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kulsum wadi

@wadi..doll

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Posted: 12 years ago

AWWW Asma diii love love the character sketch yaar love it
love diii the chapter is amazingg cant wait for next chapter diii love it
the title itself is soo rocking so the story must be amazing yaar dii plz continue love your writing yaar love it dii

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minu2011

@minu2011

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Posted: 12 years ago

Very nice start Asma. Really like that there's no enmity between the families. And Divya seems so nice. And an exploding Nivi! Now that's different - though she did explode at Yash even in the show and slapped him too when he ran away!! Looking forward to the next chapter and curious to see how the story unfolds!

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Poojaa_P

@Poojaa_P

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW! this is a beautiful start! please continue soon!

Loved it!

and thanks for informing me about this! keep PMing me about the updates!

Great stuff!

PS: you have a very good talent in writing! Keep up the good work! 👏

-Pooja

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salekh1

@salekh1

Senior Member

Posted: 12 years ago

WOOOW

sOOO happy oyur writing i FF, i loved your scenes, and know a FF..

thank you so much..

As for the part one, woow, niceee..

Cant wait the next part..

Conitnue pleaseee😛

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Koolgirl

@krazzy4ArHi

Senior Member

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Posted: 12 years ago

hay hay love it mannn i so xtremely adore it!!! keep updatin yr!!!

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aamina

@-aamina-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

Omg Asma I was so excited while reading it., as I love reading your scenes and now ff, I knew I would love it. just loved the introduction and the first chapter. Just can't wait to read the next chapter and how NivRen eventually meet. You are very talented and have written it beautifully.
Please pm me when you post your next.
Thanks dear

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 12 years ago

Asma awesome start loved it do continue soon

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luvsKinha

@luvsKinha

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

Omg Nice FF. i loved it... just loved the introduction and the first chapter. Just can't wait to read the next chapter and how NivRen eventually meet. You are very talented and have written it beautifully.
Please pm me when you post your next.
Thanks dear

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BIackSwan

@BIackSwan

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

hiya asma 🤗 thank u sooo much for tolerating my constant nagging and finally gifting all of us dis faaabulous ff 🤗 🤗

ok here goes my pov... kinda long so i hope i wont bore u to death

love da intro where viren returns to shimla after so many years and nivi's nervousness to get to da job interview. thank god u changed nivi's character😆 im sooo gonna love dis new avatar of nivi... hot tempered, reckless and more like us; ordinary girls rather than mother theresa 😆 😆

btw is CC gonna be a vamp here as well?!? 😡 anyways its ok cz ur da writer and we can always nag u if CC gets out of control... it's easy to nag u to change da track unlike stupid CVs of RS 🤣

luv ya asma 🤗 mwaaah

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

hai meri asma...maar dala...omg ur ff...yipee yipee yipee...first chapter itself superb...cant wait for next parts...continue soon... :-)

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