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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 7)

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Awesome.update soon

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awesome, plz continue
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nice update. can u pls add me to ur pm list.
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Beautiful FF ...loved it!!!

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loved the update...
loved their romance in terrace...
pl cont soon
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waiting 4 update ...

continue soon ..
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Maan an geet were roaming around markets to buy gifts for ttheir family, geet sees a ice-cream stall she ask maan to buy hera ie-cream

Geet: maan mujhe ice-cream khani hai.

Maan: -------

Geet: maan aap sun rahe hai na mujhe ice-cream khani hai.

Saying this she turns and is heel shock to find no maan there.

Geet: maan!!!! Maan!!!!, aap kaha hai  maan???

Geet: maannn

Geet gets up from her sleep shouting maannn

Maan : geet ,, geet ,, kya hua?

Geet: hugs him and maan maan

Maan: ha geet mein yahi hu, tumne koi bura sapna dekha hoga.

Geet: hmmm.

Maan: chalo sou jao. And he takes her in his embrace.

She slpt hugging maan tightly.


It was morning when geet felt something crawling on her neck,so she stired in her sleep a little.she again felt something,so she slowly opened her eyes to see what it is

And she saw that maan's one hand was around her waist and her both legs were in between his legs,geet blushes seeing their position and thinking about their last nite..suddenly something bites her on her neck and she shock to see that who it was, it was none other than maan . he was kissing her neck and then he bite her .

Maan : good morning my baby

Geet: good morning

And she starts moving away

Maan: are aise kaise jaa sakti ho tum mujhe bina good mrng kiss diye hue,ha?

Geet blushes at his demand,he slowly leans on her and he is surprised that she is not backing out,he smiles and kisses her on her lips ,kiss was supposed to be small and sweet but it turns into passionate one,,geet also responds with equal passion..

They broke apart and geet hugs maan.

Maan: aaj hamara yaha akhri din hai,hum kal ghar jaa rahe hai..

Geet: maan hum kal hi sab ko bata denge ki humari shaadi hogai hai..

Maan: lekin hume dekhna hoga ki ghar par sabka mood kaisa hai.

Geet: hmmm thk hai. Lekin jaise hi mauka milega hum sabko bata denge.

Maan: ha thik hai mere shona!!!!!

Geet: chalo utho hume market jaana hai, ghar walo ke liye shopping karni hai mujhe.

Maan: ha thik hai chalo.

Maan and geet roams around lazily as it is their last day here

Maan and geet purchased all type speciality of the place.

When they finished their shopping it was almost afternoon

Maan: geet bas hogaya ab mujhe bhook lagi hai,chalo kuch khate hai.

Geet: ha maan bas aur thodi der fir hum challenge

Maan:nahi mujhe bohot bhuk lagi hai, chalo warna mein tumhe utha ke le jaunga.

Geet: geet's eyes widen in shock bcoz she knw that maan will  surely do that if she will not go now,he wont even regret it.

Geet: ha ha thk hai chalo mene kab mana kiya.

Maan  smirks looking at her face expression.


Maan and geet goes to a lavish restaurant and had their lunch and then

Maan: chalo abhi ghar chalet hai.

Geet: nahi abhi thodi aur shopping baaki hai

Maan: ohhh!!! Not again geet plzzz

Kal hum ghar jaa rahe hai pata nahi fie hume akele me milne ka mauka mila ga ya nahi aur wapas jaake mujhe business bhi sabhalna hai..

Geet: aise kaise tie nahi milega.hum roz milenge.

Maan and geet goes back to their room

Geet comes out of bathroom wearing a loose white shirt and a white Patiala salwar looking tempting foe maan

Geet looks at maan who was looking at her with so much desire in his eyes.

Geet looks down as she is able to look in that desirable eyes ,if she will look in that she will loose her control.

Maan approaching geet

Maan: u look tempting, agar hum majbhur nahi hote na me tumhe kabka kha gaya hota.

Geet turns red with his wild comment

Geet: hands him towel and ask him to take a shower.

Geet packs her and maan's bag till he was in bathroom, bcoz she knw once if he comes out he will not let do anything.

She smile at his comment that he gave her before going to bathroom.

Maan comes out of bathroom and sees geet packing last remaining things

Maan: geet thoda aaraam kar lo fir karna baadme packing.

Geet: bas thoda hi baaki hai

Maan: yeh ladki aise nahi maanegi

He goes near her and picks her up in his arms and carry her to bed

Geet:maan yeh aap kya kar rahe hai,mujhe neech utarye

Maan: nahi thoda araam karlo pehle.

He lays he on bed and she again starts moving from bed,maan sees this and comes on top of her .pressing his body on her.

Now she not able to move even a bit.

Geet: maan

Maan: sou jao warna mein tumhe aise hi daba kar rakhunga.

Geet immitiately closes her eyes

Maan smiles at her then they both sleep cuddling to eachother.


When geet woke up it was evening

Geet looked at maan , he was peacefully slping looking like a adorable kid.

Geet: maan uthiye sham ho gai hai.

Maan: hugs her and sleep not at all wanting to get up.maan plz get up mujhe packing karni hai, hume sawere hi nikalna hai na.

Maan: hmmm. Slowly opening her eyes.  

Maan: he gets up and goes to washroom.and  soon comes out

Maan: geet mein Rahul aur mohit ke pass jaa raha hu.unhe kal nikalne ka time batana hai.

Geet: she was busy in arranging clothes

Ha thik hai.




Precap= Rahul: are maan aaj yaha hamari akhri raat hai, thoddi daaru tou pee hi sakte hai, aur waise bi thodi daaru peene se kuch nahi hota.

Mohit: ha maan , chal abhi muh khol aur yeh pee.


Geet: maan sambhaliye apne aapko aapne bohot pee rakhi hai.

Maan: kisses her neck and exposed cleavage..

Geet: moan     mmmhhh    maannn




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awesome as usual, i hope dono jaldi bata dain shadi ka,continue soon plz i just luv ur FF

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