Painful Rapture thread 1 chap-1 ~p 1~ 37 - Page 16

Posted: 12 years ago

oh you ve updated but u didnt pm πŸ˜”

but glad to see such a long update...will read and edit my comment soon :-)
Posted: 12 years ago
@ hellooo listen did send you pm please check your pm inbox now thre should be tree in thre from me ..pm reply plezzze.hammie
Posted: 12 years ago
RES...as soon as I can, I will coment on all of ur ff...ufff Junes nearly ending and I have barely commented on any1's ff :(
waise, even if from now on I stop commenting, I am still reading...mujhe pm karna mat bhoool na Hamlet :D
Posted: 12 years ago
What a fantastic update HamletπŸ‘πŸΌ.

Thank you for bringing out so many facets of Major Dutta--- Dutta  the passionate lover, Dutta the perfect Officer and gentleman, Dutta the energetic child full of mischief, Dutta the petulant man/child in the ambulance,  Dutta the possesive yet vulnerable lover, Dutta the best friend...I could go on..basically Major Dutta the Complete Man😍

Thanks for the pm. Looking forward to the next update.

Wish we could watch Mishal enact this episode😍
Posted: 12 years ago
hey!a lovely update loved the romance scene btw tasha and the dutta is getting attracted towards her and getting habitual for her ,thanks for pm and a lovely long update ,hope next one will be soon.thank u and update soon.
do add some more such scenes btw tasha ,looks like aayi saheb wants dutta to marry nakku hopefully make this happen soon.😊
i felt dutta was quite rude towards nakku in last para and also very harsh i want him to apologise to nakku and may plan something romantic like a candlelight dinner or red roses☺️,please show this dutta and also act possessive on seeing her with someone else and  to make her his compleltly agree to marry her asap.please try to add these things in your ff and update soon.πŸ˜›
Edited by krishaa - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
What an update hammie...dil khush ho gaya :-)
from start till the end it was brilliant throughout :-)
 
finally Dutta discharged from that hospital...im sure that everyone is gonna remember this patient forever...such a difficult guy to handle...hehe...and wow...hes generous wid his smiles last day towards the ladies...they must be surprised...and dutta in his black pathanis *let me imagine * 😍...not to blame those who were drooling...its all his killer looks fault πŸ˜ 
 
But what is wid his obsession towards rascal...hes crazy for it...glad that the doctors mentioned that hes not supposed to get attached wid it...get rid of it soon major !!!...
 
what a grand welcome he received...reminded me of that scene where in LTL he came back wid naku after anna encounter...one of the best phase of LTL...and the way u ve mentioned all the  details...that golden plate of patil niwas...spacious hall...his red  sofa...ahhh...i miss that place a lot :-(
 
ahmmm...ahmmm...what a killer scene b/w dutta n naku...😳...it was too hot...waiting for more such encounters b/w them...that too in the next update :-)
 
the last scene made me all smiles...in fact i had a big grin throughout...naku dancing on an item number...lol...
and dutta not letting her perform n not even allowing her to go to clg...hmmm...possessive Major πŸ˜‰...do highlite this side more :-)
 
and yayyy aye saab has noticed that his sons iraday are no more naik...πŸ˜†...
do update soon...waitning eagerly
and as far as pm was concerned ...no pal i ve checked my whole inbox...i didnt receive it :-(
but the update was awesome...i want to read more rite now 😊😳
 
Posted: 12 years ago
My dearest Hammie,πŸ€—
I am awed after reading this update.. It took me quite a while to read ur update coz i did not want to rush through it.. I wanted to feel the essence of each and every emotion you had penned down.
I just cant explain how I loved it to the bits.
It had almost all the elements of  human behaviour-pride, dignity,  integrity, romance, humour, love, jealousy, hurt..πŸ‘

While leaving the hospital dutta was a proud soldier who was being escorted by his fellow soldiers with pride and honour.I loved the way they saluted his dignity such is his clout! I have always been in awe of these soldiers and their mannerism. Even though they are in the hospital getting treated for their injuries from the front they still have that valour and vivaciousness.. Dutta is a symbol of valour and vivaciousness.
dutta in black pathani! me drooling..😍.. i am πŸ€’
haila! 😲yeh kya Nakku  didnt accompany him to the way home  .. bechare patil sahab and his shattered dreams..πŸ˜†

The tumult of emotions shadowing him when he reached PN was so apt to his character.. I mean he is so much in love with his family that this was so much expected on his part. But being a solider he knows very well how to hold his tears back..
OMG I was  almost dead after reading the D&N scene.. he is deadly naughty.. ahhh he wants to show a bit of his muscularity to her hhehe😳 i read it 2wice.. i thought i will die of blushing..He didnt even admit his love to her yet and he has already started titillating her..he is too smart☺️
But what I loved about him is he maintained his integrity even at the time of high flow of emotions and desires.. he didn't drown into his desire.. he knew she too wanted it an she would never stop him but out of the respect he has for women in his heart he did not give into the temptations of having her.Although she is his and he doesn't doubt it a bit but he wants to give her and their relationship the respect they deserve. Right thing at right time..😳 πŸ˜‰Man of honour he is!πŸ‘

I start bushing even if i think about that scene.. aww how i love him is yet to be discovered β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜

Dinner time was another fab scene.. "ankho hi ankho main ishara ho gaya" and the cherry on the top is AS ko bhi ishara ho gaya as to what dutta is uptoπŸ˜†..
Oh boy! loved that line"i know what u have been upto with ur lover boy!"πŸ˜† that makes me think has he admitted to himself that he indeed is a lover boy.. πŸ˜‰
ohh dear! nakku dancing on husn ke lakh rangπŸ˜†.. i can imagine dutta's madness..πŸ˜†
jal kar rakh ho gaya...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
but then he was very rude with her.. she is madly in love with him that doesn't give him the right to hurt her with his piercing taunts.πŸ˜• i could feel the hurt nakku must have been thought when he said those words to her.. i want him to apologise for his behaviour.. woh pyar karti hai uska matlab yeh nai hi he treats her like trash..😑
all in all a mind blowing, fantastic update..πŸ‘ u are a β­οΈ
waiting for the next update as the precap sounds so tempting.. i wish I didn't have to wait for the next update.. but then I m pretty sure the wait is gonna be worth!
love xxx subi



Edited by Subii - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
hi😭 listen yaar  everybody! my laptop battery and  charger are bust! I have read and smiled through the comments waise rona zayda ah raha hai...this is aborrowed laptop... am desperate to reply to your comments... soooyou guys want him to say sorry now come on would he really do that? and would she really want that... ..i dont want to stop now...I'LL TRY IF I CAN BORROW THE LAPTOP AGAIN...
LOVE YOU LOADS BOHOOO! A VERY DISGUSTED HAMLET i'eve only done two paragraphs of chapter 8 and they are still on my laptop...i should have saved it on usb.grrr  see you latersss
Posted: 12 years ago
plz update soon ,waiting 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
baachna aye hasoono lo mein ah  geyha...  yess my beauties    Major Dutta  is back in action!   ... borrowed lap top  command centre se lay laeya hai after all me fauji  no ordinary guy
 gosh missed you my pretties... was begginning to have withdrawl symptoms... now  tell me who wants a long update and who wants a short one?  Dutta ka long update tu never ending hai haaa..
 ohhh its sooo good to talk to you all... pun sona gets the Dutta hug for calling on Dutta first!   xxx hammie

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