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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 6)

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Maan and geet enters party hall together with

Holding eachothers hands.

All girls were going crazy seeing maan ,while boys

Were fascinating with geet in their arms.they all

Were jealouse of maan .

Geet: maan hume sab aise ghoor ghoor ke kyu

Dekh rahe hai.

Maan: kyuki tum pari lag rahi ho isliye ladke dekh

Rahe hai aur tum mere saath ho isliye ladkiya tumhe

Ghusse se dhek rahe hai.

Geet giving maan an angry look

There was an girl who was rich spoil bratt.she was

Tall fair slim with perfect figure.she really liked maan

And wanted him with her today at any cost.

Her name was veronica.she was a business man's

Only daughter.

Maan and geet went to their were gang who were

Waiting for them.

Rahul: hey man u r luking gud and oh my my see

Sum1 is lookins super hot.

Geet blushes at his comment

Maan holds geet by her waist and tighten his grip on

Her waist,

Maan: kyu nahi hogi akhie vo mere saath iss party

Mein jo aayi hai.

Geet tries to herself from his grip everything goes

In vain in front of maan.

Geet: excuse me guys I need to get a drink for me.

See u latr.maan leaves her.

And from nowhere sameera come and hugs maan

Sameera: maan ah my god u r looking damn hot.

Trailing her finger on his chest.

Maan removes her finger and gives her a small


Maan sees geet getting jealouse of sameera so he

Thinks why not to play along with it for sometime.

Geet: hay babaji yeh maan bhi na, mene kaha than a

Ki hum sab ke samne apne rishte ko chupake

Rakhenge…abhi dekho mujhe jalane ke liye uss

Sameera se kaise chipak rahe hai.

At the same time a boy comes to geet and ask her

For dance. Geet looks at maan who was bsy in

Talking with sameera.

Geet: abhi dikhati hu;

She agrees for dance and goes on the dance floor

Boy: wat ur name?

Geet: geet.

Boy: apko mera naam nahi janna?

Maan looked back at geet but she was not there

So he starts searching her ,and he founds her

Dancing with vicky

Geet: ohh sorry…. Apka naam kya hai?

Boy : Vicky.

Geet: okay!!!

Boy: u look beautiful!!!

Geet: thank u..

Suddenly he starts caressing her waist and then

Digs his fingers in her skin.

Geet: yeh aap kya kar rahe ho? Codo mujhe jaana


Vicky: itni jaldi nahi. He starts pressing her body

On his…geet was tring to push him with her all

Power and all went in vain.

Maan noticed this from far space.

Vicky was about to open her saari pallu when

Something hits his nose and fell unconscious on


Geet runs and hides her face in his chest.

Maan caresses her back for sometime.

Rahul: carry on guys nothinginteresting is going on

Here. Geet  r u alrite?

Geet: haa.

Maan leaves geet and goes near bar and orders

Drinks for him and drinks one aftr other.

Geet sees this and comes near maan.

Geet: maan bas hogaya, itna mat pijie.

Maan: tum yaha se chali jao. Mujhe  mere haal par

Chod dou.

Geet: maan aap mera gussa apne aap par kyu nikal

Rahe ho?

Maan:kon ho tum meri, kyu tumhe meri itni parwah


Geet: patni hu apki…

Maan: tou jab mene tumhe sab ke samne chuha tou

Tum waha se chali kyu gayi?

Geet: maan mene apse pehle bhi kaha hai ki,hum

Iss rishte ko itni jaldi sab ke samne nahi laenge.

Maan understands her and says sorry.

Maan: geet I m sorry

Geet: plz aap maafi mat maangiye.

Chaliye room mein chalet hai.

Maan tries to stand bt his gives up and he lands on

Geet,geet  holds him and says

Geet: mein apko pakad ti hu. And she carries him to

Room, but maan asks her to take him to terrace,she

Takes him there, it was beautiful as it was full moon

Night. Maan balances himself on an iron ladder

And asks geet to come sits on his lap.

{ same way as in murder in that song bheege hote


Geet comes and sits on his lap keeping her both

Legs on one side facing maan, unsure if he will be

Able to balance himself along with her or not.

Maan slowly slides his hand around her waist inside

Her pallu. Geet gasp as his cold hand touches her

Soft skin.

Maan: geet tumhe pata hai mene jab tumhe pehli

Baar dekha tabhi mene soch liya tha ki meri dulhan

Sirf aur sirf tum hi banogi . aur dekho aaj tum meri

Aur sirf meri ho.

He starts kissing her neck passionately,,sucking

Her skin and bites her giving her love bites on her

Neck,, geet moans loudly " maaan".

Maan starts sucking were he had bite her…

He gives her wet kisses all over her face,1st on her

Eyes nd then on her nose nd then on her chin and

Cheeks. He kisses her lip's corner but not her lips.

He teases her by not kissing her lips.

Geet gets frustrated and holds maan's collar and

Pulls him with force and jams her lips on his.

Firstly maan don't kisses

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Firstly maan don't kisses her and teases her .

Geet gets irritated and was about to back off when

Maan pulls her towards him and kissed her full

Mouth forcefully. Kiss started slowly but turn

Paasionate, maan pushed his tongue inside her

Mouth and kissed her full mouth.

Kiss lasted for half an hour….. geet backs off

Panting, she was out of breath,.. she holds maan's

Shirt tight for supports and keeps her head on his


Maan slowly opens her sari pallu's pin and slids it

Down and starts giving her wet kisses on her

Shoulder. Her cleavage was all exposed,,he kisses

Her cleavage and gives her love bites and again

Sucks it.

Geet moans with pleasure. " Ahhh" ,,, " Ohhh"

Maan ,,,,

This makes maan go more wild.. maan slowly opens her

Her blouse's hook… geet takes her pallu and hides

Him under it,,so that no one can see them like this.

His fingers were digging inside her skin.

Geet opens maan shirts button and kisses him

On his chest,,, maan moves down to her belly and

Licks there with his tongue,,, geet moans like mad.

She is not able to hold this much passion.

Maan cups her breast from above her bra..

He press it roughly, and kisses it hungry .her bra

Is all wet coz of his saliva.

Maan was about to open her bra's hook , when

There was a huge fire work high in the sky making

Loud noise.

Geet comes back to reality with the loud noise.

Geet know that maan is not in his senses, so she

Will have to handle the situation very carefully.

Geet: maan mujhe thand lag rahi hai, hume ander

Jaana chahiye,, this bring maan to reality.

He looks at her condition and his also. he moves

Back a little and put back the hook of bra..and then

Puts her pallu back at its place. Combes his hairs

and closes his shirts button looking at geet.geet

blushes and looks down. She too makes her hair

properly .

maan: geet I m s….

geet put her hand on his mouth to prevent him from

saying sorry.

Geet: maan plz sorry bolke iss moment aur hamare

Riste ki insult maat kijie…

Maan smiles at geets words..

Geet: chale maan?,,, and holds his hand

Maan: chalo

And they went to there room and went to sleep

Maan takes his pillow and was about to go to

Sleep on couch when geet holds his hand and


Geet: maan aap kaha jaa rahr hai?

Maan: couch par. Agar mein tumhare aur karib raha

Na tou apne aap par control nahi kar paunga…

Geet: maan aaj terrace par jo bhi hua usme meri

Bhi haa shamil thi. Mein chahti thi ki hamara

Rishta ek kadum aage bade. Humne apni hadh

Nahi par ki. Aap mere pati hai, mujh par apka

Pura haq, agar me apko rok rahi hu tou sirf hamare

Parivar ke wajah se, warna mene tou apko apne

Pure mann aur tann se apna Pati mann liya hai.

Maan smiles hearing this from her mouth.


They both sleep together cuddling to eachother…




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Geet: maan mujhe na ice- cream khani hai.

Geet: maan maan maan ,,,, aap kaha hai maan

Geet cries maaan

Kaha hai maan??? Geet ko akele chodke kaha chala

Gaya hai maan??? Kya geet maan ko dhund


To get all answer's of this questions,,,stay tune



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