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When U Say Nothing At All, MN, Pt 7 Pg27 19Jun (Page 20)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
lovely update
jst luved mayur phone convo...totally mad

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Divyaaa...y? y? y? u update and dnt pm me...lol...

I have been extremely busy at work, and do not log in, so ur pm will make my life easy...

As for the update...can i just say I love Mayank and Nupur and u wud understand? ...ermm no...???

Ok, then lemme elaborate, i m actually liking this new concept of story, and i feel we can actually have a MJHT3 wid this story...haha...

It was nice the way Mayank played along...coz one person who can make him crazy and break free from his self made rules...is Nupur Bhushan...and the safed ghoda...errmm...can we just skip that...haha

I adore the way u write, and esp coz this is not ur usual style, but u rock at whatever u do...so keep writing...

P.S: - i loved the "i love u, u love me, so lets get married..."... the most and u knw y...dnt ya? ;)

Love u lots...

Annie

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:06am | IP Logged
read the first five parts
 
and i so loved it
 
gr8 going yaar
 

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 4:48am | IP Logged
Moi is sorry dill se coz of the delay in replying to the last part which resulted in u writing the 5th part b4 i comment there.Embarrassed...n b rest assured-u r gonna get likes as well as beauty comments on this FF for SURE!!!coz this is a WONDERFUL one...Approve.i swear it is just AWESOME!!HugHug

n i especially loved the way u write it here...d tone-so much conversational,like how we have seen d actual MN in the show...,d realistic way of how u write makes it even more of a pleasure to read... 
 d 4th part had me blushing like an idiot...she took acre of him n did everything for him...oh-wait-she went in thru after breaking a window...???!!!.well-Nupur bhushan u see...so-m not surprised...ROFL
                the whole series of events is just beautifully put down.n this part is even more lovelier...n d FAV chunk of mine is of course-d PHONE CONVERSATION... Day DreamingDay Dreaming.OMG... they actually said I love you to each- other n got away with it...??!!! n best was Mayank playing along...!!!ROFL
like seriously-how much more adorable can these two get...!!!!!!!Day Dreaming

                keep updating it...m simply loving it...!!!!Hug

Debzy...Wink

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Divya HugHug
i am so sorry . i res.d & forgot to edit my comment.
so its quite understandable that you did not pm me about part 5 update.Ouch


this FF of yours is just something else.
i want to read it slowly to savor it, at the same time i want to read it quickly to find out
what happens next.
how can two astute people be so unaware about what they feel for each other is mutual.
thats quite a mystery.

loved this update very much.
they said what was on their mind & in their heart in i am kidding guise.
it was choo chweet.
 
Loved Nupz's reaction on hearing Mayu calling her a sweetheart.LOL
she latched on to that single word & forgot the rest.

loved How Mayu said i will make you feel married after the marriage.WinkWink
naughty boy MayuLOL
but they took a step forward only to back two steps,Confused
such perverse creatures.
in  a nut shell i love this FF very much.

i also love the fact that it has light hearted sweet stuff & no heavy duty stuff like the mahan cvs used to
fling on us the moment every thing became right in Mayank-Nupur's world.

sorry for commenting so late Divya.*holding my ears*Embarrassed
i promise to never ever forget to edit my comment.cross my heart.

drama king & queen dono ka effect ek saath ho gaya hai mujh par.LOLLOL

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 6:19am | IP Logged
Hai ALLAH DD2
u updated this ff-aur mujhe ata he nehi chala
pher bhul gayi na - mujhe pm nehi kya
jao i wont talk to u...

but i really loved this update...
haye mayur aid I l u to each other very smartly--- hehehehehe poor mayur kisiko bhi patanehi chala ki ye saach bol rahe hai...lol

by GOD mayank and his idea of ran away with nupur was fantastic...kya baathaimayank ki demahmain siase baat- kaha se agayi...lol




and then their sweet -cute argument abt marriage- it seems they were really thinking abt their marriage with each other(i know Di- they were  thinking abt it- lekin man he man main- kyun agar kahi kisi ko pata chal gayi tab kya hoga... )

by GOD mayur meri samjh ki bahar hai- they r unique and magical as alwz...
loved the way u r presenting our mayur

hats off DD2
love u loads...
muahhh

note- DD2 i want mayur face to face convo... bass jaldi mayank ko mumbai leyaoo


take care DD2

waiitng for next part...

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 12:54am | IP Logged
DD2

we r eagerly waiting for ur update
plz plz update asap

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
waiting for an update...

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