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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 3)

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged

chapter five

 
 
HERE BOTTLE IS SPINNING AND IT POINT TOWARDS RAHUL

MAAN: SO RAHUL TRUTH OR DARE

RAHUL: TRUTH

GEET:MAAN PLZ ME RAHUL SE KUCH PUCHNA CHAHTI HU

MAAN:OKAY

GEET:TOU RAHUL I HAV TOP 3 QUSTN ABOUT UR PERSONAL LIFE,SO ARE U READY TO ANSWER.

RAHUL LOOKING AT MUSKAN

RAHUL: HA

GEET: SO HERE COMES UR 1ST QUSTN

RAHUL PAST MEIN TUMHARI KITNI GRLFRND THI?

RAHUL: TWO

GEET : ARE U A VIRGIN?

RAHUL: LOOKING AT MUSKAN 'YES'

GEET: I M IMPRESSED.. UR NEXT QUSTN IS ,DO U REALY LOVE MUSKAN?IF YES THEN PROVE IT.

RAHUL:YES I REALY DO LOVE MUSKAN, AND I VIL PROVE IT ONCE WE REACH MUMBAI.R U OK WITH IT.

GEET: THATS OKAY WITH ME...

GEET: I HAVE NO OBJECTION WITH RAHUL FOR MUSKAN. PERMISSION GRANTED

MUSKAN HUGGING GEET

MUSKAN: THANKZ GEET.. THANK U SO MUCH

GEET: TERI BADI BEHEN HU TERA BHALA HI CHAHUNGI.

MUSKAN:ISILIYE TOU MENE TUJHE KAHA THA KI ME JO BHI LADKA SELECT KARUNGI APNE LIYE USSE PEHLE TUJHSE MILVAUNGI.

AGAIN BOTTLE IS SPINNING AND THIS TIME IT STOPS ON MAAN.

SANAYA: TOH MAAN TRUTH OR DARE

MAAN: DARE

SANAYA: THATS LIKE A TRUE MAN...LOLZZZ

MOHIT AND RAHUL LOOKS AT SANAYA WITH EXPRESSIONLESS EYES.

SANAYA: WHAT ???U GUYS WERE TAKING TRUTH LIKE A SCARED PUPPY.

MOHIT AND RAHUL SITS THERE WITH POUTED LIPS.

ALL LAUGHS AT THEM

SANAYA: SO MAAN UR DARE IS TO KISS ANY GIRL SITTING OVER HERE.

MAAN: LOOKING AT GEET SAIS OK

MAAN LOOKING AT GEET STARTS WALKING SLOWING TOWARDS GEET.HE COMES FACE TO FACE WITH GEET , HE BRINGS HIS FAVE CLOSE TO HER BUT SUDDENLY HE KISS SAMEERA ON HER CHEEK,WHO WAS SITING JUST NEXT TO GEET...GEETS EYES FILLED UP WITH TEARS BUT SHE HIDES IT SOON SO THAT NO ONE SEES IT.AS SHE HAD NOT YET SAID HIM THOSE THREE WORDS SO HE IS ANGRY WITH HER.

SAMEERA:BLUSHING,,,THANKS MAAN

MAAN'S EYES WERE STILL FIXED ON GEET.WHO WAS NOT LOOKING AT HIM.HE WENT AND SAT ON HIS PLACE.

AGAIN BOTTLE IS SPINNING AND THIS TIME ITS MUSKAN'S TURN

MOHIT: SO MUSKAN TRUTH OR DARE

MUSKAN: DARE

MOHIT: WINKING AT RAHUL ...OKAY THEN AS WE ALL KNW THAT U TWO LOVE EACHOTHER,SO UR DARE IS TO KISS RAHUL ON LIPS.

MUSKAN'S EYES POPED OUT HEARING THIS

RAHUL; SMILING AT HER

MUSKAN WALKS TO HIM,RAHUL ASKING HER WITH EYES WHETHER SHE IS OKAY.

MUSKAN SITS IN HIS LAP AND SLOWLY KISS HIM ,,RAHUL DONT ABLE TO COMTROL HIMSELF ANYMORE.STARTS KISSING HER HUNGRYLY.HE KISSES HER LIKE MAD.THEY WERE IN DIFFERENT WORLD, WHEN THEY HEARD COUGHS AND LOTS OF COUGHS IN SURROUNDING.THEY SLOWLY PARTED FROM EACHOTHER.AND MUSKAN IS LIKE FULL BEETROOT...MADLY BLUSHING

SPNNING BOTTLE STOPS AT GEET AND SHE LOOKS AT MAAN.

RAHUL; SO MISS GEET HANDA,,TRUTH OR DARE

GEET: LOOKING DIRECTLY IN MAAN EYES,,,DARE

RAHUL: AND UR DARE IS TO GO FAR IN THIS JUNGLE AND STAY THERE IN FOR WHOLE 15MINS

GEETS EYES POPED OUT LIKE A LOLLY POP.

MAAN: RAHUL YEH KYA BACHPANA HAI.ITNI RAAT KO VO KAHA JAEGI.GEET TUMHE YEH KATNE KI KOI ZARURAT NAHI HAI.

SAMEERA: MAAN, GEET KOI BACHI NAHI HAI JO KHO JAAEGI .

GEET:TAKING IT AS INSULT.MAAN ME YEH KARUNGI.

GEET RUNS AND STOPS AT THE ENTRANCE TO FOREST.HER PACE SLOWS DOWN.

SHE BRAVELY STARTS HER JOURNY TO FOREST.SHE GOES TOO FAR THAN NEEDED.NOW SHE GET CONFUSED THAT FROM WERE SHE HAD ENTERD.

HERE MAAN THING

MAAN: YEH LADKI ABHI TAK KYU NAHI AAYI?

SUDDENLY THEY ALL HEAR A SCEAM

MAAANNN

MAAN: YEH TOU GEET KI AWAAZ HAI.

HE SHOUTS GEEETTT GEEETTT KAHA HO TUM AND RUNS INSIDE FOREST TELLING ALL TO WAIT THERE ONLY TILL THEY RETURNS.

SO GUYS THIS WAS MY FIFTH PART.

PLZ DO COMMENT AND CLICK LIKE TAB IF U LIKE IT.

PRECAP: MAN: AGAR AAPKA RISHTA NAAJAYAS NAHI HAI TOU AAPKO HAMARE SAAMNE SHAADI KARNI HOGI.

MAAN AND GEET LOOKS AT EACHOTHER WITH UTTER SHOCK



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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
awesome part...
loved it so much...
do cont soon...
eagerly waiting 4 d next part...
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oh my PRECAP MAANEET SHADI hayeee update soon
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CHAPTER SIX

MAAN RAN STRAIGHT TO THE PLACE FROM WERE GEET WAS SHOUTING.

MAAN REACHED AND WAS HELL SHOCKED TO SEE GEET TIED WITH ROPE TO A TREE AMD LOTS OF PEOPLE WERE STANDING AROUND HER MAKING A CIRCLE.

MAAN: I THINK THEY ARE ADIVASIS

GEET WAS CALLING MAAN'S NAME CONTINOUSLY..MAAN CUDNT TAKE IT ANY MORE AND RAN TO GEET,BUT BEFORE HE CUD REACH HER ADIVASIS CAUGHT HIM AND TIED HIM ALSO.

SARDAR OF ADIVASIS( SOD): LADKE TUM ISS LADKI KE KON LAGTE HO?

MAAN: DOST HU MEIN USKA.

SOD: USKE SAATH RAAT TO ITNI DER TAK AKELE KYA KAR RAHE HO?

MAAN: HUM SHIMLA GHUMNE AAYE HAI.

SOD: GHUMNE YA FIR BHAGKE APNE PARIVAR SE.

MAAN: NAHI HAMARE SAATH AUR BHI DOST HAI HAMARE.

SOD: TUMHARA ISS LADKI KE SAATH NAJAAYAS RISHTA HAI.

MAAN: AISA NAHI HAI..

SOD: TOU FIR TUM AKELE ISS KE SAATH ITNI RAAT KO KYA KAR RAHE HHO?

MAAN: MEIN MAANTA HU KI HUM EK DUSRE SE BOHOT PYAAR KARTE HAI LEKIN HUMNE AISA KUCH NAHI KIYA HAI, AUR NA HUM BHAAG KE AAYE.

SOD: MEN TUMHARE BAAT PAR KAISE VISHWAS KAR LU

MAAN:AAP JO KAHENGE ME VO KARNE KE LIYE TAYAR HU.

SOD: EK HI TARIKA HAI ,,TUM ISS LADKI KE MAANG MEIN SINDUR BHAR DOU AUR ISSE SHAADI KAR LO.

MAAN AND GEET LOOK AT EACHOTHER WITH UTTER SHOCK.

MAAN: YEH KAISE HO SAKTA HAI, HUM APNE PARIVAR KO BATAYE BINA SHAADI NAHI KAR SAKTE

SOD: AGAR TUM ZINDA REHNA CHAHTE HO TOU TUMHE ISS LADKI SE SHAADI KARNI HOGI.

MAAN: AAP HOTE KOUN HAI YEH TAY KARNE WALE KI HUME SHAADI KARNI CHAHIYE YA NAHI.AAKHIR AAP AISA KYU KAE RAHE HO HAMARE SAATH,HUMNE KYA BIGADA HAI AAPKA?

SOD: TUM LADKE BHOLI BHALI LADKIYO KO FASATE HAI AUR FIR UNKE SAATH NAAJANE KYA KYA KARTE HAI AUR FIR BAADME UNHE CHOD DETE HAI. MERI BETI KE SAATH BHI AISA HI HUA THA. HAMARE KABILE KI PEHLI LADKI THI VO JO COLLEGE GAYI THI AUR TUM JAISE LADKO KE SANGAT ME PAD GAYI AUR AAJ USKA YEH HAAL HAI.( HIS DAUGHTER IS BEEN RAPED). ISISLIYE ME YEH NAJI CHAHTA KI ISS LADKI KE SAATH AISA NAHI HO.

MAAN: ME ISS KE SAATH AISA NAHI KARUNGA , MEIN ISSE BOJHOT PYAR KARTA HU.

SOD: AGAR BOHOT PYAR KARTE HO TOU SHAADI KYU NAHI KARTE...YEH MERA AKHRI FAISLA HAI YA TOU TUM ISSE SHAADI KARLO YA FIR APNI ZINDAGI SE HAATH DHO LO.

GEET: HUM SHAADI KARNE KE LIYE TAYAAR HAI.

MAAN LOOKING AT GEET WITH 'R U SURE' LOOK. GEET ASURING HIM THAT SHE IS READY.

SOD:JASHNNN KI TAYARI KI JAAYE. LADKI KO ANDAR LE JAYIYE AUR DULHAN KI TARAH TAYAR KI JIYE.

SOON GEET IS READY AS A BRIDE AND MAAN AS A GROOM.. ADIVASI'S RASAM ARE AS SAME AS OURS

SOON WEDDING TOOK PLACE AND WHILE PHERAS MAAN AND GEET TOOK VOWS WITH TRUE HEART AND THEY PROMISE THAT THEY WILL TAKE THIS MARRIAGE SERIOUSELY.

SOON GEET WAS STANDING AT WINDOW AND THINKING THAT HOW HER LIFE HAS CHANGED IN LAST 2HOURS. SHE HAD HARDLY KNOWN MAAN FOR 2 DAYS AND 2DAY SHE IS HIS WIFE, NOW SHE IS " Mrs MAAN SINGH KHURANA". AND SHE BLUSH.

MAAN ENTERS IN ROOM AND SAW GEET STANDING AT WINDOW AND BLUSHING . HE GOES NEAR HER AN SLIDES HIS HAND NSIDE HER SARI PALLU AND KEPT IT ON HER BARE WAIST AND PULLS HER CLOSE TO HIM.

AND WHISPERS IN HER EARS " ABHI TOU MUJHE LICENSE MIL GAYA HAI TUMSE PYAR KARNE KA.

GEET: MAAN HUM JAB TAK PARIVAR WALO KO NAHI BATA DETE TAB TAK HUM APNE RISHTE KO EK KADAM AAGE NAHI BADAYENGE,THIK HAI? AUR KISI KO ISS KE BAARE MEIN NAHI BATAENGE.DOSTO KO BHI NAHI,THIK HAI?

MAAN: JAISA AAP CHAHE Mrs MAAN SINGH KHURANA, LEKIN EK KISS TOU MIL SAKTI HAI NA.. SAYING THIS HE SMACKED HIS LIPS ON HER WITHOUT WAITING FOR HER REPLY.

SOON THE TURN INTO PASSIONATE AND HE KISSED HER FULLL MOUTH. HE ENTERD HIS TONGUE AND SOON THEY WERE PLAYING WITH EACHOTHERS TONGUE.HE SUCKED HER BOTTOM LIP AND BITE HER THERE, GEET MOAN IN PAIN. MAAN STARTS SUCKING BLOOD AND SOOTHS HER PAIN.

THEY BROKE APART FROM KISS AND WERE PANTING BADLY.GEET KEPT HER HEAD ON HIS SHOULDER,HER EYES WERE STILLL CLOSED.

MAAN: GEET HUM YAHA SE BHAG JAYENGE JAB YAHA SAB LOG SOU JAYENGE.

GEET: JAISA AAP CHAHO.

WITH THAT MAAN CARRIED HER TO BED ABD LAID HER COWN,AND NOW HE IS ON TOP OF HER.

MAAN STARTS KISSING HER ON HER NECK AND CHIN AND THEN HER COLLAR BONE.

GEET MOANS WITH EVERY KISS.MAAN RUBS HIS MANHOOD ON HER FEMININE ONE. MAAN STARTS KISSING HER ON LIPS.THEY BROKE FROM KISS AND SLEPT IN EACHOHERS ARMS.

IT WAS 3AM WHEN MAAN WOKE UP. HE CHANGED HIS DRESS AND THEN WOKE UP GEET.GEET TOO CHANGED HER DRESS AND THEY SLOWLY CAME OUT OF THERE ROOM AND SOON THEY RAN FROM THE KABILA. THEY WERE LOST IN JUNGLE.

MAAN: ABHI TOU HUM SAVERE HE BAHAR JAA SAKTE HAI.

GEET: KYU?

MAAN: KYUKI MENE AATE WAQT TREES PAR MARK KIYA THA TAKI AATE WAQT RASTA JALDI MIL JAYE,ABHI ANDHERE ME KAHA MILEGA RASTA.

GEET: RAAT BBHAR HUM YAHI RAHENGE ISKA MATLAB?

MAAN: HA MERI WIFEY.CHALO SONE KE LIYE ACI JAGAH DEKHTE HAI.

MAAN SOON FOUND A WATERFALL AND THEY SETTLED NEAR A TREE

MAAN: TUM SOU JAO.MEIN JAGTA HU

GEET: AAP KYU JAAGOGE,AAP BHI SOU JAIYE NA?

MAAN: HA TAKI HUM KISI JANVAR KA DINNER BAN JAYE.

GEET:THIK HA TOU ME BHI AAPKE SAATH HI JAGUNGI.

MAAN SITTING WITH THE HELP OF A TREE RESTING HIS BACK ON THE TREE.

GEET SITTING WITH HER LEGS EITHER SIDES OF HIS WAIST FACING HIM AND KEEPING HER HESD ON HIS CHEST.

GEET KISSED HIS CHEST

MAAN: GEET AGAR TUM AISE KAROGI TOU MEIN APNE APKO ROK NAHI PAUNGA.

GEET: MISCHEVIOUSLY ,,,MENE KYA KIYA?

MAAN: ACHA ABHI BATA HU

AND WITH THAT HE SMACKED HIS LIPS ON HER.AND KISSED HER PASSIONATELY

AND SOON GEET SLEPT ON HIS CHEST

IT WAS 7AM WHEN MAAN WOKE UP AND FOUND NO GEET AROUND HIM

HE BEGAN TO SEARCH GEET BY CALLIBG HER NAME

GEEETTT GEEETTT

GEET: MAAN ME YAHA HU.

MAAN: KAHA HO?

GEET: YAHA WATER FALL ME.

MAAN REACHING THERE FOUND GEET FULLY DRENCH IN WATER

MAAN: YE KYA KAR RAHI HO. BAHAR AAO.

GEET: NAHA RAHI HU, MERE PURE BODY ME SE SWEAT KI BAAS AARAHI HAI...AUR ABHI ME SHAADI SHUDA HU TOU MUJHE APNE UPAR ZYADA DHYAN RAKHNA HOGA, VARNA AISI SWEAT KI BAAS AEGI TOU MERE KAREEB NAHI AAYENGE

AND THEN SHE BITES HER TONGUE.

MAAN STANDS THERE WITH A SMIRK

HE SLOWLY APRROCH HER HE HELD HER CHIN AND MADE HER LOOK AT HIM, AND SOON AS SHE LOOK AT HIM HE KISSED HER AND BROKE AND THEN SAID GOODMRNG Mrs KHURANA.

GEET DONT SAY ANYTHING. AND SUDENLY SHE SHOUTS MAAANNN.

MAAN: KYA HUA CHILA KYU RAHI HO

GEET: TOUCHING HER MANG. MERA SINDOOR DHUL GAYA ABHI KYA KARU?

MAAN: JAB HUM GHAR POHOCH JAYENGE TABHI LAGA LENA

GEET:NAHI MAAN EK SHAADI SHUDA LADKI KO KABHI BHI APNA SINDOOR AUR MANGALSUTRA APNE SE ALAG NAHI KARNA CHAHIYE. YE APSHAGUN HOTA HAI

AND WITH THAT SHE STARTS CRYING

MAAN CUDNT TAKE IT MORE.HE HELDS HER HAND AND BROUGHT HER OUT OF WATER.

HE WENT NEAR A TREE AND CUT A BARK OF IT AND CUT HIS THUMP AND THEN WENT TO GEET AND THEN FILLED HER MANG WITH HIS BLOOD.

GEET LOOKED AT HIM WITH TEARS IN HER EYES.

MAAN THEN KISSED HER 4HEAD AND THEY STARTS DRYING THERE CLOTHES.

SOON THEY STARTS SEARCHING THRE WAY TO ROAD.

SO GUYS THIS WAS MY SIXTH PART. DO COMMENT AND IF U LIKE IT THEN PLZZZ CLICK LIKE BUTTON.

PRECAP=

GEET: MAAN PLZZ ITNA DRINK MAT KARIYE. AAPNE ALREADY BOHOT PEE LI HAI

MAAN: GEET TUM YAHA SE JAO, MEIN THIK HU.

GEET: DHIK RAHA HAI KI KITNE THIK HAI..AAP MERA GUSSA APNE UPAR KYU NIKAL RAHE HAI.

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chapter-5
Thanks for pm
lovely update
pre cap is interesting
wow... Maaneet  will get marry in jungle????????

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