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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 41)

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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 April 2012 at 10:41pm | IP Logged


thoda twists chalte hain but don't stretch it for yrs...

and more over please don't ruin Maan's character...Shikha or any other girl should not be successful in getting him...

and I don't understand why leap...why can't story go on with present...first u will make leap of some yrs then u will open the suspense with past-present-past-present...every other story in this IF is same...why can't the story be simple...

how much time it takes to charge mobile and call a person u love most...a businessman like MSK forgets to charge his phone when he needs it most for his business...and more over he has only one phone when now a days even rickshaw wala keep more mobiles with him...he must have laptop to send mail to Geet...they must be having land-line phone at home...how much time it takes for a person to contact... MSK is always shown as a shrewd person who can get any information with in no time then how he is failed in just contacting his wife...if he fail in such a little thing then it is better that Geet should leave him...how will he be able to protect his family later...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...

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