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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
hi manita...i read all ur parts and i think  u r simply great!!!!keep ur work up...can u add me in ur pm list pleaasseee?????

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 9:52pm | IP Logged
Hey Manita,
 
I cant stop myself from appreciating you.I must say , you are a wonderful writer.Your narration made me lost somewhere in the dreamlands.I could visualize the scenes and scenarios between Shantanu and Khanak while reading everyline in the story.I feel that I am actually seeing them and the scenes between them.Everytime I read the parts of the story, they last in my mind for long and I could connect all the parts together and feel the magic that Shantanu and Khanak create.
 
Well to let you know, there are two songs that come into my mind and run in the background while I read your FF for different scenes.
1) -"Kitne dafe dil ne kaha, dil ki suni kitne dafe
Waise toh teri na mein bhi maine dhoondh li apni khushi
Tu jo agar haan kahe toh baat hogi aur hi"
-- When Khanak walk in the woods and Shantanu follows her and they land up in a talk walking togther for miles not  realising the distance
2) "Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Bheege bheege sapno ka jaise khat hai,
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai,
Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,
Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,"
--- When Khanak thinks about Shantanu thogh she doesn't want to and unknowingly she keeps searching for him and feeling for him.
Keep up the good work!!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by preiti

Hey Manita,
 
I cant stop myself from appreciating you.I must say , you are a wonderful writer.Your narration made me lost somewhere in the dreamlands.I could visualize the scenes and scenarios between Shantanu and Khanak while reading everyline in the story.I feel that I am actually seeing them and the scenes between them.Everytime I read the parts of the story, they last in my mind for long and I could connect all the parts together and feel the magic that Shantanu and Khanak create.
 
Well to let you know, there are two songs that come into my mind and run in the background while I read your FF for different scenes.
1) -"Kitne dafe dil ne kaha, dil ki suni kitne dafe
Waise toh teri na mein bhi maine dhoondh li apni khushi
Tu jo agar haan kahe toh baat hogi aur hi"
-- When Khanak walk in the woods and Shantanu follows her and they land up in a talk walking togther for miles not  realising the distance
2) "Mar jawaan, mar jawaan,
Tere ishq pe mar jawaan,
Bheege bheege sapno ka jaise khat hai,
Geeli geeli chahat ki jaise lat hai,
Soche dil ki aisa kaash ho,
Tujhko ek nazar meri talash ho,"
--- When Khanak thinks about Shantanu thogh she doesn't want to and unknowingly she keeps searching for him and feeling for him.
Keep up the good work!!


I am honoured Preiti...truly !!

I listen to music, almost always !!
and especially while writing I keep music on...the above two are beautiful songs and I love the feeling that you could connect to my story with music...

this is what prose should be...each individual reading it having his own interpretation and should relate to it in his own way...if at all he does !!Smile

It's a huge compliment !!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
mani aaweome updates khanak is such a  lovely character  in ur FF as she is in our show Smile

Edited by sshriyaa84 - 29 May 2011 at 10:37pm

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Hi Manita,,when you updating?

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Manita diii

Update kab karoge ? :D


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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:31am | IP Logged
manita waiting for ur update of both updates plzzz do it soon yar dying with anxitey i know u have lot of work but plzzz ur ffs are like breath to me its making me go mad with it plzzz take time of and update plzzz

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 5:03am | IP Logged
update kahan hainOuch

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