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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 20)

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PART 22

 

SOON MAAN GOT BUSY WITH CLIENTS. HE TOOK GEET ALONG WITH HIMSELF WHERE HE GO.

 

MAAN HOLD GEET'S HAND AND BROUGHT HER IN LOBBY

AND PUSHED HER ON THE WALL AND NOW HE WAS COVERING HER BODY WITH HIS.

HIS HANDS WERE MAKING PATTERNS ON HER NAVEL. GEET WAS BREATHING HEAVYLY…

GEET- MAAN HUME HAAL MEIN JAANA CHAHIYE.SAB HAMARA WAIT KAR RAHE HONGE.

MAAN – SSHHH KUCH MAT BOLO…. TUMHE PATA HAI KI AAJ TUM KITNI SEXY LAG RAHI HO…. AAJ MEIN APNE AAP KO KAISE ROK PAUNGA….

GEET'S CHEEK GETS MORE RED….

AS MAAN WAS ABOUT TO KISS HER

SAMEER CALLS MAAN .

MAAN- COMING DAD ARRGGG DAD BHI NA HAMESHA GALAT TIME PAR HI BULATE HAI…

 

Geet giggles..

Maan- tumhe bohot hasi arahi hai,, ek tou asie backless blouse pehenti ho aur upar se hasti ho.. tumhe tou mein baad mein dekhta hu…

Maan goes to his dad.

 

Sameer- meet my son maan singh khurana

Maan- hello

Singhania- hello mr maan!!! Aapki kaafi tareef suni hai… and meet my daughter soniya..

Soniya gives maan a very seductrous look and hugs him.and sensuously rubs his back.

Maan slowly seperates her from himself.

Geet saw all this and didn't like it a bit…

Soniya- hello maan, nice meeting u.

Maan- same here.

Sameer- maan soniya kal se tumhare saath hi  kaam karegi. Singhania humare kaafi aaj friend hai isliye,

Maan didn't like it but he said ok..

Sameer-excuse me maan and soniye, come mr singhania mujhe aapse kuch business ki baat karni hai.

Sameer went leaving soniya and maan alone..

Geet saw this and comes near maan…

 Geet- maan mujhe bhook lagi hai…

Maan- slowly bents and kisses her cheek making her cheeks go red , yes sweetheart wait  a second… maan said slowly so that soniya cant  hear them…

Maan- soniya meet geet, and geet she is soniye she will be working with me now…

Geet- ohh! Hi soniya nice meeting u…

Soniya- hi! Tum maan ke saath kaam karti ho?

Geet- nahi mein ek professor hu aur maan ki friend hu aur maan ki neighbour bhi..

Soniya- oh !!!

Soniya makes a face at her profession and turns to maan..

Soniya- so maan hum kal se kaam start kat denge

Maan- ha soniya …now can u plz excuse me vo kya hai na geet is hungry so hume dinner ke liye jaana hai…

Geet smiles at soniya and intertwines her fingers with his..

Maan- chale?

Geet- haa… chalo chalo mujhe bohot bhook lagi hai… lunch bhi nahi kiya aaj mene pata hai…

Maan- kyu?

Geet- bohot neend arahi thi tou sou gayi aur seedha 6 baje uthi…

Maan- geet aise mat kiya karo plz,,

Geet- ha baba . aap tension mat lo.

Maan- okay wifey…

Geet blushes at his comment…

 

Far at the corner we see a man mixing something in a drink and ask waiter to give it someone  pointing at him…

 

The waiter gives it to the man and he drinks it in one go…

Soon the man shouts holding his heart and fall down..

 

 

And that man is none other than Sameer khurana….

Maan rushes to Sameer

Maan- dad dad kya hua, dad

Geet- papaji kya hua open ur eyes papaji.

Samaira- kya hua aapko Sameer ankhe kholiye.. she cries bitterly

Maan- geet call ambulance..

Soon ambulance came and everyone goes to hospital.

Doctors treats Sameer and comes out.

Maan rushes to doctor

Maan- kya hua dad ko doc vo thik tou hai na?

Doc- unhe kisine poison diya hai, hum abhi kuch keh nahi sakte …we are tring our best…

The floor slipped beneath maan's feet. He cant even think of anything else now, he was num….

 

Samaira was cring bitterly, raina was taking care of samaira and geet was with maan..  maan was just sitting their quietly not saying a word..

Geet slips her hand in his to make him feel her presences…

Maan looks at geet and breaks in her arms.he cries like a small baby.. geet holds on to him

 

  precap= maan and geet in long distance relationship...

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awesome update but didnt like the precap when r they going to revel their marriage infront of the family
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awesome updates 
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awesome ... superb ...

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continue soon ...

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Edited by maaneetsangel - 21 August 2011 at 3:15am

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