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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 27)

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 7:07am | IP Logged
awesum...
omg!wat s shika planning nw??
pls dont separate dem..
thanx for the pm dear..

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Posted: 10 November 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
awesome... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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nice part

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thanks all of u for all ur likes and comments...
will try to update on wednesday...
plz plz plz plz  do click like button and dont forget to commment...
ur comments and likes encourages me to give my 100% in this story...
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Posted: 14 November 2011 at 6:50pm | IP Logged
so sweet!
and stupid Shikha!

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abhi abhi ff pada this is really nice plz continue soon n add me in ur pm list oplz is ff ko complete karna beech me mat chodna
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Part 27

later at that night both maan and geet have a blissful dinner together.

 
there was still sometime for them to depart for their destination like 1 whole week.
 
 
 
 
maan was hell busy in his office as he has to finish his pending work before going to london
 
 
where as here geet was also hell busy in her school in cordinating with others ,so that she can manage her work from new york also.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan and geet both use to talk once in a day that to only for 10 - 15 mins ,as there work was not giving them enough time...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
finaly the whole 1 week flew like a wind and the day came for the geet to leave for NY .. there was still 2weeks remaining for maan to leave for london...
 
 
 
 
 
 
it was early morning when he heard a melodious voice singing morning aarti and he very well knew whose voice it is. a smile came to his lips..but suddenly it stiked him that she is leaving 2day and then he will not be able to hear her voice and see her for 1 and half year...
 
 
 
 
 
 
here geet finishd her aarti and gave aarti to all
 
 
 
 
mom- geet beta hume abhi teri awaaz sunne nahi milegi..
 
 
 
 
geet- kya ma , mein todhi na hamesha ke liye jaa rahi hu,bas 1 saal ki hi tou baat hai
 
 
 
 
mom- ek saal aur 6 mahine
 
 
geet- ha wahi ma.
 
 
 
 
mom- jaa sameer aur samaira ko bhi aarti dekar aa
 
 
 
 
geet- jee
 
 
 
 
geet went to khurana haveli
 
 
 
 
 
geet- papaji ...mummyji kaha ho aap log
 
 
 
 
samaira- lo aagayi aapki beti
 
 
 
sameer was on bed
 
 
 

geet cames and gave him aarti then to samaira

 
 
samaira- aaj ke baad hame kafi dino tak teri aawaz sunne nahi milegi..
 
 
 
 
geet- bas thodi din ki hi baat hai mummyji
 
 
 
 
samaira- jaldi aana beta tumhe pata hai na tumhare papaji ka mann nahi lagta tumhare bina.unka tou din hi nahi shuru hota
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- mein jaldi aane ki koshish karungi mummyji, aap papaji ka dhyan rakhna..
 
 
 
 
samaira- ha baba mein tumhare papaji ka dhyan rakhungi
 
 
 
 
 
geet- mummyji maan kaha hai dikhayi nai de rahe hai
 
 
 
 
samaira- vo apne kamre mein hai sou raha hai , aaj usne chutti li hai
 
 
 
 
geet- mein unhe aarti de aati hu
 
 
 
 
 
samaira- thik hai , waise beta me abhi tumhare papaji ko bahar khumane le jaa rahi hu. hume aane mein time ho jayega.
 
 
 
 
geet- jee aunty
 
 
 
geet slowly goes to maan's room and knocks it
 
 
 
no reply comes
 
 
 
 
she slowly pushes the door and there he was sleeping on his bed looking adorable..
 
 
 
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part-28

 
 
 
 
 
 
she slowly comes in and closes the door behind her
 
 
her heart was racing madly
 
 
 
she slowly goes and sits beside him and carres his hair lovingly and then puts a small tika on his 4head and gives him aarti with her own hand
 
 
 
 
 
then she places the aarti on side table and keeps looking at him lovingly and thinks that now she will not get to see him for 1 and a half year.
 
 
 
 
 
 
a small tear escape from the corner of her eyes and falls on maans cheek
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan who was enjoying all the love and care of his beloved wife became alert as he feels a water drop on his cheek. and he knew what it is.
 
 
 
 
he slowly opens his eyes to see geet sitting very close to him and her face was too close to his face, she was carresing his hair lovingly
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
she sees maan looking at her and she give him wide smile
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
where as maan was not expecting a smile from her, he thought she will run away from him,to hide her tears
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- good morning in small whisper and slightly pecks his lips
 
 
 
 
 
 
now this was a utter shock for maan.
 
 
 
 
maan gives her a wide smile.
 
 
 
 
 
it is always a rare site to see a teary eyes and a wide smile at a same time on a persons face.
 
 
 
 
and the site was worth watching.
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan slowly pulls her down on his side on bed and looks at her lovingly
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet did not protest him.
 
 
 
 
maan slowly comes on top of her.
 
 
 
 
 
geet touches his face and caress it..
 
 
 
 
 
geet- maan aap apa khayal rakhna
 
 
 
 
 
jab me yaha nahi rahungi.aur jab aap londan mein honge.
 
 
 
 
 
maan was just looking at her with all the love in the world...
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet slowly snakes her hand around his neck and pulls him down towards her and kisses his 4head..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan slowly dips his head in the crook of her neck and kisses her neck slowly relishing the moment to its core...he starts giving her wet kisses
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan = geet u smells so
good...mannn kar raha hai tumhe bas aisi hi rakhu apne baho mein hamesha...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet= tou rakh lijiye na, mene kaha mana kiya hai ..i m all your's!!!!
 
 
 
 
 
maan's smiles deepen with her words...
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan pulls himself up from her neck and look in her eyes..he slowly captures her lips in his...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he kiss her slowly and tenderly...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
but today geet was no where to stop,,she was pulling maan more and more towards herself...she dont wanted to go far away from maan...as if she goes away from him she will loose him...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan felt her insecurities in her behaviour,in her way of kissing...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he wanted to make her feel secure,that he is only his and that to forever...
 
 
 
 
 
he sensousl rubs her back...he was carresing it slowly.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he slowly pulls her dress dori...making her dress losse..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he comes to her neck and kisses her madly all over her neck and shoulder, he gives her love bite on her shoulder..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet was getting mad in his desire...he was taking her to the edge of desire...
 
 
 
 
 
geet was moaning madly..
 
 
 

maan slowly pulls her dress low form her shoulder due to which now her clevage was visible to hum..

 
 
 
 
he dips his head in her clevage and starts kissing her mounds hungryly...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet was pressing him more and more to herself...it was more of like he was entering her body...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan turns and now geet was on top of maan ...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
her wet hairs were all scattered on his face, he inhaled deeply her fragrance boz now for a very long time he will not be able to smell it...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet was kissing maan all over his face.. and slowly sliding down she started kissing his exposed chest , she kissed his neck and gave him a love bites for the very first time...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan felt that something is wrong with her, he thought she is insecure and he knew she will miss him like hell,,so its all her frustration on her helpless-ness..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he slowly parted her ,said soothing word to calm her and slowly patted her back and head to calmed, and he saw that she is calming down now...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
he slowly layed her on bed beside
him and saw her breathing heavily and tryng to ge calm.
 
 
 
 
 
 
he carresd her hair slowly
 
 
 
 
 
geet slowly looked at him with tears filled eyes ,maan saw tears in her eyes and bend down to suck her eyelids geet tightly hugged maan started crying badly
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- maan mujhe nahi jaana aapko kahi chode ke..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan- sshh geet shhh sshhh.. calm dowm baby..mein abhi yahi hu..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
yeh sab tumhare future ke liye hi tou hai na ..agar yeh imp nahi hota tou me tumhe kabhi jaane nahi deta,
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet calmed dowm now..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan- aur waise bhi i m a one women man,, tou kisi aur ke pass jaane ka tou sawal hi nahi aata...geet aur ek baat tum rote hue bilkul ek baby lagti ho...
 
 
 
 
 
 

geet smiled hearing his talk.

geet- tou me hu hi ek baby,,,maan ki baby...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan smiles widley slowly kissed her 4head..
 
 
 
 
 
maan-chalo now let me get ready
 
 
 
 
tumhari flight kitne baje ki hai?
 
 
 
 
geet- 2 baje..
 
 
 
 
 
maan-- saari packing ho gayi?
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- hmmm she was fiddling with his buttons which wer open now..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan slowly bends down kissed her paasionatedly for the last time..
 
 
 
 
 
 
they kissed like there is no tommoro...
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan slowly parted her
 
 
 
 
 
maan- now let me go and get ready ,and u also get ready then we will go to airport..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- u r coming to see off me?
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan- aur nahi tou kya? tumhe kya laga mene yeh chutti kis liye li hai..
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
geet- me abhi jaake ready hoti hu, aap jaldi aiye
 
 
 
 
 
 
maan- hmm
 
 
 
 
 
 
again sorry for delay guys ...
so here are double updates..
hope u all like it...
 
 
 
 
 
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