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HUM AAPKE HO GAYE part-34 pg=39 24/04/12 (Page 13)

angelic_cute IF-Rockerz

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very short update yaar
update soon with bigger part

shazia24 Groupbie

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Chapter fifteen


It was 4 in morning when alarm ringed in every one's room.

Geet woke in first attempt only she saw how they were sleeping

geet's both legs were in his legs his hand was protective around her wasit , his breath was teasing her neck.


She blush looking at their position


She slowly removed his hand and went to take shower


She came out after 15 mins in a simple blue jeans and a white colr full sleeves turtle neck top. She was looking stunnig..

She saw maan still sleeping, she went near him

Geet: maan uthiye na hume late ho jayega

Maan: ………

Geet: maan

Maan: ………

Geet bent down and whisper in his ears , water was dripping  from her hair on his face.

He smell her perfume and smile

He holds her waist and pulls her closer to him nuzzling his nose in her neck and kissing it.

Geet: maan aap bhi na, chalo utho abhi

Maan: pehle good morning kiss

Geet: maan kal se apko no good morning kiss.

Maan: abhi to de do pehle.

Maan kisses her paasionately.

Kiss was supposed to b a small peck but it turned into a passionate    kiss

Maan frees her and says good mornig kiss to me leke hi rahunga.

Geet took this seriously.

Dekh lenge.

Maan: dekh lena

Geet: pehle jake naha lijie aap, me apke kapde nikal deti hu

Maan looks at her smirking.

Geet suddenly stikes  and she says I mean cubboard se.

Maan smiles at her and goes to bathroom

Geet removes maan navy blue shirt and  blue jeans and place it on bed and packs everything and keeps the bag near door.

Maan gets ready and sees bag all ready to lift.

Maan : abhi 15 min hai 5 bajne me, koi ready nahi hoga abhi tak , v should wait in room only.

Geet: hmmm

Maan: he looks at geetand thinks he ill miss her at his home.



next part coming soon...

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shazia24 Groupbie

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 12:39am | IP Logged

Chapter sixteen


Maan slowly starts moving to her and geet backward

She hits wall

Maan holds her both hand and place it on either side of her.

Maan starts kissing her slowly, he nibbles her lower lips, suking it biting it. Geet too responds with eqal passion

He frees her hand and slids his hand in her t-shirt feeling her bare waist.

Geet holds his hair in her fist, making him go wild.

They know that they will not get this moment back, and they will miss it.

Geet opens his shirt button and slids her hand inside his shirt .

As kiss turns more passionate geet digs her nails on his back.

She moans madly.

He kiss her neck giving her love bites ,only at places were he can see.

He bites her  earlobe making her wince.

He smiles.

This time maan comes back to sense first. Geet was still lost in his passion.

Maan sees her face, she was still catching  her breath.

He rest his 4head on her 4head smiling.

Maan: geet hum late ho rahe hai.

It was 6.10 nw….

Some one knocked


Continue soon……



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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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maaneetsangel IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2011 at 7:10am | IP Logged
awesome ... loved both parts 15 n 16 ...

thnx 4  d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Edited by m-g19 - 22 July 2011 at 9:27am
jasraj123 IF-Sizzlerz

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both updates nice one. they can't stay away from each other. i wonder what will happen when they go home. 

pls continue soon
angelic_cute IF-Rockerz

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wow gr8 update dear 
do continue soon with bigger part n
 loved the way they r expressing their love

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