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--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:05am | IP Logged
Originally posted by binudamania

thanx for d pm
it was to gud
do continue soon...

thanks dear for your comments

--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Lovly update.Smile
thanks dear for your comments

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--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ginny09

i just enjoyed the pART it was awesome Big smile
mayur rain scn was cute Smile
n sanu egg LOL
part had all the spices Tongue
great Clap
thanks dear for your comments
--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kritianya

Nice os
nupsi is realy innocent
thanks dear for your comments
--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tukun2009

Lovely update. Nupur's really delicate..And then the egg scene hillarious  Nupur is indeed very innocent... Awesome update... Continue soon..
thanks dear for your comments
--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -SupriyaluvsMN-

awesum update dear!!!!
Nups.. is soo innocent...
luvd MN convos...
luv it!
continue soon!
thnx 4 d pm!Hug
thanks dear for your comments

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--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:16am | IP Logged
ok guys here is a suprise update for you all actually i might give frequent updates so dont miss. this part is emotional i told like that because i had tears in my eyes at some point dont know about you and ya previous time while wrting egg scene i was laughing catching my stomach and i got same reaction from you 
 here is next part hope you like this part
my next update hopefully on wednesday till then take care

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--unknown-- Goldie

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged

part 8


Days were passing

Each and everyone is busy teaching nupur

Dia teaches her how to look modern

Benji teaches her English

Sam teaches her how to face circumstances

Gunjan teaches her about relationships and their importance

Shilpa teaches cooking and being traditional

Mayank just tries to know what is in her heart because that was very important

So everyone utilizes there free time to teach nupur what is life


one day sanjay and shilpa were out for marriage

S-bhai ghar bait ke kya karenge kahin bahar challenge

D-dats a good idea sam

B-idea acha hain par jayenge kahaan


G-mujhe nahin aana

S-tumse kisine pucha nahin

G-sam mujhe gussa mat dilao warna dekho main kya karti hun

S-kya karlogi

(she takes flower pot mayank catches her hand)

M-meri maa shant ho ja woh mera chota bhai hain tum use baksh do

D-guys stop fighting like kids but sam disco is gud idea bahut din ho gaye wahaan jaake

B-par mom dad

S-mom dad nahin hain isiliye toh yeh plan banaya mom dad aane tak aajayenge

G-main uncle ko zaroor bataongi

S-ise toh aaj nahin chodunga hamesha ulta hi baat karti hain

D-gunjan please maan ja bahut dino baad mauka mila hain

G-tik hain aapke liye maan rahi hoon

D-ab toh koi problem nahin hain na

M-ek problem hain


(he points to his sweet wife who is busy reading some book which benji told her to read)

S-bhabhi ko bhi lejayenge problem kya hain

G-confirmed hain ise dimaag nahin hain

S-tum(he points finger to her)

M-gunjan teek keh rahi hain sam nupur kaise aa sakti hain

D-kyun nahin aa sakti

M-dia tum janti ho nupur kitna delicate hain wahaan ka environment dekhegi toh darr jayegi

D-hum sab hain na uske saath woh akeli todhi hain hum sab milkar manage karlenge use bhi ek naya place dekhne ka mauka milega mayank maan jao na

M-ok kuch gadbad hua toh dad mujhe is baar zaroor maar dalenge so please take care of her

S-ek ek ko manake tang ho gaya hun ab aap sab jaldi se tayyar hone ki kasth karenge


G-main use tayyar karoongi

(she goes to nupur and sits beside her)

G-kya kar rahi ho bahar chale




G-matlab jab hum wahaan jayenge pata chalega ab jaldi se ready ho jao

(all get ready gunur wear salwar kameez and dia wears skirt)

(at the disco all are sitting on their booked table)

D-guys hum yehaan baitne ke liye todhi aaye hain

B-right dia lets go

(benia leave)

S-my partner bhabhi chalo

(he takes nupur with him)

M-samrat becareful

S-yes bro

M-ab hum dono bait ke kya karenge chalo

(majan leave together)

Sam was trying to teach nupur

She stamps his feet he starts shouting nupur is tensed mayank pulls nupur near her . he asks her to observe him

He explains her clearly and sshe also does it perfectly

M-dats good ab aise

(he teaches another step)

She starts dancing perfectly looking into his eyes and he is smiling all the time

G-jo cheez jise karna hain wohi karega toh acha rahega tum bewajah beech main gaye the

S-tumhein itni khushi kyun ho rahi ho

G-tum rooge toh mujhe hasi hi aayegi na

They all reach home before sanjay and shilpa return

Next day morning

(all are busy having breakfast)

Sanjay-mayank tumhein shimla jaana hain na kab jaa rahe ho

M-soch raha hun kal jaon(little hesitatingly)

Sanjay-yeh rahe tumhare tickets

M-two tickets (he finds even nupurs ticket)

Sanjay-nupur bhi tumhare saath jayegi use bhi ek nayi jagah dekhne ko milega

Shilpa-yeh toh bahut acha hain isi bahane nupur ghar se baahar niklegi

Sanjay-tum dono kaamo ko sambhal paoge

M-sure dad I will do it

(he feels happy that she will be with him actually he was worried for her)

(they are in the flight)

N-mujhe bahut darr lag raha hain

M-darr kis baat ki main hun na tumhare saath(he catches her hand she hugs him in fear he keeps hand over her head flight takes off whole journey she was hugging him she suddengly fall asleep)

(when they reach shimla he wakes her up)

N-kya hua

M-hum shimla pahunch gaye ab chale


(he kisses her forehead to say everything is fine)

(they reach hotel there room was already booked they check in)

She enters inside and looks from window outside

He goes near to her pats her

M-kya hua acha lagaa yeh sab kuch ya bura

N-bahut acha hain

M-acha ab tum fresh hoke thodi der aaram karo tab tak main company ka kaam pura karloonga aane ke baad bahar challenge

(she nods her head)

(he gets ready and has lunch with nupur then goes out to complete office work when he confirmed that she is safe)

(in the evening he comes and finds her sleeping he puts hand over her head she woke up)

N-tum aagaye

M-acha ab jaldi tayyar ho jao dono bahar chalenge

(she gets ready he takes her out and shows various places till late night)

In the evening benji was working in the office

D-tumhein ghar nahin jaana

B-kuch urgent work hain might be I will be late mom ko bata dena

D-main tumhari help karoon waise bhi mujhe ghar jaake koi kaam nahin hain

B-but dia tum kaise

D-please benji mere saath formal mat hona

B-acha teek hain

(both complete work and return in the middle their car stops)

B-oh shit gaadi ruk gayi

D-ab kya Karen

B-aur kya karenge ghar paas main hi hain paidal chalenge

(both are walking and both are silent both have same problem who will talk first )

B-tumhein koi punishment mili hain kya chup kyun ho

D-tum bhi toh chup ho acha teek hain yeh batao tumhare girlfriends kaise hain

B-girlfriends are you joking main benji hun sam nahin

D-toh tumhare girlfriends nahin ho sakte kya

B-agar mom dad ko pata chala na meri band bajegi

D-tum uncle aunty se darte ho

B-wohi samajlo ya phir mujhe koi ladki pasand nahin aati

D-kyun nahin aati tumhare liye kaise ladki hahiye mujhe batao I will help you

B-kyun bekaar main apna time waste kar rahi ho

D-tumhi ne toh kaha tha kuch baat karo tum ladko ke liye isse interesting topic kuch ho sakta hain kya


In the morning he opened her eyes and found her at window

M-(lying on bed)kya kar rahi ho

N-yeha sab kuch bahut acha hain

M-yeh toh kuch bhi nahin tumhein aaj aur bhi jagah dikhaonga

(he takes her for ice skating later they do some shopping )

Next day he was busy with office work so he left her in hotel by the time he reach hotel she was not in room he searches for her in whole hotel he doesn't find her he asks eah and everyone but no use he almost has tears in his eyes

M-nupur tum jaha bhi ho please waapas aajao

(he goes out of the hotel and finds her standing looking at dance troop)

(he gives her a tight slap in anger)

M-maine tumse kahaana bina bataye bahar nahin jaane ki phir tum yeha kyun aayi kitna pareshan tha main pata hain meri jaan nikal gayi thi ab chup kyun ho

(she starts crying he looks around people looking at them and takes her with him to room)

(after reaching room he closes the door she sits in a corner in fear)

M-nupur I am sorry main pareshan tha jaane anjaane mera haath ut gaya

(she doesn't say anything he goes near her catches her hand she takes it back and goes back)

N-(she has tears in her eyes)main kabhi baahar nahin jaaongi mujhe mat maaro

(listening to those words tears come out of his eyes he  realizes what he has done he feels like breaking his hand for his stupid work)

(he catches her face and kisses her forehead )

M-nupur please mujhe maaf kardo(he catches his ears) mera woh matlab nahin tha main tumhein kyun maaroonga tum meri pyari nupur hona main darr gaya tha ki tumhein kuch ho na jaaye tum meri jaan ho tumhein kuch ho gaya toh main jee nahin paonga  please aise bina bole kabhi mat jaana

(he hugs her and she starts crying badly he wipes her tears )

M-aise nahin rote baahar chale

N-mujhe kahin nahin jaana

M-sorry kahana tum mujhe maaf nahi karogi please chalo

(he takes her for shopping and they come back)

(in the night they have dinner )

(she was sleeping he moves hands over her hair)

M-aaj maine bahut badi galti ki maine bhi unlogo ki tarah hi tumse behave kiya but I promise yeh phir nahin repeat hoga main tumhein bahar isiliye nahin jaane de sakta hun kyunki main darta hun kahin tumhein kuch ho na jaaye par agar maine tumhein andar rakha toh mujh main aur us commissioner main kya faraq hain mujhe kuch na kuch toh karna padega taaki is problem ka hamesha hamesha ke liye solution mile

Next day morning he finds her again looking from window he wanted to know actually what she is watching daily

He goes near her and slowly pats her

M-kya dekh rahi ho

N-woh dekho (she points to dancing troop yesterday also she was there only)

M-tumhein dance pasand hain


M-wahaan chalein

N-sach main

M-haan chalo

(he takes her to that place she was looking at the dance with full concentration and he ws busy looking at her the happiness in her eyes)

(they stay whole day there only just to see her happy)

Next day mayur return
precap -gunjan's realisation for sam (i am not joking serious)

Edited by --unknown-- - 27 August 2011 at 12:39am

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