased herEmbarrassed
n hez calling her chashmish thats was so sweatEmbarrassed
loved ishita n gunjan scenes it was very niceSmile
samrat dad is being very rude with gunjan feeling bad for herOuch
samrat was being so naughty with his future planningsBlushing
gr888 gng guys keep it upThumbs Up beautifully writtenClap
Clapdo cont soon
thanks for the pm


Thanks Buddy for your all sweet reply...Embarrassed We are really glad that,you liked SaJan part... Samrat is very naughty... He can't left any chance to tease her.Embarrassed Ishita is very friendly with Gunjan...they both are just like Best buddies.Smile Yes, Samrat's Dad behavior is not good  with Gunjan... due to his inner insecurity. Thanks a lot for appreciate our group effort.Embarrassed We'll be try to post next part after MBYPH..

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Posted: 28 November 2011 at 2:32pm | IP Logged
Hi My dearest friends Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati ...Hug...

1stly SORRY Sorrry for so so late comment...I know you all updated on 17th nov and My comment is coming so so late ...Embarrassed...Once again I am really SORRY guys...Embarrassed...

The update was just too too out-standing, fantabulous, Mind -Blowing,rocking, awesome, amazing and SUPERB...Gr8 work Joseph, Soham, Sonia, Swati...ClapClapClapClapClap...Your FF's are getting interesting and excellent with every update..each new update is more rocking and more superb then the last one...I am enjoying reading the updates of FF very very much...in this update also I loved reading and Visualizing each n every scene...fantastic work ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap..

the starting was very good...U very well described the emotions of GM n GD...each was very sad about what had happened in their past and what they and their children had will go thru in future...each was in deep pain and both were trying 2 hide their pain from the other and both were trying 2 comfort the other and be strong 4 one another and their children.
Whats wrong ? whats happened? I feel something very bad happened that has reduced GM n GD 2 tears.....from their conversation I came 2 1 conclusion that whatever happened in their past concerns their children...as when something is wrong with the children and something is about 2 happen 2 them and thinking of their pain and what they will have 2 go thru and face in future...after thinking all this and only their childs pain can make PARENTS cry so much...The way u showed amit(GD and Nisha(GM) pain it was shown in so excellent way that their pain bought tears 2 my eyesCry...u very well showed their deep pain and feelings....AM I right that what tragedy happened concerns Gunjan and Tinku...??Let's see whether I am right or notConfusedConfusedConfused...Gunjan and her father amit scenes were very sweet...I loved them and their father-daughter conversation...Parents love their children very much and 4 them each child whether its a girl or boy is equal and same they love both equally ...But as a son is the apple of mothers eyes same way daughters are apple of fathers eyes...Fathers love their sweet daughters very much and fulfill their every wish N they can do anything 4 their little girls..and they protect their daughters also from pain...In this GM n Gunjan part also this was excellently shown AMIT concern for Gunjans fast driving and telling her he will bring medicines ...and  1st he had said he won't eat breakfast but when Gunjan said Breakfast khanna hai he couldn't say No 2 her...In this part father-daughter understanding protectiveness and love is excellently shown...Loved this part ...This is the 2nd time topic of Medicines have come up 1st tinku said 2 gunjan medicine le lii di...Now GD asked about medicines...What I am wondering is IS GD talking about general everyday Medicines like Vitamins and BP etc or Is their more 2 this part??ConfusedConfusedConfused...

Shergill break fast scene was also superbly written...every characters feelings emotions and POV was superbly described...SM and SD scene was interesting SD was trying 2 catch SM attention But she was not looking at him As she had enough of his arrogant and stubborn thinking...their conversation showed SM and SD feelings both for many situations...Why is SD always so rude towards samrat...? they have a deep conversation gap ...He doesn't understands his son at all & thinks him good 4 nothing...he doesn't realize samrat is very intelligent n good in his work...SD is still in the same frame of mind of How samrat was in college...he doesn't accept his son has changed 4 good..Samrat has come 4 holidays and for his marriage purpose and SD wanting samrat 2 still wake up very early morning When he is on leave from work was very strange ...Though he loves Samrat but he doesn't understands his views and thinking at all..But SM loves and is somewhat trying 2 understand Samrat now.....though she is still wondering about Samrat-yamini pic but has realized that samrat doesn't like yamini...and she also has realized what type of girl yamini is and she doesnt have any good qualities and her each conversation showed that she wants a sweet girl like Gunjan as her bahu and samrat's wife and she wants samrats happiness and even Brij and ishita n rohan like gunjan and not yamini...BUT SD I was shocked the way he behaved so rudely towards Gunjan...IS THIS The way 2 behave with a guest in ur home ?? Even if u donot like someone u never behave the way SD behaved
....What I was wondering was WHY SD doesn't like Gunjan..why is he so rude towards her??ConfusedConfused...she is so sweet caring and loving girl so why doesn't he like her??ConfusedConfused...and Is it because gunjan is from middle class family ??..I saw 1 think in this part that 4  SD this rich and middle class thing matters and even though SD has realized yamini has many bad habits and faults even then he is ready to look away from Yamini's faults and accept her as his bahu she is from rich family and share same standard as him and as for SD his word his everything...and he knows his whole family likes Gunjan more and not yamini and  he has realized they will love if Gunjan becomes samrat's wife and their daughter-in-law and he knows Gunjan is a very good girl with awesome qualities which they want in their bahu  and yamini lacks good nature & qualities and they both can't be compared. I think that is why SD is rude towards gunjan and doesnt want her 2 come 2 his home and he doesnt want his family 2 get 2 attached 2 gunjan and he thru his rude behavior was making sure every person in his house understands this and that he wont change his decision...THIS is what I think about SD rude behavior why he is behaving this way suddenly now...Lets see whether I m right or not....Confused.I think SD should change himself and stop this attitude of I AM ALWAYS right.. this stubborn & arrogant nature before samrat and his family rebel against him ..I didnt like SD behavior towards gunjan at all .Angry..his saying He will tell gunjan himself 2 stop coming here These words of SD SHOCKED ME and made me think How can a person behave so rudely towards a person who has never harmed him n his family who is so loving ..how can SD HATE her just 2 get his way in his house???...SDAngry...SM n BRIJ are very nice ...and I loved it the way SM questioned SD about His rude nature towards Gunjan and why he is doing this...and I think if Brij hadnot handled the situation then arguement would have happened...interesting part...This part made SD nature more clear and showed how stubborn and arrogant he can be and also cleared the whole family views about different things and yamini...Nicely shown n written part...Thumbs Up....

I just loved this part ...ISHITA and Gunjan part was superb...their love care and feelings 4 each other was excellently shown in this part ...their each conversation showed how much they both respect ,love & care for each other...their deep friendship and understanding was superbly described and shown in the whole part....I loved the way gunjan teased Ishita about Baby thing and took care of her gave her medicine and told her I will take care of everything and u rest 4 a while and then Ishita teased Gunjan about that she will tell brij that Gunjan teased her about Baby part and Gunjan so sweet n innocent didn't realize she was being teased and got scared and I loved the part when Ishita called Gunjan her little sister Smile so sweet ..It showed How much deeply she loves Gunjan ...and ishita thoughts when Gunjan said samrat is nice Ishita immediately realized something has happened 2 change Gunjan's opinion showed how much she understands gunjan...Smile and when she realized that Samrat likes Gunjan and may want her 2 be his wife...the way ishita got excited showed she loves this idea very much and she also doesn't like yamini like her M-I-L and Brij ...and 3 of them r of same opinion infact I will say 4 of them including Samrat think same and want Gunjan as shergill bahu...Smile...I loved Ishita's excitement...Thumbs Up...her thoughts that she will help samrat but she will wait till samrat tells her himself about his feelings and her thoughts about making everyone agree He M-I-L and brij were awesome...I just loved the whole part very very very very muchThumbs Up...I wish kash Ishita-gunjan part thoda aur hotaDay Dreaming...EXCELLENTLY part Clap
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Now SAJAN PARTSmileDay Dreaming...wow!! kya awesome part thaa yaar...mazza aa gaya...whole situation visualize karkey...My memories of MJHT and sajan and samrat sleeping in shorts and Gunjan woke him up these memories were refreshed...Day Dreaming...Pictures choosen suited the part fully ...nice picThumbs Up...Loved the whole part very very much guys......Clap...Gunjan hesitation 2 enter the room and calling samrat from outside and rohan teasing Gunjan about samrat sleeping habits and when gunjan entered the room and her calling samrat ..1st SamratjiBig smile...wow!! samratjiBig smile...I felt as if she was calling her husband ..Suniyee ji  but here samrat ji Day Dreaming...and when she called him MR SHERGILLOL...MAN I felt as if 60 saal ke old person ko she was callingLOL...She is so sweet she couldn't decide what 2 call samratSmile...and her tripping on bed wow!! and Samrat thinking he was having dreamLOL and calling her chashmish Gunjan getting angry WOW!! so sweet..
Day Dreaming...and when samrat woke up Man his acting LOLLOLLOL...Samrat bhi GUNJAN Ko tease karney ka koi moka nahi chodataWinkLOL...LOLLOL...I was roffling so hard ....ROFL...his words what u doing here ..kya hum ladkoan ki izzat nahi hoti kya ..Kahin subha subha asa wasa kuch ho jata uske sath His these words LOLand when he said to her I hope tumney kuch wrong benefit nahi liya hia OMG!! SAMRAT SO NAUGHTYLOLLOLROFL...and when he teased her about his sleeping habits shorts think Embarrassed...Just Like Rohan teased her and POOR Gunjan she is so innocent she believed samrats each n every word..she didnt realize even 4 1 moment he was teasing her... LOL...and when he pretended 2 call his mom n bhabhi...OMG!!LOL...What an excellent infact super duper awesome Sajan part Clap...Loved it immensely .....SUPERB PART And My most favorite...and awesomely written part...Thumbs Up...U know the way SAMRAT and Rohan teased gunjan about Same shorts thing.Embarrassed....I thought 1 thing BOTH Chacha-bhatija are the same...Wink..LOL...Rohan full on has gone on his chacha and also agrees with his chacha's every word...I remembered this SONG 1 line---" KYUN Bhai chacha haan bhatija"...Wink...and I donot remember But I think chacha-bhatija was a movie also...ConfusedSmile...Awesome part..ClapClapClapClapClapClap.
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Now ARNAV part ...OMG!! was shocking...the man who always was shown 2 love Gunjan so so much that he was even willing 2 do anything and confront his family about why they not answering his questions about her Now when his friend emailed something 2 him His attitiude changed ConfusedConfused...what was in that email and what did his friend tell about Gunjan that changed arnav thinking and made him say this  how could she do this ...and he even deleted her pic from his lappy...ShockedConfusedConfused...and he was suddenly supporting his family and decided not 2 do anything against their wish they have suffered enough and now he has decided 2 go 2 delhi ...ConfusedConfused  these thoughts of Arnav and his actions confused me and is making me ask again What happened 2 years back that changed everything and which is giving everyone pain..and why did ARNAV say yeh nahi ho sakta woh asa kasey kar sakti hai......???????? whats the meaning of these words??Confused...and why does Arnav family donot like Gunjan anymore?? what happened...ConfusedConfused...I think something BIG happened...BUT WHAT???...Confused...

Awesome and Outstanding update Joseph,Soham,Sonia,Swati...Very well written...BAHUT BAHAUT MAZZA AAYA WHOLE update and each and every part scene and dialogue READ and Visualize KARKEY...Excellent work My friendsClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap...and Once again Sorry 4 my  late comment...Embarrassed...

Thanks 4 Pm and do update soon ..very curious 2 know what will happen next...Smile...

Now MBYPH's  turn ...I will read  part-35 soon and reply soon also S3J...

Love your good friend
GunjanSmileSmile...



Edited by 1gunjan7 - 04 December 2011 at 12:56pm

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 3:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 1gunjan7

Reserved Wink...Will comment soon Joseph, Soham, Swati, Sonia...

Love your good friend
GunjanSmile...


Thanks Buddy ! I am waiting...Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by gnaneswari

Firstly, sorry for my late comment. Was very busy these days that haven't got enough time to read the update. The update was superb. Loved it like always. Sajan scenes were so amazing. Really great job guys! I loved each and every scene of this update. Want to know about the reason behind sam's dad's reaction on coming her to his house. And what is the reason for arnav's disturbed mood? He said that "how can she do it?" Means, had gunjan's some act was misunderstood by arnav's family or what? I'm very curious to know about it. Please reveal it soon. And ishitha had guessed samrat's intensions correctly! This is obvious that she'll help him. Samrat had teased gunjan a lot na, now ishitha will tease him! LOL. And one more scene i liked most in this update is ishitha-gunjan's convo. That very genuine and felt real. No doubt, u guys are great writers. U know really well that how to potray the emotions. Day-by-day my love for ur ffs is increasing. And sorry for the short reply. Please do cont soon. Thanks for pm. 


Thanks Lakshmi for your nice feed-back...n Please,don't say sorry for that...I understand your problem...so,still waiting for your FF updateSmile.

Thanks for liking SaJan scene...We'll be reveal very soon, the reason of SD's anger n Arnav's reaction. Ishita is very close to Gunjan..as like Samrat  too...so,she has a doubt for Samrat's intention.We are really glad that,you liked Ishita-Gunajan scene...It was a very simple n light conversation between 2 girls.N your reply is short but very sweetEmbarrassed don't feel sorry for that.

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 8:35am | IP Logged
When u going to update next part..

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How do u manage to write such beautiful pieces guys?????????????????? luvd it Smile

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