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                                                CHAPTER 12: THE DEMAND

As promised abhay comes to pia's room at night. Pia runs directly into his arms. Abhay kisses pia's cheek. Pia is very happy to see her love...life wid her again. Its only been hours since abhay was away and it felt like ages for pia.

A: miss u already

P: love u

A: as if I don't knw...so wat u want to do tonight?

P: what can we do?

A: anything!!

P: anything?? Seriously?? U sure about that??

A: pia!! Don't!!

P: abhay u love me and so as i...but today I want to knw some serious answers

A: fine

P: today when I was talking wid sid I realized that he was right...i will age and die but u will not. U will always stay frozen at ur age.

A: so?? This is how it has to be..u r human and they age and finally die

P: abhay u knw wat I mean..n I have realized by now wat I want..I want to stay wid u forever..

A: we are together forever

P: no abhay!! I will die..some day nor the other..not of some disaster but of old age. Abhay I want to be like u! I want to be a vampire too!!

Abhay is shocked and frozen. He don't knw wat to tell pia. This will come one day..he knew...but so soon!!

A: u don't knw wat u talking about. I am a monster pia. And u want to be one too.

P: no you are not. Monsters never love anybody. But you do. U are a part of my fairytale.

A: no way pia...tum pagal ho gayi ho...go to sleep pia..no more discussions warna I will leave. Do u want that??

P: no abhay! Stay!!

A: then sleep

Pia is trying to sleep. She has decided what she wants. She will not give up till abhay agrees.

                                     CHAPTER 13: A VISITER

It's a new day. Pia knows that she has to put lots of efforts so that abhay agrees to her demand. Pia leaves for college. But today she is alone. Abhay has gone for hunting.

M: pia kahan thi tum? Abhay kahan hai??

P: he is out. I am alone today

M: fine then chalo mere saath. Tumhe ek bahot badi goss deni hai

P: wat??

M: guess wat?? Kabir and T are couple!! Can u imagine that??

P: ya….its nice

M: pia!! Yeh kaise reaction hai. U seem lost. Sab thik hai na. I mean u and abhay??

P: everything is fine. Bas aaj abhay nhi hai na toh…

M: hmmm….never thought this wud happen

The day was slow for pia. She reaches home. Abhay is waiting there. He seems tensed.

P: kya hua abhay?? Itne tension main kyu ho?

A: yahan koi tha…koi vampire I mean….pata nhi kaun

P: so is it a bad thing?

A: pia someone of our kind…but not raichands was here. But why? Aur who jo bhi tha chupke se aaya aur chala gaya. Pia maine kahan tha kuch bura hone wala hai. I need to protect u…whoever he is..tum par nazar rakhne aaya tha. U need to be careful. Ab I will not leave u alone.

P: fine abhay. Mujhe kuch nhi hoga. Tum ho mere saath. I love u.

Pia hugs abhay. But abhay is tensed want to know who is this new vampire in town.

[back at raichands]

A: mom….pia koi vampire nazar rakh raha hai

H: kaun?

A: pata nhi…I didn't recognize the scent.

C: we need to find out. Its not safe…neither for pia nor for us.

S: abhay…relax…pia ko kuch nhi hoga…hum hai na

A: thanks bro

H: v need to find out. Abhay you must have got the scent for us… show us

Abhay gives a piece of cloth which the visitor had touched containing his scent. All the raichands try to figure out but no use. All efforts go in vain. Abhay still tensed know that something is surely gonna happen. He has sensed it already. They all have to be prepared. Something is coming up. Its only matter of time.

Originally posted by: renuka1997

lovely update

im waiting for the twist in the story

thnx for the pm

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu

wow u finally updated after so long. 

it was very nice. 

looking forward to action now.