Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani

FF: FANAA...tere pyaar main.. - Page 13

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Awesome update yaar.. so whoz dis new vampy..?? continue soon.. thanx for d pm..lol.


thanks...u will come to knw soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
when r u goin to update????????????
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when r u goin to update????????????


chap 12 n 13 already updated...next part will be updated soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hiii frnds……I am introducing few characters from here….

 

Arjun khanna: fun loving…abhay's friend….a vampire who joined raichand family 100 years back…dating aliya….was in Shimla for an year

Aliya raichand: fun loving with teasing nature…abhay's little sister….vampire who joined family 110 years back…has a power of seeing future which others dont…was in shimla for an year.

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                                            CHAPTER 14: BEGINNING

[at raichands]

A phone bell rings in raichand haveli…

A: hello…

The voice: hey bro….i n arjun are coming back!!

A: Aliya!! Its you….

Aliya: yes bro….m cuming back…missing u all…we will come by evening…n bhai…wanna talk to u…bahot kuch chal rha hai na….

A: ofcousre…u knw everything

Aliya: rite…mom and dad ko mat bolna…we wil surprise them…bye

The phone is disconnected. Abhay is very happy as her little bratty sister aliya is back. And she will be joining college with him. He is glad that finally his dearest friend Arjun is also coming back and would be in college to with him. Abhay leaves and reaches college.

A: pia !!

Pia sees abhay and walks towards him sliling.

A: guess wat?? My friend arjun and sis aliya are coming back!!

P: wat?? U have a sister?? How come u never told me?? Abhay raichand aur kya-kya chupaya hai tumne mujhse??

A: hey…relax pia..there is a story behind this..and its not the right place to talk about this. There are people around.

P: fine…I wanna knw now.

Pia pulls abhay and takes him behind the college building in jungle

P: now!!

A: aliya is my little sister. She is bratty just like ur misha. U knw that sid n I are blood related. But not aliya. Aliya joined our family 110 years ago. I and dad were on hunting trip and saw aliya lying there. She was attacked by a wer…..someone. we got her home and since then she is staying with us.

P: who attacked aliya?

A: an animal

P: an animal? Vampires hurt by animal? U got to be kidding me

A: fine….its werewolf…and now don't ask me about those mutts…again long story…some other time..now can I continue??

Pia nods her head.

A: and now arjun…arjun came 10 years later to our family. Aliya has unusual power to see future. So aliya found arjun. And aliya and arjun are together. They love each other just like we do. They aren't married but wants to be. Arjun is my best friend. Now u know about them.

P: so wats the story?

A: story?

P: I mean people in town will ask u about them. What will u answer? Kahan se aa gaye dono achanak se?

A: aliya and arjun were in shimla. Arjun was doing some part time training program with. But now both are back. Arjun is son of family friend whose paents died in accident. Since then he is staying with us.

P: but why you never told me?

A: because it never came up..sorry…never thought of it.

Suddenly it starts raining. Pia and abhay get completely wet. Abhay tells pia that they should go home. But pia is still enjoying rains. Pia pulls abhay in rains. Abhay looks at wet pia. He walks closer to her. Pia blushes. Pia tries to go but abhay pulls her towards him. Abhay and pia comes closer. Pia still blushing tries to free her hand. But abhay is not letting her go. He moves the strand of wet hair from pia's face. He feels her face with his hand. Pia closes her eyes. abhay still watching frightened and blushing pia kisses her on her cheeks and then on lips. The lip lock was powerful. Abhay leaves her to grasp air.

Suddenly abhay's cell rings. Abhay and pia come to their senses.

A: yes bro…m coming..i knw they are coming…I will be back in 10 mins.

Abhay cuts the phone. He watches pia. He himself is embarrassed.

A: sorry pia…I didn't mean to…

P: its ok abhay…jo hi hua him dono ki marzi se hua. And guess what? I enjoyed it.

Abhay raised his one eyebrow and rolled his eyes.

A: why am I not surprised? Lets go home…

P: abhay u go….i have some work. I will meet u directly at ur place in evening.

Abhay goes home and pia to library.

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago
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                                     CHAPTER 15: WELCOME

Pia is driving her car back home. She is still thinking and smiling about whatever happened in jungle. Suddenly she sees a car coming in full speed. Pia stops her car. The other car stops too in time before accident could take place. Pia gets down.

P: dekhkar nahi chala sakte car.. itni fast drive kyu kar rhe ho?

Two people gets down. Pia sees that one is a girl and other boy.

Girl: I am sorry. He didn't mean to

But the girl is shocked to see pia. She keeps staring at her. The boy too gives shocked expression. Pia sees them staring and decides to break silence.

P: what??

Both: nothing

They both control their expressions. But now the girl starts smiling seeing pia. And the boy is still confused.

Boy: hey we really sorry…didn't mean to

P: its ok drive carefully next time

All of them leave.

[at raichands]

Door bell rings. abhay opens the door.

A: aliya !! arjun!! Welcome back. Kab se wait kar rha hu

aliya: ya mee too.

Arjun: hey abhay…kaise ho? Kitna stupid question hai na….obviously u r fine.

sid: Ms bratty….aa gayi tum..

aliya: haan…Mr flirt

arjun: hey sid…

sid and abhay hugs arjun and aliya.Chand and haeena come to living area.

Aliya: mom…dad….missed u

Aliya runs and hug both.

Arjun: mom…dad….good to see u

H: tum dono ne bataya kyu nhi that u r coming

Aliya: toh surprise kaise hota.

H: pehle se bhi jyaada bratty ho gayi ho tum. Aur arjun tum?? U also didn't say me a word.

Arjun laughs and says sorry.

Again the bell rings. abhay knows its pia.

Aliya: bhago abhay bhai…pia ayi hogi

A: bahot smart ho tum

Abhay opens the door. Its pia.

H: hi pia…come in…don't be shy…

P: hi…

H: meet them…this is arjun and this is aliya.

Pia sees them and is shocked. Pia and arjun together say "tum". Aliya is smiling. Everyone seems confused.

Arjun: ab samja aliya tum se milne ke baad itna muskura kyu rhu thi

A: tum log kab mile.

Aliya narrates the whole incident.

A: tum dono aate he khurafat machane lag gaye

Arjun(in dramatic voice): wah abhay! Dekhli teri dosti!

S(winking at aliya): arjun! Abhi bahot kuch dekhna baaki hai

Aliya: stop u both…

P: hey its really nice to meet u both

Pia and aliya hug.

Aliya: we will be great friends in future. don't mind lekin barish main tum aur abhay bhai jungle main kya kar rhe the??

Abhay is embarrassed and pia blushes. Everyone starts laughing.

A: enough now!! Pia ko aur pareshan mat karo

Arjun: ab to haq banta hai

Giving hi-5 to sid.

Chand: arjun and aliya…go take some rest. Kal se u are joining college and we have something serious to discuss. Pia I don't mind if want to wait and be a part of discussion. U are part of family and you deserve to knw everything.

After sometime….

Sid narrates the whole incident to aliya and arjun about visitor. Sid givies the cloth to aliya and arjun.

Aliya: I cant recognize the scent. But I will keep lookin for it using my powers. Pia we will not let anything happen to you.

S: we all knw that…aliya

Arjun: hey I think I knw who is this….

Everyone is shocked.

 

 

That's all for now….hope u all like this….will update next part soon…

Edited by peehu24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey just loved your ff they r sooo cute . ihope their says yes to piya for becoming vampire and u rock yaar and plss pm me 
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Posted: 12 years ago
its awesome!!aliya is lovely...but who is the visitor?😕Edited by ilove99 - 12 years ago
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This content was originally posted by: sweetmonaya

hey just loved your ff they r sooo cute . ihope their says yes to piya for becoming vampire and u rock yaar and plss pm me 


thanks...will pm u 
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks